Hibiscus petals softly feel the Autumn breeze

Hibiscus petals softly feel the Autumn breeze

A Poem by Patricia Wedel


When Hibiscus Petals softly play the chords of Autumn. 
my Heart blossoms to kisses of persuasion placed on 
feathers sweetly spread to feel the warmth of 
falling raindrops of passions gift of Romance... 
Blackberry Merlot Hibiscus Wine will fill your Mind 
with visions of Goblins wandering among the Pumpkins 
smiling with the "glow" of Black Cat eyes and cries 
of screeching Owls on Halloween.  

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


Author's Note

Patricia Wedel
Gather blossoms while you may... the end of Summer days...

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Hibiscus is such an amazing flower!
I loved the visions of those Goblins wandering among the Pumpkins with glowing cat eyes, dear Pat. Having read Enid Blyton voraciously all my childhood, I have developed such a connection with these fairy folk. The Goblins, elvs, brownies and pixies are so pretty.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear DIVYA… I have succumbed to a strawberry blonde Pixie-like haircut and it suits my Moods. Flo.. read more
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

Flowers seduce the Sun when Fairies frolick....I adore that line....Thanks once again for sharing th.. read more



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Hibiscus is such an amazing flower!
I loved the visions of those Goblins wandering among the Pumpkins with glowing cat eyes, dear Pat. Having read Enid Blyton voraciously all my childhood, I have developed such a connection with these fairy folk. The Goblins, elvs, brownies and pixies are so pretty.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear DIVYA… I have succumbed to a strawberry blonde Pixie-like haircut and it suits my Moods. Flo.. read more
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

Flowers seduce the Sun when Fairies frolick....I adore that line....Thanks once again for sharing th.. read more
We just had out first taste of autumn down here in South Texas and believe me, it couldn't have come fast enough. Your poem brings that taste as well, in beautiful colors and poetic fragrances. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Will… Autumn can be a blessing and give us a Pietic view of Life… the more we blend with th.. read more
Very imaginative and full of seasonal colour. A pleasure to read!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



My word, its that time of year again ................... scaringly & beautiful all gently rolled into one :) x

Posted 2 Years Ago


You are gifted in any season and gifting us many things to enjoy. You mix and blend things in marvelous ways to create gentle imagery in our minds .
Happy Autumn 🍂 and happy 🎃.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Sami… Autumn hums with beauty as leaves 🍁 turn bright gold and orange as the setting Su.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! You are welcome Patricia Wedel.
I love the days of Halloween. October is a cool month for the grandchildren and me. I loved the poetry dear Pat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for Halloween.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest John… we have several Rose tinted Orange Pumpkins around our front yard with magenta Chrys.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Hello dear Pat. I decorated a little. We go to Blake Cider Mill in Romeo, Michigan. They create a la.. read more
Where would the birds and the bees be without a bed of flowers. Hibiscus is a tropical flower but grows in temperate regions. I love autumn. My fav flowers for attracting birds are the salvias which flower almost all year through. Pineapple sage is one. Nice write Pat.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Andrew.. thanks for the Tips on flowers… it takes longer to organize a flower garden than to .. read more
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

My fav season.
we are always lovers of flowers and pumpkin pie smothered in whipping cream and this year, because of a major extension of the warm season, we will be enjoying them together.
However, we could use many a-falling raindrop whether filled with passion or not.
As usual your poetic gift is every bit as full of sweet scents as any garden is filled with beautiful sun blessed flowers.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Dave... flowers are very sensitive... they need rain and sunshine with divine guidance. A s.. read more
I've always loved. Hibiscus
flowers and their seed pods
now in autumn for next
year to start anew another
planting...the remains of
summer. gently fading away
you paint a lovely picturesque
scene dear poet..nicely
conveyed in poetic verse

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Fran... Hibiscus is unpredictable; however, you can always depend on their Royal appearance .. read more
A haunting cat with black and and a blissful romance upon the Hibiscus blossoms while drinking a soft Merlot; a bit of Halloween mixed in with the soft rain....the the owls begin to screech...what do you expect??? Typically you dear Pat, just perfect.
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Betty… you are my favorite Trick or Treat when Black Cat eyes Greet the Hallowed Eve.. the.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome!!!
Truly
B

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