Good morning dear Pat,
Awake and up since 4am
Way too much on mind.. now it is 6am
Perfect time to read and review.
Yours being the first.
Such a sweet and lovely poem
Interesting how 3 lines can evoke so many thoughts.
Really enjoyed your words.
Hoping you are both doing well and keeping healthy.
Lisa, awake in Spain
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
dear Lisa.. it is a little past one am here in Fredericksburg, Virginia on the East Coast of the USA.. read moredear Lisa.. it is a little past one am here in Fredericksburg, Virginia on the East Coast of the USA.. just beginning Monday, November 13. I happened to wake up and I discovered your Review. Always a pleasure to read your words. It is chilly these days with a hot Sun… then when the Sun goes down….
Brrrr. Hope you can sleep enough for good health. My husband Roger has Dialysis three days a week for almost five years… so we eat well sand try to sleep enough. Take care… tenderly, Pat 🎹🎼
2 Years Ago
Yes, I do remember you saying that your husband is on dialysis…
Eating properly and sleepin.. read moreYes, I do remember you saying that your husband is on dialysis…
Eating properly and sleeping enough is so important…
Hugs,
L
quite an air born palette you paint for us. you do love those winged darlings. i can hear those strings. sweet lady of verse, i join you in resounding chorus ... :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
dearest Pete… you speak as though you were a Gargoyle in a Great Cathedral.. thank you for reading.. read moredearest Pete… you speak as though you were a Gargoyle in a Great Cathedral.. thank you for reading and making the New Year 2023 an opportunity for knowledge that can Mend the World of turmoil. tenderly, Pat
simple yet elegant. haiku
beautifully rendered in
so few words...which
speak volumes..i enjoyed
well done
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
dearest Fran… my apologies for being late. I cherish your words as though they were a Bouquet of .. read moredearest Fran… my apologies for being late. I cherish your words as though they were a Bouquet of Roses. gently, Pat
Clever title because three lines take you away like the wind. You associate cedars with Virginia. I think Daniel Boone or Davy Crockett was set in Virginia I think.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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1 Year Ago
Hi Andrew… David Crockett represented Tennessee in the U.S. House of Representatives and served in.. read moreHi Andrew… David Crockett represented Tennessee in the U.S. House of Representatives and served in the Texas Revolution. I apologize for taking so long to reply to your amazing review. I live in Virginia, but was born in West Virginia. My husband Roger grew up in Staten Island and went to New York University. I will send you another message about Daniel Boone. As ever, Pat
1 Year Ago
Hi Andrew … Daniel Boone in 1775 made a Path into Kentucky. Virginia also has a lot of History. .. read moreHi Andrew … Daniel Boone in 1775 made a Path into Kentucky. Virginia also has a lot of History. It is so Sad to see our President making decisions that will destroy our Constitution and other Declarations that has been very successful. We do see a glimmer of Hope and Prosperity… We Pray. Thank you for your thoughtful Review. May you be Well and May Fortune smile upon your days. Pat
Good morning dear Pat,
Awake and up since 4am
Way too much on mind.. now it is 6am
Perfect time to read and review.
Yours being the first.
Such a sweet and lovely poem
Interesting how 3 lines can evoke so many thoughts.
Really enjoyed your words.
Hoping you are both doing well and keeping healthy.
Lisa, awake in Spain
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
dear Lisa.. it is a little past one am here in Fredericksburg, Virginia on the East Coast of the USA.. read moredear Lisa.. it is a little past one am here in Fredericksburg, Virginia on the East Coast of the USA.. just beginning Monday, November 13. I happened to wake up and I discovered your Review. Always a pleasure to read your words. It is chilly these days with a hot Sun… then when the Sun goes down….
Brrrr. Hope you can sleep enough for good health. My husband Roger has Dialysis three days a week for almost five years… so we eat well sand try to sleep enough. Take care… tenderly, Pat 🎹🎼
2 Years Ago
Yes, I do remember you saying that your husband is on dialysis…
Eating properly and sleepin.. read moreYes, I do remember you saying that your husband is on dialysis…
Eating properly and sleeping enough is so important…
Hugs,
L
How beautiful it is to associate autumn with violins and brilliant too!
I could picture those birds flying into the fading gold of the sun.
Thank you for sharing such beauty!
dear DIVYA… the sounds of Nature in Autumn are wistful dreams. I appreciate your charming review... read moredear DIVYA… the sounds of Nature in Autumn are wistful dreams. I appreciate your charming review. Walking on a Carpet of Golden Leaves 🍁 touched by Sun and Rain is a Sign of the Divine. Be blessed with a Season of Love ❤️ and Goodwill. gently, Pat
2 Years Ago
Thank you for such wonderful words always, dear Pat. Have a blessed weekend. ❤
2 Years Ago
dear DIVYA… Blessed are the Pure in 💜 Heart…. Peace and Love to you always… Pat
You warm your readers hearts with your natural poetry and bring out the wonder in all of God's creation.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
dearest Sami.. as a child… my family and our Best friends would spend the weekends at the Washingt.. read moredearest Sami.. as a child… my family and our Best friends would spend the weekends at the Washington National Zoo.. we would visit the Bird House and walk all over seeing Animals from all over the World. I believe it influences my Poetry. Thanks Sami for your warm and kind Review. gently, Pat
Amazing use of words dear Pat. You wrote everything necessary and I could hear the violin playing. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
dearest John... you have placed a gold seal on my wee poem... and I will place it on the Thanksgivin.. read moredearest John... you have placed a gold seal on my wee poem... and I will place it on the Thanksgiving list of blessings. gently, Pat
Autumn is my favourite season, even though the wind can get cold at times. A wind that sounds like sweetly played violins is one worth hearing and enduring.
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2 Years Ago
dearest Doodley... thanks for your charming review. This Autumn is particularly poignant with all t.. read moredearest Doodley... thanks for your charming review. This Autumn is particularly poignant with all the confusion of the true meaning of Democracy. Prayers and lighting of Candles to renew our Vision of a Nation with guidance. gently, Pat
What is wind like? It’s like Cedar waxwings flying high; it’s like autumn with a gentle breeze hovering your shoulders, and breeze bringing Melodie’s to our ears…….that is the essence of autumn…..
Best, B.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
dearest Betty… your poetry of Autumn is like Indian Summer where Breezes float over Tee Pees and B.. read moredearest Betty… your poetry of Autumn is like Indian Summer where Breezes float over Tee Pees and Bear Paws 🐾 scamper through the 🍁 Leaves. Many Poems can be written about this time of year. Thanks for leaving your 💕 lovely acorns as they fall gently on my mind. Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..