'dear Folks... When Autumn becomes colors of melancholy and the Green Forest becomes illuminated ... the Wise Owl sees the Man in the Moon...
the Author, Pat'
Seems you have gifted your admiring reviewers to two poems today.. many thanks for sharing yet more of your dream-like panoramas, dear lady.
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1 Year Ago
dearest Em... my muse ran off with Peter Pan and now you have rescued me. Being an Artist is Panaor.. read moredearest Em... my muse ran off with Peter Pan and now you have rescued me. Being an Artist is Panaoramic with orchestrated Madame Butterfly Blues. Hugs and purple pansy thoughts. gently, Pat
1 Year Ago
Madame Butterfly offers beautiful sounds to sway to, Pat - especially with Peter Pan as partner. But.. read moreMadame Butterfly offers beautiful sounds to sway to, Pat - especially with Peter Pan as partner. But then, music, including the blues, opera and all else is such a wonderful cure - we know that only too well. Love the thought of purple pansies swaying in a kiss-gifted breeze, dusk illuminated, of course. xx
1 Year Ago
dearest Em... it is that time of Year when Pumpkins glow even in the Sun... and Pansies become Fair.. read moredearest Em... it is that time of Year when Pumpkins glow even in the Sun... and Pansies become Fairies that hide beneath Chrysanthemums... Yes, Peter Pan never wanted to grow up... and Tinker-belle lives on... with Courage... my friend. softly, Pat
Do any of us ever want to completely grow up.. OR is it that some never do any way! xx
1 Year Ago
dear Em... when we moved to our present home almost six years ago, I said, "God planted us where we .. read moredear Em... when we moved to our present home almost six years ago, I said, "God planted us where we would Grow." It is true... and when it Snows, the crystals will shine like like twinkling Stars... my friend. Pat xx
1 Year Ago
You end comment in your last message is BEAUTIFUL, dear Pat!!!
Indeed you persuade the reader to tune into the orchestral symphony through such vivid descriptive narrative in this poem. Cojouring up these vignettes to describe the music is a fine art.
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1 Year Ago
dear John... your review is so Fine and charming too. Please forgive me for being confused. Tomorr.. read moredear John... your review is so Fine and charming too. Please forgive me for being confused. Tomorrow is another day.. my friend... I will be back after a long Nap. truly, Pat
1 Year Ago
Ah tis but a slip between cup and lip! Sleep well.
I just had a duh moment Patricia, when I pictured you with a broomstick, dancing as you swept leaves from your path, until I realised it was the leaves dancing on the breeze! 😊
In my defence, it has just past midnight here and perhaps its not quite the right time to be reviewing.
But it was fun to think of you as a cartoon character dancing with the broom that somehow had better moves than I ever could! 😊
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1 Year Ago
dearest Lorry... I do dress like Autumn Leaves and love to dance with the Breeze. I sweep Cobwebs f.. read moredearest Lorry... I do dress like Autumn Leaves and love to dance with the Breeze. I sweep Cobwebs for Halloween and love Candy Kisses for Trick and Treat. Aways enjoy your Visits . tenderly, Pat
Dear Pat, your beautiful images of the natural world take your readers to a place, away from the horrors of what is unfolding elsewhere in the world. For that I am truly grateful. You create paintings with your words. I wish all the best to you both and hope all is as well as it can be. Music and poetry are lifesavers to many.
Chris
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1 Year Ago
dearest Chris... your generous review has me in a World of unfortunate events... whereupon-- I lean .. read moredearest Chris... your generous review has me in a World of unfortunate events... whereupon-- I lean on the everlasting Arms of Angels like You. Roger and I are experiencing enough medical situations to become "home hermits". It is true that Poetry is very Healing. May your days be Sunny with lavender blues. tenderly, Pat
Sorry to hear that Pat. You are both in my thoughts. Take good care of yourselves.
1 Year Ago
It has been, time and again, the serene brevity of your verses that speak volumes, as it is with thi.. read moreIt has been, time and again, the serene brevity of your verses that speak volumes, as it is with this delightful piece.
I read your comments in reply to Ms. Shaw, and I can only echo her comment in reply. Poetry is a healing balm to both spirit and soul.
1 Year Ago
Yes, dear Poet... iT is mysterious when our Muse opens a door To discover the beauty of a Rose. sof.. read moreYes, dear Poet... iT is mysterious when our Muse opens a door To discover the beauty of a Rose. softly, Pat
Nice images presented here where the visual becomes auditory and emotion drives reality. Yes I have not found the answer to the riddle yet. Nicely done
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dear Soren... I changed the Title to Fiddles and Fox Trots; however the Riddle has not been solved. .. read moredear Soren... I changed the Title to Fiddles and Fox Trots; however the Riddle has not been solved. The Best of Autumn days to you and yours. softly, Pat
'dear Folks... When Autumn becomes colors of melancholy and the Green Forest becomes illuminated ... the Wise Owl sees the Man in the Moon...
the Author, Pat'
Seems you have gifted your admiring reviewers to two poems today.. many thanks for sharing yet more of your dream-like panoramas, dear lady.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
dearest Em... my muse ran off with Peter Pan and now you have rescued me. Being an Artist is Panaor.. read moredearest Em... my muse ran off with Peter Pan and now you have rescued me. Being an Artist is Panaoramic with orchestrated Madame Butterfly Blues. Hugs and purple pansy thoughts. gently, Pat
1 Year Ago
Madame Butterfly offers beautiful sounds to sway to, Pat - especially with Peter Pan as partner. But.. read moreMadame Butterfly offers beautiful sounds to sway to, Pat - especially with Peter Pan as partner. But then, music, including the blues, opera and all else is such a wonderful cure - we know that only too well. Love the thought of purple pansies swaying in a kiss-gifted breeze, dusk illuminated, of course. xx
1 Year Ago
dearest Em... it is that time of Year when Pumpkins glow even in the Sun... and Pansies become Fair.. read moredearest Em... it is that time of Year when Pumpkins glow even in the Sun... and Pansies become Fairies that hide beneath Chrysanthemums... Yes, Peter Pan never wanted to grow up... and Tinker-belle lives on... with Courage... my friend. softly, Pat
Do any of us ever want to completely grow up.. OR is it that some never do any way! xx
1 Year Ago
dear Em... when we moved to our present home almost six years ago, I said, "God planted us where we .. read moredear Em... when we moved to our present home almost six years ago, I said, "God planted us where we would Grow." It is true... and when it Snows, the crystals will shine like like twinkling Stars... my friend. Pat xx
1 Year Ago
You end comment in your last message is BEAUTIFUL, dear Pat!!!
The Magic Flute enchants Vienna... while Autumn leaves fall softly. Thank you Jacob... wishing you .. read moreThe Magic Flute enchants Vienna... while Autumn leaves fall softly. Thank you Jacob... wishing you a lovely Overture played with Violins. gently, Pat
dear Folks... When Autumn becomes colors of melancholy and the Green Forest becomes illuminated ... the Wise Owl sees the Man in the Moon...
the Author, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..