I loved the complete poem dear Pat.
"We will discover together the Seven Wonders
Dancing over the Moon where Flowers Bloom...
You, Me and the Man in the Moon..."
The above lines could stand alone. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
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1 Year Ago
dearest John… so glad your liked my Poem.. we are inspired by the Light that keeps us secure even .. read moredearest John… so glad your liked my Poem.. we are inspired by the Light that keeps us secure even during the Phases of the Moon that guide our planting and romancing. I almost missed your charming review. May your Season during Christmas be Bright as the Special Star of Bethlehem. tenderly, Pat
Hi Patricia, your stardust is glimmering in this one:) what a lovely poem it strikes a nice bit of imagery from so few lines:)
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1 Year Ago
dearest Robert… Intrust you are doing better so that Winter will not be so difficult for you. Tha.. read moredearest Robert… Intrust you are doing better so that Winter will not be so difficult for you. Thank you for enjoying my poem about the Moon and Stars…!it is encouraging that some things are still shining as usual… and perhaps we can survive the Madness of Evil 😈 infiltrating the environment and our Countries long-fought Principles that have served us well in spite of Setbacks. Prayers and blessings to you and yours. tenderly, Pat
I love love because it has such strength and stability and yet such enchantment, the ability to create such magic as I read in your words. There is adoration, beauty, magic and fun and everything good here. Love is indeed so wonderful!
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1 Year Ago
dearest DIVYA… I love love your review as I flew around the room like a Butterfly 🦋 sipping nec.. read moredearest DIVYA… I love love your review as I flew around the room like a Butterfly 🦋 sipping nectar. You are a Book with words that defy sadness in shades of Lavender blue. May your days be touched with earthly encounters of passion and flowers in bloom. tenderly, Pat
I'll cherish your special words for me, dear Pat. You are the prettiest of souls I have known here. .. read moreI'll cherish your special words for me, dear Pat. You are the prettiest of souls I have known here. Stay blessed always. ❤
1 Year Ago
dearest DIVYA… now I feel Special… being the “prettiest of souls”… since I am eighty-two y.. read moredearest DIVYA… now I feel Special… being the “prettiest of souls”… since I am eighty-two years old this past April. 💗 lovely to be young at Heart. You are my Gladiola flower that sings in a Choir of gifted Poets. Hugs, Pat
1 Year Ago
Your words will stay with me and make my world brighter always, dear Pat. Took a screenshot and tuck.. read moreYour words will stay with me and make my world brighter always, dear Pat. Took a screenshot and tucked it away in my most treasured album to read on blue, rainy days. You're special to me. ❤
I loved the complete poem dear Pat.
"We will discover together the Seven Wonders
Dancing over the Moon where Flowers Bloom...
You, Me and the Man in the Moon..."
The above lines could stand alone. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
dearest John… so glad your liked my Poem.. we are inspired by the Light that keeps us secure even .. read moredearest John… so glad your liked my Poem.. we are inspired by the Light that keeps us secure even during the Phases of the Moon that guide our planting and romancing. I almost missed your charming review. May your Season during Christmas be Bright as the Special Star of Bethlehem. tenderly, Pat
Stunning poem Pat, I love your words... it is definitely a flight of fancy... dancing on the Rocks of Gibraltar with stardust showing your path of gold....very romantic as well.
Best, B
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1 Year Ago
dear Betty… I adore the way you expressed my poem with romantic overtures… surely there is a roc.. read moredear Betty… I adore the way you expressed my poem with romantic overtures… surely there is a rock n roll band to provide the music 🎶 for provocative moves as thunder and lightening add to the Rendezvous. I was asleep on a Silver-lined Cloud when you posted your fabulous review. I am late to send my apologies. tenderly, Pat
1 Year Ago
No worries ,I always appreciate your reviews whenever they arrive!!!
Truly, B
What a wonderful trip through the light fantastic. The moonlight fantastic that is. Lovely.
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2 Years Ago
dear Fabian… your Review is like a falling Star that I put in my Pocket to save for a Rainy day. .. read moredear Fabian… your Review is like a falling Star that I put in my Pocket to save for a Rainy day. tenderly, Pat
Very romantic and charming, you do have a way with words my friend, as always a pleasure to read such beauty and lighten my mood. May all good blessings come to you and yours. Hugs:)
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2 Years Ago
dearest Patricia… your Review has given me Wings to flutter through the Day and pray for Brighter .. read moredearest Patricia… your Review has given me Wings to flutter through the Day and pray for Brighter Days… tenderly, Pat
When eternity knocks , we should enter with peace and good cheers. The One is waiting to embrace us and tenfold us in love and mercy( His faithful servants).
You write beautifully.
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2 Years Ago
dearest Sami…. There is so much to our Spirits, and when we take our last breath we will enter Par.. read moredearest Sami…. There is so much to our Spirits, and when we take our last breath we will enter Paradise where hearts 💕 are held in Eternity. I appreciate your words. tenderly, Pat
dearest Tate .. lovely to read your words. Poetry is a Blessing during these difficult times. My h.. read moredearest Tate .. lovely to read your words. Poetry is a Blessing during these difficult times. My husband Roger takes dialysis for four years and we enjoy life as much as we can… especially nature and children and their Pets. Grandchildren keep us alert and positive to be good examples for them… so it goes full Circle. I trust you and yours are well. gently, Pat
2 Years Ago
Yeah everything’s OK at the moment I spent the weekend with my grandchildren today is my son’s 2.. read moreYeah everything’s OK at the moment I spent the weekend with my grandchildren today is my son’s 27th birthday
2 Years Ago
Twenty-seven is a turning point for growing up… although still a Pup 🐶 in many ways. My grands.. read moreTwenty-seven is a turning point for growing up… although still a Pup 🐶 in many ways. My grandson is 19 and his sister is 15… Ethan is learning CarMedic from his Dad… and Maddie is signed up for an Entrepreneur Career Scholarship.. Our World is changing… and perhaps eventually for the Better… once We return to our Constitution and Declaration. The huge problem is at the Border and No Accounting. We need a Miracle about Now. gently, Pat
love this...and especially the last line.
as I was reading, I started singing Fleetwood Mac...."if I live to see the seven wonders---the rainbow's end"
j.
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2 Years Ago
dear Jacob… your review is a Delight for my 💜 heart… Fleetwood Mac song Is definitely a Shado.. read moredear Jacob… your review is a Delight for my 💜 heart… Fleetwood Mac song Is definitely a Shadow of a Song 🎶 you sang while reading my Poem. We listened to the Music of “Seven Wonders” that definitely blends with my Poem… a lovely Omen to tuck under your Pillow. Thanks and Pleasant Days… gently, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..