Swept Away

On the Wings of a Song...

Swept away by your Charms...  

There were no Alarms... only Chapel Bells 

on the Mountain Top where Eagles nest... 

Our Feathers touched when Leonard Cohen sang 

Hallelujah... 

Cedar Waxwings came to Pray as we Lay 

on Morning Sunbeams... 

Their Repertoire was a high, thin "Bzeee" and a 

sighing Whistle... 

as we made Love among the thistle with 

Lavender down... 

A Crown of Mist surrounded the Church Steeple 

in the Valley and Whippoorwills brought 

peaceful Music to the  Choir and Parishioners... 

Amen....  

Reviews

[CD Campbell]

Oh, that's wonderful imagery! If only it could be like that forever and never get dull. Do you think that maybe what heaven could be like? To have that forever feeling of romance and never tire of it? It's a nice thought. Enjoyed this immensely. CD

[Patricia Wedel]

Yes, CD.... we even have a bit of Heaven on Earth from time to time. I believe when we leave this Earth, our Spirit will live on. tenderly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Your poetry is worth its weight in gold. I don't know how you come up with wonderful lines and images, but I believe you were born with that talent. It might be also where you live that gives you lots of inspiration.
Wowzy whooooo!

[Fran Marie]

Their Repertoire was a high, thin "Bzeee" and a sighing Whistle...
another lovely flowing poem
love the thought of everlasting
love in the state of bliss..
beautifully penned my friend

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran. It is interesting that Birds have a distinct sound when they sing 🎶 their lullabies… if only we could sing so freely… lovely to read your review. tenderly, Pat

[Mauricio Montoya]

I don't if this is love but love nevertheless brilliant it's the Ying and the yang always together right or wrong. Thank you for sharing.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Mauricio… love is like a Dove that flies higher than a Sparrow… it drifts on Clouds that scatter Raindrops so fields will flourish … among the Grapes 🍇 on the Vine. May the Wine taste of Berries. Sweetly, Pat

[Mauricio Montoya]

Thank you for sharing with love Mauricio

[Robert Haigh]

A lovely poem, appealing to the romantic side of anyone who has a heart! I enjoyed the read!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Robert… High on a Mountain Top where troubles melt like Lemon Drops… thanks for feeling the ❤️.. Love… softly, Pat

[Dave Brown]

You are so correct that offering poetry is no easy task and, certainly you do have a much different style but that and the subject matter you choose, are more than a pleasant step away from the everyday.
The number of reads and endless positive reactions you receive are a confirmation of your enjoyable offerings
May a waxwing lay away an extra joy for your every day

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Dave… there are many Birds around the World… there must be a Special Place for Sparrows and Sopranos… 🎶.. softly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful, so gentle and so wonderful dear Pat. A beautiful poem for love my dear friend.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John… ❤️ lovely to read your Review.
Hope your Summer is full of Sea breezes.. Be blessed, softly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Pat. I hope you are doing well my friend.

[lightsong]

When we love, we become a part of everything beautiful, first and most Nature. We sweep away with the overwhelming feelings of bliss. This is what You always write about dear Pat. The gentleness of love.

P.S, keep writing as You do, some mistaken constructive criticism to something else. a poet without imagination is nothing.

Amen✨

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest 🎶 song of light… your Review has swept me into the gentle Waves of a Sandy Beach.. The young Gentleman who critiqued my Poem will discover the beauty of Nature and Love… It was fun to respond to a Poet who needs to see the Movie “Shakespeare in Love”… then he also could be a Playwright someday. hugs, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful love poem Pat. I can remember feeling swept away by little kisses on a sunlit Sunday so many moons ago, and when still in my teens :) Love how your lines are interwoven with our avian friends. That just adds to the romance.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris… Romance is lovely when kissed in a Mountain Mist… your review blends with the Chapel bells and all is well. softly, Pat

[Patricia]

Charming Pat, a feathery love story, I love the point of view you have taken with this, so unique and eloquent! Excellent!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Patricia.. you sprinkle love ❤️ poems with feathery feelings and your Wings take you to heights where Eagles nest.. you are blessed. softly, Pat