Rain for Forlorn Lovers

Rain for Forlorn Lovers

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

On a Hot Dry Day 

All the Petals were drooping 

When the Rain Came by... 

A Cloud Burst appeared 

Blue Birds sang "Misty"  

A Song sung by Johnny Mathias... 

I get Misty just thinking of You ... 

© 2023 Patricia Wedel


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Rain is wonderful when it arrives after a period of sustained dryness. It weaves its magic spell and replenishes everything anew. It is no surprise that even the Bluebirds rejoice in its arrival and burst into song. Misty is a lovely song for them to sing, too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Makhabat. so refreshing to read your Review… I really miss seeing a Rainbow 🌈 this Summer;.. read more
melvin james

1 Year Ago

nicely written and very touching;



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I've no doubt those petals revived anew when the rains came and rejoiced along with the Bue Birds gliding down on the misty notes. Peaceful and hearing Johnny bringing it.

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Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear C. M. The Misty days of Summer are kissed with memories .. thank you for leaving Petals of fal.. read more
It’s that song again. And beautiful it is too. It sounds as though you have hot weather Pat.Those drooping flowers need a drink. Rainfall is welcome, but not too much. We have had a couple of bursts of excessive rain. Too much for the gutters. Came through the bathroom ceiling. A mild inconvenience to what some in the world have to endure. Have a wonderful new week.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Chris… so sorry about the Rain and your gutters causing the bathroom ceiling to leak. We .. read more
Beautiful, love it, Patricia. So perfect for the hot and rainy weather we've been having here lately.

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Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Light… I ❤️ your charming review… Misty has always been a favorite Song for me… fo.. read more
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

It's always a pleasant day when I get to hear from you, Pat. Thanks for your love and kindness.
Johnnny Mathias, I know I am fine didn’t feel bad about misty.. but glad you called the name Mathias I love the lady for they adore me so much, the father S, loves me since long the A… I know.

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Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Jessy… have a lovely day… softly, Pat


.............. how very lovely Pat & true ... and gently too .. bless you :)

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Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Like a Kitten up a Tree… I feel Misty thinking of you..,
I love the song Misty. You create amazing vision of weather and flowers. Thank you dear Pat for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear John… it seems that the Song 🎶 Misty is one of the Best Emotional Songs ever composed by a.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I agree dear Pat. One of the great songs.
dear folks… we are having unexpected thunder storms… it seems that the Heavens are aware that we need Help to Survive.. especially Rain … the Author, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago



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