Spring Buds and and stormy skies

Yesterday was Stormy as a Mother giving Birth... 

Today was Calm as a Mother nursing her Baby.  

The Night has fallen  upon the Earth ... 

Venus the Evening Star sings a Lullaby.

Mother Moon is full and Blue as Bells Chime 

and Dreams come true as the Cradle rocks... 

 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

I love the comparisons of weather. Rough and calm to birthing and then to. Have infant cradles in mother’s arms….with soft chimes to for baby’s slumber…”.Venus.sings a lullaby “……perfect wordage to pitray this beautiful scene.
Lovely dear Pat
Best, Bh

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty… poetry and reviews harmonize as do the wind and rain…
Be blessed Betty dear… hugs. Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome dearest Pat!
Best to you always!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Lovely poem. Great examples especially of birth and nursing type of weather. I like the feel of the whole poem. And smiled at the mention of Venus too. Jupiter was up there too, it was smaller because it's further away. I was Looking up at the night some days ago as a third star appeared to be slowing moving. I was like, 'oh, it's a plane. ' tyfs

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cyprian… your review is phenomenal as we experience the changes throughout each season. Have you heard the Artist Train sing 🎶 Jupiter in her Hair (about his Mother who passed and what she surely experienced…) .. the most tender poem for his own Mother who passed much too Soon).

[Dave Brown]

you always manage to create so much using so few words
We have spent much time recently going through the giving birth turmoil scenario, however it finally looks as tho' we have entered the nursing stage.
Hopefully, we can all now enjoy those evening star's lullabies

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dave… lovely to know my poem blends in with Life as it unfolds every day. Spring will find us breathing
In the Scents from long a-go,,, Amen.

[emmajoygreen]

These words are charmingly, sensitively original. Each phrase creates a different colour and shape from the norm and makes the reade - this reader, stop and feel what you're telling. You set the bar very high with this poem, Pat, and you reached the very top. Thank you for guiding me into a new day.. even tho' snowy and cold! God bless, take care, keep safe.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Em… wow… your Teview is a gift beyond compare. It is about three am Thursday no morning … Be safe and stay Warm while it Snows. Love and hugs, Pat

[emmajoygreen]

What an early birdie you are! Expect you have a busy day ahead - you always have had. Hope some time you can close your eyes a while.. if can.

Meant every word, Pat, your words are very special. xx

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Em.. just discovered we may have some snowflakes now in early March… I will believe it when I see the little winter butterflies falling… 💗 Love and blessings… Pat in Virginia USA

[Lisasview]

So sweet to read your lovely words this rather cold, crisp afternoon here in Spain.
I really enjoyed the thoughts...
Lisa

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lisa… so lovely to read your words on this Sunny Sunday morning by the Rappahannock River in Virginia. Someone planted Bamboo which is lovely in the Sunshine. Wish we had Pandas to enjoy the Bamboo. 🫂 hugs and thanks for your Review. Pat

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome..
LIsa

[Laz K.]

all your poems have a calm, soothing, peaceful quality directing the reader's attention to the beauty in the world of nature. it's necessary to have this point of view to balance out the less pleasant aspects of life.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Laz… it is comforting to see Spring buds bursting open on flowering trees here in Virginia. The Crepe Myrtle always appears in July but worth the wait and lasts through August . So thankful that Mother Nature is somewhat predictable. Lovely to read your words. softly, Pat

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Lovely. We went outside to view Venus and Jupiter the last night of February. They were both so bright in the western sky. We've had a day of storms here today but it's warming up to a clear and pleasant weekend. Wishing the same for you, my friend. F.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear friend… we are fortunate to have an upstairs with Bedrooms and large Windows all around to view the Night Sky … for Five years now. The weather has been very Moody; however, Winter 2021 was awesome with Snow storms at Night from our upstairs View. Even Virginia has it’s Moments. Be Brave as our World of Politics weathers the unpredictable insanity… some Good decisions will eventually come to pass. Hopefully, Pat

[John the Baptist]

Well, that's just how the weather is these days. I mean, 80 degrees in February? The last three lines are quite soothing, though.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John.... we all need soothing, and it seems that an early Spring is quite a Tonic. The young flowering Trees are like kids and young people... falling in love with Nature as the blossoms pop up like Leorechauns

[Sami Khalil]

I like the comparison of motherhood and spring; the birth and rebirth cycles are so apt here.
You are springing forth.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami… Spring is a Re-birth of Nature… thank you for your review with the warmth of Spring. dearly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! You are welcome Patty!