A beautifully crafted piece of
brevity ..your chosen words.
are so lovely and vividly
expressed in poetic verse
Nice Work...
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3 Years Ago
dearest Fran… your review is lovely.. a distant star May shine in lovers eyes if only we feel the .. read moredearest Fran… your review is lovely.. a distant star May shine in lovers eyes if only we feel the warmth of a lover’s kiss. Gently, Pat
Ah, This is such a lovely write, my writes somehow always come out different.
This is so beautiful
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3 Years Ago
dearest writer gurl… there is so much depth in a lover’s eyes… we could send our Sighs to the .. read moredearest writer gurl… there is so much depth in a lover’s eyes… we could send our Sighs to the Moon and be blessed . tenderly, Pat
you can beat an egg & a carpet, but ya just can't beat an Eurasian Collared Dove coo ........ what a delight you have penned & posted here Pat ......... lovely as a little linnets laugh in a laurel tree :) x
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3 Years Ago
dearest Neville… you have inspired me to be more care-free.. “lovely as a little linnets laugh i.. read moredearest Neville… you have inspired me to be more care-free.. “lovely as a little linnets laugh in a laurel tree” is so lilting and has captured the song 🎶 of a million Stars ⭐️ . May the years be kind to a Kindred Soul. 🙏 Pat
This is beautiful and the Doves cooing just melted me, I love their cooing and I can’t wait for spring to hear ours. Wonderful writing Pat!
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3 Years Ago
Awesome… Patricia.. that you love Mourning Doves.. We always have a few on our Deck out the large.. read moreAwesome… Patricia.. that you love Mourning Doves.. We always have a few on our Deck out the large Kitchen Window, along with Cardinals and now .. Blue Jays. My favorite are the Chickadees. Thanks for reading and I hope you will stay Safe and Warm. gently, Pat
The words are like some nature elements and here you portrayed the beautiful canvas with those words.
Loved and enjoyed this read Patricia.
Much Love,
Anu
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3 Years Ago
dear Abuja… Nature gives us shelter and meditation 🧘♂️ to survive… we are beholding to.. read moredear Abuja… Nature gives us shelter and meditation 🧘♂️ to survive… we are beholding to the beauty and romance of the Sky. Be blessed 😇 and Well. tenderly, Pat
Romantic and picturesque, this is lovely. I enjoyed the read.
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3 Years Ago
dear Fabian… to see the shades of amber reflected in a lovers eyes is why we venture out with hope.. read moredear Fabian… to see the shades of amber reflected in a lovers eyes is why we venture out with hope and faith for a better World. Thank you for reading and believing. gently, Pat
Just gentle, lovely images here...this poem soothes my soul.
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3 Years Ago
dear Laz…. Lovely to know this poem soothed your Soul… it is amazing that we can see the Beauty .. read moredear Laz…. Lovely to know this poem soothed your Soul… it is amazing that we can see the Beauty in our World … the Sunrise that begins a new Adventure. Wishing you a blessed and happy New Year. truly, Pat
The beautiful eyes of a lover...immortalized by your breathtaking words... To be able to gaze into that sunshine is life's greatest joy....
Thanks for sharing such beauty ❤
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3 Years Ago
dearest DIVYA… a lovers Eyes have a soft glow of the Sea where storms stir emotions. Your poetic .. read moredearest DIVYA… a lovers Eyes have a soft glow of the Sea where storms stir emotions. Your poetic Review is like a Calm before the Storm where Lovers kiss 💋 in the ebb of earthly Bliss. Thanks for your touch of beauty. gently, Pat
Ah, the twinkle in a lover's eye. How glorious that can be. Dear Pat, you do romance so well. I love your poetic expression here and how you draw close to the natural environment. Your work is truly beautiful. Sending love across the waves.
Chris
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3 Years Ago
dearest Chris… I love ❤️ how you compliment my poetry… the Soft brushes of Romance and the .. read moredearest Chris… I love ❤️ how you compliment my poetry… the Soft brushes of Romance and the dance of Nature. We are expecting another Snow this Sunday and Monday to nourish the Earth. Be blessed with a warm hearth and dreams of Spring with blossoms. Love 💕 across the Waves. gently, Pat
Do you still have snow Pat? I came looking for a new poem, thinking I may have missed one. Alas no, .. read moreDo you still have snow Pat? I came looking for a new poem, thinking I may have missed one. Alas no, but I'm sure your muse will visit soon. It has been sooo cold here, but no snow. Plenty of frost clinging in the garden though. Take care. Sending waves of love.
3 Years Ago
dear Chris... you are a Sweetheart... No, we had no more snow... after the Billows of Snowflakes of .. read moredear Chris... you are a Sweetheart... No, we had no more snow... after the Billows of Snowflakes of ten inches the first snow... then five days or so later another snow that was lighter and not deep at all. The third snow predicted did not show, except "a prayer of pretty snowflakes" for an hour at most.
Now at five am Saturday morning it is eighteen degrees outside according to my "smart phone". I bought cut tulips for our family room during the first Snow. Now I have cut Hydrangeas... (both from Wegmans Grocery... they always have cut flowers all year long... to make your own Bouquets... a bit pricey but worth the therapy emotionally. It is amazing how Flowers can heal a troubled Soul... especially through this Pandemic... and now Omigron... even mandating that five year old children be vaccinated in many States and Cities. Our World is topsy Turvey and I worry for the Children and young people; however, they are resilient. You have inspired me to pen a Poem.. and I thank you for that. Love across the Waves. Be Brave... Pat
3 Years Ago
Dear Pat, snowflakes, tulips and hydrangeas, a touch of beauty in a frightening world. I have fresh .. read moreDear Pat, snowflakes, tulips and hydrangeas, a touch of beauty in a frightening world. I have fresh flowers too, to lift spirits. I have them in my hallway, to welcome me home when I venture out. We are being braver. We are eating out again, but with care. We are tired with the restrictions and long for normality. You take care dear Pat.
The light from a distant star shines on a duo of love and passion where twilight eyes gaze at each other in the dawn of purple light.
Lovely Brevity Pat.
Best
B.
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3 Years Ago
dearest Betty… a beautiful poetic Review…
Sweet as the morning dew … always a treasure.. read moredearest Betty… a beautiful poetic Review…
Sweet as the morning dew … always a treasure to read your words. tenderly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..