Your Iconic Valentine

Your Iconic Valentine

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

She speaks like Thunder and sings like Rain... 

There is Lightening in her Smile and a 

Rainbow in her Eyes... 

Whenever the Wind passes through her Hair 

the Flowers bloom without a Care... 

She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of 

Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... 

© 2024 Patricia Wedel


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There is a combination of daring and wistfulness in your Valentine poem, dear Pat. Especially smiled and nodded at -

'She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of
Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... '

You have a wise perspective of Woman when she needs show both femininity AND determination !

(Sorry to have missed this great poem on the day, Pat.)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

dearest Em... let us begin the Beguine as Romance is discovered among the Ripples of Anticipation..... read more



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Dear Pat,

She's the Valentine most Divine. Her spirit is pure and her heart is love. Her voice is strong. With your words you give her such a beautiful form.

💐🙋‍♀️❤️

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Months Ago

dearest Divya.... lovely to feel your presence. with Romantic overtures. We still have the Arts an.. read more
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mou
In some poems, women define beauty and sometimes, mystery defines women. And you show how these two can walk in parallel!
- mou

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

5 Months Ago

dearest mou... beauty and mystery is the sum total of a Woman... Thank you for your words. gently, .. read more
oh the beauty and mystique of a woman and her nature, this is the heartbeat of every woman. The opening lines are fantastic!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

dearest Patricia... we were created to be Vulnerable.
The Art of Romance dances in our Dre.. read more
This is an amazing poem written with comparison between nature and her beauty. I love that she has a mischievous side and is distracted by its wink

Ah I see this is the second time I have read this. I’m glad I did.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

Thank you Beauty... there is a fire within that is touched by tenderness. softly, Pat
Definitely an iconic Valentine...

My fav lines "She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of

Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... "

What a lovely poem. 💜💜
-Amy

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

dearest Amy... as Summer begins her Blast of Romance... we will enjoy the Dance along the shore of i.. read more
Amy R

7 Months Ago

Oh lovely, 😊😊
Iconic and poetic. Sure to strengthen the vulnerable.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

dearest Sami... the Strong winds will give us strength to Sail the Seven Seas of Romance and Love. .. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

Wow! So true and well said. You are welcome Patricia Wedel.
There is a combination of daring and wistfulness in your Valentine poem, dear Pat. Especially smiled and nodded at -

'She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of
Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... '

You have a wise perspective of Woman when she needs show both femininity AND determination !

(Sorry to have missed this great poem on the day, Pat.)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Months Ago

dearest Em... let us begin the Beguine as Romance is discovered among the Ripples of Anticipation..... read more
Ideally iconic valentine write. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dear Sky… lovely to read your review. ❤️ Love is a feathery feeling that leaves us like the S.. read more
Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Months Ago

So true Pat. Love is awesome!
Gorgeous! Written with class and true persuasion. You are an iconic writer with the right tonic.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dear Sami… when Cardinals and Valentines appear while Snow is falling in February… We hold Lover.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

Keep us charmed and wanting more. You are welcome Patricia Wedel.
A beautiful portrayal and use of imagery painting the capriciousness of mother nature, my true love. Beautifully worded and well organized.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dearest Soren… Red Cardinals and ❤️ Hearts become a Valentine Cliche … you have gathered the.. read more

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