When Sunsets Rest on the Breast of Humanity

When Sunsets Rest on the Breast of Humanity

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Prayers fold their Wings and sigh silently... 

as Apricot and Golden shades become a Curtain  

that closes and becomes Embers of Deeds and Creeds... 

The Evening Star keeps Vigil as Eagles nest in Reverence 

for Mankind on Clouds of Destiny where Countries compose 

the Music of the Night that inspires the Rising of the Sun... 

 

© 2024 Patricia Wedel


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beautiful words and colors as usual Pat, and a lovely time to pray for peace in this chaotic world....that evening star watches over us and all the creatures you mention in a very serene poem...those songbirds of night inspire the dawn to embrace all of us....
Warmly, B

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dearest Betty… the Artists and Musicians will orchestrate a Symphony in Melodies of Reconciliation.. read more
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

Same to you dear Pat!
Warmly. B



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Beautiful and serene. I really like the imagery you use to illustrate twilight's transition and the rising of dawn. Nice use of colours

Posted 5 Months Ago


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mou
Your words have a soothing effect. A beautiful allegory. It is a kind of poetry that I'd like to read silently at me time!
-mou

Posted 7 Months Ago


your poem creates a serene picture and calming heart for me, Ms. Pat ... i especially appreciate the Apricot/Golden curtains .. beautiful!
E.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Whoeeee! A most majestic declaration of humanity and its travails, its hopes and aspirations. You are inspiring us to be better, to embrace reverence for innocent lives lost, to soar like Eagles.
Thank you for raising your voice.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Lovely poem Pat but I do think man has more of a Move over approach. Has man lost his humanity I wonder.

Posted 9 Months Ago


beautiful words and colors as usual Pat, and a lovely time to pray for peace in this chaotic world....that evening star watches over us and all the creatures you mention in a very serene poem...those songbirds of night inspire the dawn to embrace all of us....
Warmly, B

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dearest Betty… the Artists and Musicians will orchestrate a Symphony in Melodies of Reconciliation.. read more
Betty Hermelee

9 Months Ago

Same to you dear Pat!
Warmly. B
Sunrise is full of promise for the new day. We need new days with new thinking Sadly peace is far from the minds of a few, who make hell on earth for many. Hoping for miracles dear Pat. Thank you for your poetic soul.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dear Chris… if only we could put these Immigrants to Work on a Farm and build their homes 🏡 an.. read more
Chris Shaw

9 Months Ago

We have exactly the same problems on this side of the pond. Seems like a virus:(


as refreshing as a breath of fresh air just before setting off for work on a cold crisp mane .. and oh' so slowly .. Neville


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Months Ago


mane does mean morning its polar opposite being nocte .. do you mean amen or our men .. shee.. read more
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Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

I just learned that Nocte is a Hypnotic that effects part of the Brain before Surgery… also. Dr. .. read more
nicely done again Pat
I hope mankind clues in before there is no one to enjoy the rising sun
Here, it is cold, cold these days with winter having its way
Hope all goes well

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dearest Dave… we are on the same page this Morning … perhaps almost four inches of Snow will be .. read more
Dave Brown

9 Months Ago

yes I hope this does not start a president
Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

How soon we forget that so many cross the Border without accounting .... are given the "Right to Vot.. read more
I have read some bitter works tonight. Your peaceful poem of hope provided a respite. Thanks

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Months Ago

dear John… it is a Gift to
Know that my Poem made you feel Hopeful. Softly, Pat

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