Taking Chances

Easy on the Eyes... Creating my Demise...  

I stopped for awhile... He smiled and winked  

His Baby Blues and I knew I would be in His Arms 

before the Sun Set ... knowing that it was written 

in the Stars our lives would be entwined for  

many many Moons... 

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

My hubby has baby blues. Lol, they'll get you every time! Funny, my eyes are different colors, one's blue green and the other is a light brown with a hint of hazel in it, and yet my son's eyes are dark brown. My mom had green eyes and my dad had brown, so I guess it's a mutation of both.

Does your husband read your poetry, and know it was written for him? What a pleasure that must be!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly… I remember you sharing your unusual combination of your eyes… it seems to rhyme with your poetry being just as unusual and beautiful… always that special Kelly magnetism. Yes, Roger does melt when I write poems about his eyes. It is my Cloud of perfect Romance. My 💜 is weeping that you are moving S I know how Sentimental you must be. You will be in my prayers and thoughts. Please keep in touch. Mourning Doves will always be by your Side. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

I read this one again today Pat and just wanted you to know, as it is so close to Valentine’s day what a perfect read it was. Such a romantic write. Must have been love at first sight.

Chris

[AYVID N]

A very romantic interlude...
This is a fairy tale that spanned many many moons and stretches from here into eternity....
He was absolutely gorgeous and so were you.
I am absolutely delighted by this poem, dear Pat,

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest DIVYA… a special chance meeting brought us together… Amazing Grace… thank you for being touched and thereby blessed. gently, Pat

[AYVID N]

You are welcome, dear Pat.
May you be blessed with endless beauty today....

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Oh, love at first sight or love by the starry night. Sometimes the spark is so hot there's bound to a fire raging sooner or later. Here's to the eternal flame of love. I greatly enjoyed the read.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fabian… the blue of the Sky is by far a vision of Love… the sweetness of a Morning Glory. I appreciate your Romantic review. Be blessed with rain drops and sunny smiles. Gently, Pat

[Patricia]

Oh those eyes, those baby blues! I could recite this one to my hubby and his baby blues! Lovely writing my friend! I love this!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Patricia... Eyes are very expressive ... after all they can see every detail of a persons vulnerbility.
I do believe that Lovers can complement each other. I am glad you know the pleasure of being taken by baby blue eyes.

[Neville]

I can feel this Pat .. and I imagine those words written are still out there just waiting for the return of your longing gaze ....................... a soft and gentle scribe indeed :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville… lovely to read your words… this Fourth of July weekend. Our Neighbors have been coloring our Night with Fireworks
Early this Yesr. We are a Nation intent on Celebrating our History… although there are those in Power who are destroying all we have fought and Died for protecting our Country from Tyranny. As always Neville.. be blessed and be Well. tenderly, Pat

[LJ]

A look at the past becomes a fine poem about lasting impressions and the creation of love that lingers. Alliteration and attention to detail are nicely done.
LJ

[Patricia Wedel]

dear LJ… I appreciate your Review… a wonderful way to start my day here in Virginia by the Rappahannock River. We have Bedrooms on a second floor that is nestled a bit in the Trees. We always have a Clear View of the phases of the Moon. I have peeked at your Poetry and will take time soon to Review. I am impressed with your talent. gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice romantic dance in the poetry dear Pat. Would be nice to be brave and have a great adventure. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John... with the Fourth of July almost here... with Colors Bursting in Air... you will be the the Bravest Dancer there... Wishing you a Night of Beautiful Fireworks and a Beautiful Partner to Dance in the Celebration. tenderly, Pat

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Wow a lovely sentimental poem of the beginning of love, though demise dah your lady killer eh. ' Many moons', sounds superb too. Kudos!

Plz check out my two newest poems and also pleez comment on one of those two that you wish to. Thanks

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Zaynab…. Melting like Ice Cream … I became a Sundae for His Sweet Tooth… thanks for stopping by the Oasis…. gently, Pat

[Temperance]

Those baby blues will do it Every time. 😃
Sometimes we just know where an encounter might go. Lovely poem, Pat. Thank you for sharing.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Temp.... I appreciate your charming review. Wishing you Paths of Primrose Gold. gently, Pat

[Temperance]

Thank you. Temp