A River with currents that attract the impetuous souls

White Water is lovely as it challenges the Kayakers with excitement

On a lovely warm Summers Day when 

Terns sit on Rocks in the River... 

White Water enthusiasts come to 

challenge the Rapids with 

love and laughter... in the hereafter... 

Suddenly there is a sound of thunder and 

lightening streaks across the Sky where 

Sunshine beams smile mysteriously as 

rain falls softly on placid peaceful Inlets 

where Reverence is portrayed in 

Ripples of Contentment and 

prayers of forgiveness ascend  

to Heavenly realms of Trust...   

 

Reviews

[CD Campbell]

I don't know much of rapids. I've kayaked a bit on flat water, a bit in ocean bays, but line by line I can see a dazzling view. With your words I feel like I have missed out on something and need to get my act together and check out those Terns before it is too late. Its extraordinary that one can read something, close his eyes, and be transported a little closer to heaven. Thanks Patricia. All the best.

[Patricia Wedel]

Yes, indeed, CD... a little closer to Heaven... my favorite experience in a Canoe... was when I was thirty years old... crying my first born in my Womb... being married to a "White-Water Canoe enthusiast... he foraged His Grumman Canoe at the Senaca River in Maryland, USA, and proceeded out into the placid calm Water. There was an Inlet that ran through rather Tall Trees, and with Moon Beams shining through the Leaves, we experienced a Bit of Heaven.
It was an unusual Way to begin Motherhood. Now, my first-born Son Robert who his married and has two daughters, Shannon age 9 and Kahless age 7... whose Mother is Navajo Indian. Robert has inherited his Father's Grumman Canoe which has three double seats and rather long. They live now in Norfolk, Virginia, and I live in Fredericksburg, Virginia (almost a hundred miles away or less). My daughter and her children live in Virginia Beach, Virginia. So the Tradition lingers in a more gentle way-- not necessarily "White Water Rapids". gently, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

Correction... When I was thirty years old, I was Pregnant (carrying) my first Baby. (sorry for typing 'Crying')... oh dear... Pat

[CD Campbell]

No worries. That is an incredible story. I enjoyed your flashback as much as the poem.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful poetic piece! Ripples of contentment! love that phrase! It is peaceful to watch rain fall and the beautiful sun beams in pleasure too!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kathy… the Inlets in Rivers are so peaceful and calming… lovely to read your Review. tenderly, Pat

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Yes they are calming1

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"To heavenly realms of trust," that line is golden and this poem is beautifully written. tyfs

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cyprian… yes, we know that we can Trust the Great Spirit… where Angels Abide.
Your review is a Gift that I treasure. gently, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Rivers have a personality just as we do…. And the thundering rapids in soaking rain disturb the peace and quiet of a bird sitting peacefully on a rock, so do the white water enthusiasts…. But when the torrent passes, the sun once again turns the scene serene.
Lovely Pat….
Best
B.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty... your review is poetry and I love your thoughts. A close family member enjoyed the thrill fit all and was very skilled. I myself was taken to Lake Senaca in Virginia where Inlets at Midnight had trees on each side in a long Grumman Canoe paddled by an expert.. through moonlight beams through the trees... a sight rarely seen. I was thrilled to experience such sere beauty. The memory has brought me Peace in troubled times. Thank you Betty for stopping by. tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

WE need peace in troubled times, glad you took that canoe trip, sound serene, truly, B

[Betty Hermelee]

AND of course you're very welcome Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Betty... we had an intermittent rain today with soft dark clouds. When the Sun set about five pm... the orange/red and purple sunset became a gorgeous color against a grey overcast Sky. It was as though the Horizon was in Mourning for the people of Ukraine and the loss of beautiful lives because of Power Seekers. When you say the River has emotions... I believe the Sunset and Sky also feel the Hurt of Civilization. Our Children and Grandchildren will will cry for Humanity.
However, in the Corner of Pandora's box there is Hope.
tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

you are correct, the sun, moon, stars will also hurt, feel the pain of those suffering...prayers for Ukraine,
Best, B

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nothing like a rain with the sun shining behind it....

most beautiful gift from above.

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

Remember the Song… “like a Kitten up a tree.. I get Misty.. just thinking of you..
I appreciate your Review. tenderly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... "Rain with the Sun shining behind it" is quite a Refrain. It would be a beautiful Poem to Post... almost sounds like Kelly Scheppers poetry. gently, Pat

[Patricia]

Wonderful movement and imagery and delightful mood, “Reverence is portrayed in Ripples of Contentment” love that line! Well done Pat! Lovely writing as always Hugs!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Patrica… you are a Tonic… to think you liked my line. I like to think I was inspired by a mysterious force that guides our way. gently, Pat

[Patricia]

Your writing is inspiring;)

[Patricia Wedel]

Awww... you are an amazing person and Poet. If only the Leaders of Countries would become Poetic... we might have Peace at last. Prayerfully, Pat

[Weeping willow]

Rivers are wild with life as parts become calm, while slowing drifting into a an amazing swirl. I love to watch the water as it changes so quickly like life. Wonderful write ;-}

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Willow… me and my Pillow dream of quiet Rivers where Peace and Love swirl endlessly… Amen .. Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Rivers have moods. They can play delightfully, they can soothe and calm on a summer day, but never forgetting how they can turn nasty and become dangerous. Our river Thames is like that. It can turn from a fun playground to a death trap and many have drowned in its strong current. Thinking about the moods of rivers dear Pat, I am reminded that we are like rivers. We too have our moods. Your poem is beautiful, with lovely imagery. I bet those white water enthusiasts enjoy themselves. I am mindful of how we should respect our waters. Sending warm wishes across the pond.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris… yes, there are Currents where young people have died when pulled under. The locals are aware of the Area to not Swim. But other than that Area… many young adults float on inter tubes from old Tires. The white water is not as Fierce as many other Rivers; however, there are times that the Rapids are fascinating to view and stir the Imagination. ❤️ lovely to read your Review. Miniature Hyacinths have appeared along our brick sidewalk in front of our Home. The mystery of who planted them is a delight every Spring in April… they are a lovely dark bright Purple.. perhaps planted by Seeds dropped by Our feathered friends who traveled guided by a Star. Be blessed my friend across the Pond.. I adore your Reviews. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Enjoy your hyacinths. Purple my favourite colour :)

[JE Falcon]

What a great poem with such a smooth flow to it. Loved the ending as well.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Falcon... the Rappahannock River does have a smooth flow most of the time. It can be placid and calm... and when it rains and floods it seems to look forsaken and has no ripples of laughter. There are places along the way where young people have drown in the currents that drag them under. Most locals know where there is "danger". Beware... Pat

[Neville]

you can beat an egg .. but you sure can't beat a wild white water river .................. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville ... white water enthusiasts are a Breed of their own. There are many Rivers that are very well known for their fierce white water. It would be far beyond my ability; however, I was once married to a Guy who preferred White Water to my Charms. gently, Pat

[Neville]

then the guy was crazy .. bless you Pat and gently too x

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville.. you never cease to make me smile … while being playful as a Dolphin in aqua marine waters. Be blessed with the warmth of Spring. gently, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

I like to see that river in it's natural setting and experience its beauty. Rivers are so vital to life and stock. You are waxing poetical.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami… this is my “Story Poem”…. Should have dedicated it to you! We drive by the Rappahannock River most every day. A few years ago in the Winter when it was snowing and we drove by the Rappahannock we heard Thunder. I posted a poem called Thunder Snow. Hope you have a beautiful day down South with Blossoms and Bird Song. gently, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! It is gorgeous here this time of year. Enjoy your wonderland. You are welcome.