Indigo Buntings and Sunflowers

Indigo Buntings and Sunflowers

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Summer symphonies among the flowers...

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On an overcast day where Crepe Myrtle pray... 
Sunflowers reach for Clouds that float 
in an Ocean of Blue...  
The Breeze becomes the Song of Autumn leaves 
falling like feathers when fledglings fly to 

 Sycamore trees... 
Feeders are full of Sunflower seed where 
Indigo Buntings preen their feathers and 
complain about the Weather... 
After the Rain drops cover the Roses 
 
with Kisses of sweet perfume...  
the Boughs of Nests cradle the Buntings 
in Melodious waves of Summertime Blues... 
 

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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It threw me that the rhyme and meter lasted exactly one line, I was all warmed up to flow with more of it...
In a way, that perhaps made me pay more attention thereafter.
The theme is wonderful and natural and inviting. It makes me think you are a gardener of flowers as well as of words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest softlyfall… discovering a Beautiful Autumn leaf softly falling is a pleasant experience af.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Oh dear… I read your Poem before thanking you for reading my Poem. I suppose they go together a.. read more



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As ever, your wording is unique and forever beautiful. You convert our planet into a palette of colour and scent. Beautiful Love and bestest wishes to both you and Roger. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


This summer is so infinitely beautiful...
Sunflowers gold in a summer blue sky.
How truly magnificent is the sycamore tree that hosts the Indigo Buntings and gives them space to socialize...?
I close my eyes to feel the autumn breeze in your words and I can feel the melodies.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautifully expressed as I fell into the words, especially like the line== After the raindrops cover the roses with kisses of sweet perfume ;-] Lovely write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Willow … thank you for your words that fall gently on my mind with Leaves of magenta and gold.. read more
It threw me that the rhyme and meter lasted exactly one line, I was all warmed up to flow with more of it...
In a way, that perhaps made me pay more attention thereafter.
The theme is wonderful and natural and inviting. It makes me think you are a gardener of flowers as well as of words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest softlyfall… discovering a Beautiful Autumn leaf softly falling is a pleasant experience af.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Oh dear… I read your Poem before thanking you for reading my Poem. I suppose they go together a.. read more
You had me sighing with content by the end of this, Pat. There are few nature poets with your skill. Always so much beauty.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pryde Foltz

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Pat. If you scroll down to the bottom of any of poem and click on a book image, it should ta.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Pryde... Barnes and Noble or Books a Million in Fredericksburg, Virginia (where we live) wil.. read more
Pryde Foltz

2 Years Ago

Lovely snow but quite yet:)
A beautiful poem for the gifts of nature. Tomorrow, me and the grandchildren going to sunflower festival. So cool to fall into the beauty of our world. Thank you dear Pat for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear John… Sunflowers are so Tall and Beautiful… as though they are a Lookout Tower in the Fall .. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

The poem was wonderful dear Pat and the sunflowers fields were beautiful.
This is a beautiful write, enjoyed this

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Writergurl… thank you for your charming review. gently, Pat
"The Breeze becomes the Song of Autumn leaves
falling like feathers when fledglings fly to"
I got very emotional reading this poem. I love the above lines very much. Thanks for sharing it with us Patricia. Wish you the best.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Nima… lovely that Nature can be a part of our Harmony as we go about our everyday tasks… t.. read more
Nima.Hope

2 Years Ago

Thank you Pat for the positive energy you always give to the world around you, may you feel nothing .. read more


This is just sooooooooooooooooooooooooo wondrously & unmistakably Pat Wedel .. I thoroughly enjoyed the visit :) x

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Neville… it is 💗 lovely to know you were touched by my Poem. Keep your Smile and Dream.. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago


................................. ❤️
A Take you to Beauty poem , I really enjoyed reading , Well Done
Have a great week

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Stuart… thanks for your warm review… Autumn is a colorful time to prepare for a change in t.. read more
Stuart Munro

2 Years Ago

Thanks Pat

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Added on August 26, 2022
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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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