Venus The Evening Star

Venus The Evening Star

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Mothers love to tuck you under the Covers... 

and tell you stories of fields of Lavender 

where Dreams can be delivered with laughter  

A bruised knee and a Bee sting can be kissed... 

Hearts heaping with Mischeif and Leprechauns 

leaping hither and there in the Clover... 

Whatever the Situation Mothers love is shared. 

Even if Skies are stormy with Thunder   

They will be your Constant Care... 

And when they leave this Beautiful Earth... 

Mothers' Voice will be Heard.  

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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On mother's day, you share some beautiful thoughts here Pat which remind me of the love my own mother had for her five children. Unconditional love in good times or bad, she was there for us. Her loss leaves us rich in memories though sad at heart. Her voice will still be carried in us. I know you wrote this one with your own dearly loved and departed mum in mind. You have shared her with me before. Your lines are full of tender love and emotion.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Chris… your constant caring for all the Poets is a reflection of the Evening Star Venus. .. read more



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This brought me back to childhood and ti the current day. Thanks for posting. I enjoyed the reader.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Ranger.. lovely to read your review. When our Mother passes, we are Orphans... Our memories of.. read more
This is a wonderfully penned write, Pat. I didn't want it to end, it flowed so nicely. tyfs

Posted 2 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Cyprian… Mothers love is always with us… through thick and thin… we hear her laughter in.. read more
First poem I have read early this morning and my heart aches for my dear mother.
With tears in my eyes I am so moved by your lovely poem.
Lisa, early morning in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Lisa… Inheld and rocked my daughter by a Black Irin Stove… just for sentimental reasons .. read more
This made me smile. there is nothing more wonderful then the love of a mom.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dear Dale… ❤️ lovely to know you smiled.
Yes, Mothers are Special in so many ways. <.. read more
So beautiful. my mother has been gone a long while and it's nice thinking about hearing her voice again.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Cherrie… my Mother passed in 1978… she was about 58 at the time.. she gave birth to me i.. read more
On mother's day, you share some beautiful thoughts here Pat which remind me of the love my own mother had for her five children. Unconditional love in good times or bad, she was there for us. Her loss leaves us rich in memories though sad at heart. Her voice will still be carried in us. I know you wrote this one with your own dearly loved and departed mum in mind. You have shared her with me before. Your lines are full of tender love and emotion.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Chris… your constant caring for all the Poets is a reflection of the Evening Star Venus. .. read more
Mother’s love will always be in your heart, and the skies , no matter what their mood, will always protect you. Remember all the precious stores that mom told you under the stars, protected by Venus.
Bwell done Pat.
Best, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Betty… your review gives me Courage to conquer the blue moods … knowing that Mother’s .. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome dear Pat!
Truly, B
"Even if Skies are stormy with Thunder

They will be your Constant Care... "

Posted 2 Years Ago


"Mothers love to tuck you under the Covers...

and tell you stories of fields of Lavender "


Posted 2 Years Ago


A gorgeous celebration of Mother's day, fitting for all mothers. They are the ultimate symbol for love and caring. The voice, the touch, the ceaseless caring and looking after. Wow!
You write marvelously.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Sami.. you are a Joy forever.. A Mothers Touch is a Kiss of Love… gently, Pat
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

I love it. So true and well said. You are welcome Pat of Virginia...

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Added on May 8, 2022
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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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