Dreams settling on flowers

Dreams settling on flowers

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Nectar of flowers becomes the honey of Bumble Bees ...

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Butterflies arrive when Sunshine opens 

buds on delicate stems of Serendipity... 

A vintage Rose sparkles with Dew as 

tiny fledglings break out of shells and  

tiny wings fly furiously about the garden... 

Baby bluebirds with peach-like chests 

become enchanted with delicate 

damsels in distress ... Sipping the 

nectar of Dalias and buttercups...  

© 2023 Patricia Wedel


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everything sparkles in this poem, the birds that play tete a tete with each other and the blossoms that fill out to fully to become a world of color...very delicate and lovely as usual....to me it's like a painted spring canvas...hope all last throughout the summer.
Truly,
B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Dearest Betty… love the way Birds play tête a tete with each other … thanks for adding brush s.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

of course, I'm a painter...love the sparkles
And you're very welcome dear Pat
Truly,read more



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Your poem was absolutely breathtaking! I loved the way you described the beauty of nature in such a vivid and detailed way. It was like I could see the butterflies and flowers in my mind's eye. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with the world!

Posted 1 Year Ago


I just love this line:
Baby bluebird with peach-like chests
become enchanted
with delicate damsels in distress"
Such lovely imagery. Enchanting indeed.



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Dear Andra… when damsels are in distress… they need to behold baby Bluebirds to become a recipie.. read more
A beautiful and wonderful poem for late Spring. This is my second years using bird feeders dear Pat. I am getting new visitors now. I do like the blue birds. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear John… Congratulations on having Bird Feeders. It is a wonderful Treat to watch the Birds tea.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I agree dear Pat. I do like the birds singing in the early morning.
I think eternal spring flows in your veins. You always write so beautifully of the season, leaving us all thirsty for more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Linda… the gentleness of flower petals caress our Soul… and Bees become our pollinators .. read more
Such a beautiful story of birds, butterflies and flowers. The fledglings bring hope and the flowers feed and protect them. A garden is so full of love, beauty and hope. Wonderfully written, dear Pat. ❤

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear DIVYA… as Butterflies smile when birds and bees 🐝 dream of a scented lavender breeze… th.. read more
Ayvid N

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the beautiful words and wishes, dear Pat. I had a safe flight and landed softly as a b.. read more
everything sparkles in this poem, the birds that play tete a tete with each other and the blossoms that fill out to fully to become a world of color...very delicate and lovely as usual....to me it's like a painted spring canvas...hope all last throughout the summer.
Truly,
B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Dearest Betty… love the way Birds play tête a tete with each other … thanks for adding brush s.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

of course, I'm a painter...love the sparkles
And you're very welcome dear Pat
Truly,read more
This is such a beautifully drawn scene Pat, so serene, so peaceful and I love how you depict the rise of the day with those lovely butterflies arriving.

This is so very charming.

Beccy. X

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Becky… yes, butterflies 🦋 become more meaningful as the Seasons come and go. May your .. read more
Wonderful. Simple enchantment to start the day.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Cherrie… enchantment is a state of Peace that Nature bestows. I appreciate your presence. s.. read more
You invisibly paint your lovely words on your reviewers' minds, Pat, leaving the calmest, yet most colourful picture. Many thanks yet again for your incredible gift, dear lady.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Emmajoy… I adore your review. The Birds and Bees seem to love 💗 love a flower garden �.. read more
Oh my dear Patricia, what a lovely poem to read here, early this morning.
I love all of it. But these words sing out to me.

Baby bluebirds with peach-like chests

become enchanted with delicate

damsels in distress ... Sipping the

nectar of Dalias and buttercups...

I am typing with my left finger because a few days ago I fell in our kitchen on our terra cotta floor carrying a tray of hot cheese appetisers from the oven and l...broke my clavicle and got second degree burns on my back..not fun..
Lisa

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

We are hoping for rain...I have about 200 succulents and cactus plated plus, scattered throughout a .. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Lisa… Iris are Gorgeous… like Ladies dressed for a Ball in the 17th Century. Your garden w.. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

So sweet…
Thank you

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Added on April 29, 2023
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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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