Rain for Forlorn Lovers

Rain for Forlorn Lovers

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

On a Hot Dry Day 

All the Petals were drooping 

When the Rain Came by... 

A Cloud Burst appeared 

Blue Birds sang "Misty"  

A Song sung by Johnny Mathias... 

I get Misty just thinking of You ... 

© 2023 Patricia Wedel


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Rain is wonderful when it arrives after a period of sustained dryness. It weaves its magic spell and replenishes everything anew. It is no surprise that even the Bluebirds rejoice in its arrival and burst into song. Misty is a lovely song for them to sing, too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Makhabat. so refreshing to read your Review… I really miss seeing a Rainbow 🌈 this Summer;.. read more
melvin james

1 Year Ago

nicely written and very touching;



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Patricia,

I enjoyed this little piece of Poetry that brought two memorable things to mind: How wonderful a cooling rain does feel on a hot summer day ... And to relate to someone who actually knows who Johnny Mathis is and was ... Next thing you know, we'll be conversing about Nat King Cole ...

Marve

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful lines. Enjoyed reading 🙂

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nicely done with beautiful imagery. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Sharon.. thank you for your charming review… we have a lot of Misty Rain.. so special for .. read more
I get misty and the tweltfh of never
we're my faves by Johnny Mathis
what a smooth heavenly voice he had
this poem brings back sweet memories
of rainy nights & misty afternoons
Beautifully penned dear poet...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Fran… the simple love ❤️ songs stole our 💜 Heart. Thank you for your Warm review. .. read more
One finds such a beautiful, bittersweet wonder in your words of love and rain... the joy and life that rise when music whispers light over lovers. So perfect for this hot dry day. ✨

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Owl 🦉… “when music 🎶 whispers light over lovers” can cast a Spell.. so special to r.. read more
...all the world loves a lover... even the blue birds 🐦

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Cherrie... blue birds appeared on Valentines Day this year... about five or so were setting .. read more
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

I am always amazed at how simple joys can feed the soul so completely.
I could smell the rain as I read this. The thought of such rain dancing down around me as warmer weather approaches is a dream. The singing birds bring a smile of warmth.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Troy... I appreciate your endearing review. We have needed Rain this spring and summer... a.. read more
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Rain is wonderful when it arrives after a period of sustained dryness. It weaves its magic spell and replenishes everything anew. It is no surprise that even the Bluebirds rejoice in its arrival and burst into song. Misty is a lovely song for them to sing, too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Makhabat. so refreshing to read your Review… I really miss seeing a Rainbow 🌈 this Summer;.. read more
melvin james

1 Year Ago

nicely written and very touching;
The rain was such a blessing on the hot, dry day. It saved the petals and also invoked such passion in a lover's heart. The concluding line took my breath away. Loved the beauty you shared, Dear Pat.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Divya... you always bring hope and beauty to my Life. When flowers bloom... humming birds s.. read more
Poem and content are lovely and refreshing. I like Johnny Mathis. Will check on the song. God has showered you with many talents.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Sami... you are a Saint of Summer flowers... bringing Hope to even Violets... be blessed as .. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Wow! You are welcome Patricia Wedel.

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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