Tangerine Sunset Suppers

Tangerine Sunset Suppers

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Once upon a time in late November... 

I remember being with my best friend 

whom is also my Husband of Heroes... 

As we sipped on a Blackberry Apertiff 

we watched the Sun slowly sink beyond 

the Horizon held by a Curtain of Golden dreams.  

The esteem we embrace as the evening sadly 

settles on the movement of Earth and Birds 

cuddle in Nests where feathers keep them warm... 

We contemplate the Progress that Prayers can  

change the evolution of destruction into a place 

for People of every Creed to cultivate a Society of 

like-minded Individuals to Grace our Best Books 

that were written to Reunite A Nation in Peril...  

To this destination... we humbly submit 

our Petition... Amen 

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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It's a birds life innit said the linnet .. caw said the crow, sure is .. the owl nodded wisely in agreement but ever so gently, the blue birds thought he was asleep .. wren the time comes for him to awake and become master of sky, upon quiet velvet wings he shall visit these words and whisper oh' my ........ but ever so gently ............. Neville :)


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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Neville… I am beginning to speak your language… Nature is en tune as we string colored l.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Neville… your review is Adorable and sweet… thank you 🙏… tenderly, Pat



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A lovely poem Pat but is this true I think sipping blackberry aperitif got you both tipsy which lead to the birds and the bees nature trail. Wink wink say no more. Of course I could be wrong!!! A little bird told me.

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Andrew… tipsy turvy like Saturn… smiles .. wink wink (remembering Margie). I appreciate.. read more
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

And to you dear Pat and yours merry Xmas
Beautifully written. Only if we were actually united.

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Kahn… “United we stand; divided we fall”. .. and so forth.
The comfort of long lived love and well read books. They say getting old is not for wimps. Yet there are certain levels of appreciation we will only know if we are fortunate enough to find ourselves in a scene like you describe here.

Thank you for staying this lovely poetry. I enjoyed the moment with your writing.

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Scott… thanks for your words.. you will be in our prayers and thoughts… wishing you a Seaso.. read more


It's a birds life innit said the linnet .. caw said the crow, sure is .. the owl nodded wisely in agreement but ever so gently, the blue birds thought he was asleep .. wren the time comes for him to awake and become master of sky, upon quiet velvet wings he shall visit these words and whisper oh' my ........ but ever so gently ............. Neville :)


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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Neville… I am beginning to speak your language… Nature is en tune as we string colored l.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Neville… your review is Adorable and sweet… thank you 🙏… tenderly, Pat
This is a lovely dream. If only we were united, but the world has never felt more divided to me.
At least in my lifetime. Beautiful poetry

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Cara... starting over is similar to cultivating a Garden... experimenting with Ideas in all .. read more
I think we can have hope that the destruction we now see will resolve in time, perhaps not by prayer alone. We desperately need to come together as one or there will be much turmoil not only in our lifetimes but in future generations. We can still dream and that is comforting....I love the comfort you fine with you fine feathered friends....lovely
Best, B

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Betty... in the past few days we have a Red-breasted Woodpecker on the Railing of our Deck w.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Betty… I meant to say… we have a Red-headed Woodpecker with a Creamy breast with black polk.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Dearest Pat....I always enjoy your poetic words...that draw such vivid imagery...it's music to my ea.. read more
Dear Pat, times change and not always for the better. As we age our dreams may seem out of reach. We have to take the rough with the smooth and place our faith in hope for the future. I find my own comfort in the natural environment and my home but I worry for how my grandchildren will fare in the future. Sadly politicians these days have no backbone and can’t be trusted by the electorate to do what they have promised to do. They seem to have their own agenda. Sending love across the waves and knowing you find comfort in your avian friends. Your poetry is beautiful.

Chris

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Chris… I do see a glimmer of Hope along the way. We have so many Stars to guide our Way�.. read more
hi patricia, what an interesting & unusual poem, a prayer petition!

i particularly like these 2 lines -->>
"we watched the Sun slowly sink beyond
the Horizon held by a Curtain of Golden dreams."

I don't hold out much hope in "change the evolution of destruction", it's been happening for centuries.

thanks for sharing, cheerio carola







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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Carola…. Our Country has been founded in the principles of respect for the people. Because w.. read more
amen ... it is so much more draining to hold on to envy, jealousy, hate, and greed than to do the opposite .. we can start by committing those acts of charity even tho we may not "feel" anything .. it's like exercise ... if we persist in it we will gain the benefit eventually .. your poem creates such a warm, intimate scent and setting for me .. ".....Curtain of Golden dreams" ... your "..Blackberry Apertiff" ...and always your birds, dear Pat ... their nests indeed a place of warmth and comfort .. thanks for sharing my friend
E.

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Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

they are striking creatures ;))))
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Gene… when you said striking creatures… I thought of how in the fifties and before we had t.. read more
Einstein Noodle

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yes! we have Pileated Wood Peckers in our woods here .. they are magnificent .. when I first saw one.. read more
There is something about being still and observant either at sunset or sunrise, allowing the stage lights to dim or begin to focus and illumine, to restore a sense of peace and balance as well as hope that encourages us to reach out and petition far what can still be!

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Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Mr. K… it is beautiful to live in an area where we see a lot of Sky… especially the Sunrise.. read more

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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