A soft, gentle and wonderful journey into love.
"We became Summer Sweethearts in a
Shakespearean Sonnet "Shall I compare thee to a Summer's day"
I loved the above lines dear Pat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
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dearest John… it is so beautiful that we can immerse ourself into a Shakespearean Sonnet… Lookin.. read moredearest John… it is so beautiful that we can immerse ourself into a Shakespearean Sonnet… Looking forward to Summer and feeling the Breezes by the Sea… thanks for your ❤️ lovely Review. gently, Pat
see, I told ya gently does it for me & always ......... how lovely Pat .. summer sweethearts aahhh :)
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dearest Neville… you speak in a soft whisper … but I heard you … Shakespeare had some poetic .. read moredearest Neville… you speak in a soft whisper … but I heard you … Shakespeare had some poetic charm… but not as charming as you. tenderly, Pat
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Aahh, now I've gone from being a hard man to being all gooey & warm inside ...... N :) read more
Aahh, now I've gone from being a hard man to being all gooey & warm inside ...... N :)
A soft, gentle and wonderful journey into love.
"We became Summer Sweethearts in a
Shakespearean Sonnet "Shall I compare thee to a Summer's day"
I loved the above lines dear Pat. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
dearest John… it is so beautiful that we can immerse ourself into a Shakespearean Sonnet… Lookin.. read moredearest John… it is so beautiful that we can immerse ourself into a Shakespearean Sonnet… Looking forward to Summer and feeling the Breezes by the Sea… thanks for your ❤️ lovely Review. gently, Pat
Those April showers nourish our earth and our love. This is a beautiful poem about the change of the seasons and how love sprouts alongside, not only with fair weather but with famous music to carry the passion to to the moon. Excellent Pat! Love it!
Truly
B.
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dear Betty… love 💗 your interpretation as the Seasons become attuned to the Music 🎶 of the M.. read moredear Betty… love 💗 your interpretation as the Seasons become attuned to the Music 🎶 of the Moon. Be still and listen to the Wind in the Willows. tenderly, Pat
from the tempest to a summer's fair hand that never fades .. what a romance ... so makes me think of younger days ... we all lived for the summer and hoped for love .. smartly written says i .. two greats given tribute simply "Beyond the Blue of His eyes...." .. loved reading your summer love Pat.
E.
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dearest Gene… you are so Generous and Sunday Morning celebrates your review… even a Plump Red Br.. read moredearest Gene… you are so Generous and Sunday Morning celebrates your review… even a Plump Red Breasted Robin showed up on our Deck to sing 🎶 Beethoven’s D Minor Sonata…. tenderly, Pat
when i lived in SD .. the robins were the true heralds of spring ... tho even they were fooled from .. read morewhen i lived in SD .. the robins were the true heralds of spring ... tho even they were fooled from time to time and had to endure one more snow storm with the rest of us ;)
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We have seen a few or more Robins already… We may have Snow flurries on Thursday… today we have .. read moreWe have seen a few or more Robins already… We may have Snow flurries on Thursday… today we have Rain Clouds and a bit of Rain. Nature is nourishing the coming of Spring. gently, Pat
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we are hit with the quick drop in temp and right now corn snow is falling and has put a thin sheet o.. read morewe are hit with the quick drop in temp and right now corn snow is falling and has put a thin sheet over the earth .. gotta love it right!?
This is perfect! All things I love, Shakespeare, Beethoven, the classics are the best and who doesn’t love a sonata and a sonnet and I play the piano so you won me over completely with this wonderful write dear Pat
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Awww… dear Patricia.. even on a Cold Sunday morning … the Birds Sing 🎶 along with your Review.. read moreAwww… dear Patricia.. even on a Cold Sunday morning … the Birds Sing 🎶 along with your Review knowing that as you play your Ivories… the World will survive along with the Classics. Be Blessed and caressed with thoughts of Spring. tenderly, Pat
beautiful....seemingly timeless words.
May they echo..on and on..
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dearest “light”… your kindness is timeless… as we breathe the sweetness of daffodils peeking.. read moredearest “light”… your kindness is timeless… as we breathe the sweetness of daffodils peeking above the earth.. to give new birth .. tenderly, Pat
Ah, such a nice ending to a wonderfully heartwarming poem.
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dear JE… your review has warmed my 💜 Heart on this Cold Sunday February Morning.
Thank.. read moredear JE… your review has warmed my 💜 Heart on this Cold Sunday February Morning.
Thanks for your kind words. tenderly, Pat
It's always a pleasure, Patricia, may you day be a well brewed tea.
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Orange Pekoe Tea brewing .. the whistle in the Wind has flirted.. and all has come up like Tulips �.. read moreOrange Pekoe Tea brewing .. the whistle in the Wind has flirted.. and all has come up like Tulips 🌷 in the Snow… while I Sip my Tea and sing 🎶 Off Tune and laugh with the Moon… tenderly, Pat
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And as the moon playfully slips behind some clouds, it leaves me in the dark about many things not, .. read moreAnd as the moon playfully slips behind some clouds, it leaves me in the dark about many things not, yet, seen in the thoughts of tomorrow. ...
You have again used your rare gift of re-arranging common everyday words into a taste treating treasure
I am sure by now, he knows just how very lucky he is
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dearest Dave… you have Won me over with your Charming Review. “Taste treating treasure” is ve.. read moredearest Dave… you have Won me over with your Charming Review. “Taste treating treasure” is very sweet like Strawberries the first of June. I wish I had written the Words to the Song and Movie “Oklahoma”… “Spring is bursting out all Over”. We certainly need the Gorgeous Blossoms this Year. So many Issues to handle where Politics and COVID and Variants are concerned. Be blessed and stay Well. tenderly, Pat
Just enough room in a baby grand to crawl in and become one with the string as he hits the key....to your heart. But then you'd have to climb out so you can dance and wouldn't want all those tears to warp the notes....of your love. I love musical poetry. Nicely written pat!
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dear William Michael…. Waiting for a Review was “sad”.. but then you Cheered me so with your.. read moredear William Michael…. Waiting for a Review was “sad”.. but then you Cheered me so with your “clever” words. It was like watching a Play at a Theatre to read your Theatrics about My Grand Piano playing a Beethoven Sonata … Bravo… My husband Roger thinks you are really Kool… and so do I myself. Roger always inspires me with his Blue Eyes. We are Rich to have you here on Writers Cafe. truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..