A Pale Green Moon for Halloween

A Pale Green Moon for Halloween

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

The Moon on the Eve of Halloween appeared pale green as  

Lizards surrounded the smiling Pumpkins with fire-lit eyes...  

The stars scattered like broken strings of Pearls when Angels 

collide with Witches in Black velvet Hats chasing Bats... 

All Saints Knights in shining Armour walk the Fields of 

Golden Cornstalks and Child-like Urchins searching for 

Tricks or Treats with Black Cats prowling with Skeletons... 

 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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A very colorful Halloween write; …lizard with fire- lit eyes….angels colliding with witches…how does that turn out! I vote for the angels all the time
Lovely holiday poem Pat… your words just flow together so well!
Best, B

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Betty... some day our grandchildren's grandchildren will write poems for Halloween...
.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

You’re very welcome



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I love the imagery in this poem, yes long past this holiday but I’m still traveling back in your catalog, always thrilled with every line and I love this holiday

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Patricia… yes, Halloween can be fun and creative… love to see the Kids dress up like Cha.. read more
The innocence of Halloweens past... We recapture it briefly in our own children. But such times are fleeting. Soon only memories remain. Thank for that brief smile, though. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hi Patricia, you do bring Halloween to life in this most creative write. Such wondrous visions fill my mind as I read through your perfect words. Your words sing into the soul. A Halloween song. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A very colorful Halloween write; …lizard with fire- lit eyes….angels colliding with witches…how does that turn out! I vote for the angels all the time
Lovely holiday poem Pat… your words just flow together so well!
Best, B

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Betty... some day our grandchildren's grandchildren will write poems for Halloween...
.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

You’re very welcome
SO amazing dear Pat! what an imagination You have there "Angels and Witches"! I feel your sweet playfulness and I LOVE it! thank You so much for another delightful read!!!! HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Lightsong... your review is like a gorgeous Sunset that brings "Rest" to our weary "Quest". .. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

wwweeee!!! my dear beautiful Pat, your sweetness and POETIC spirit along your playfulness brighten a.. read more
Ya gotta get excited when the moon is pale green & witches are chasing bats in black velvet hats! Sorry I did not catch this Halloween grand finale of yours. I needed a couple days off after chasing the Halloween merry-go-round with Dave Brown for a month. But it's great to find this, upon my return, & your spooky antics are word-painted in the most freakish tones of cadaver! (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Margie... I am late to thank you for reading about the green moon for Halloween. Tonight the E.. read more
ooooooooooooo spooky and uplifting at the same time .. clever mixing of the battle of Angels and Witches .. love the imaging with the cornstalks, the stars scattering .. the colliding .. lots of good fun spooky stuff Pat! nice one! enjoyed the experience!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Gene... I am even a bit Irish on Halloween...
I adore your review as a "Battle"... as w.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

yes! the focus on gratitude for all one may have in this world makes Thanksgiving one of my all time.. read more
This is genius! The scary tale is presented in such a calming tone that I had to read it twice. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Christy... I appreciate your Charming review. May your skies be a Blessing as you survive t.. read more
Agh, beautiful, this filled me with an overwhelming amount of happiness in a way I cannot explain

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Ghost... you have given my poem "the ultimate complement" and I am beholding. truly, Pat
You described a typical night of trick or treaters in all their myriad choices of costumes, as well as the underlying currents of Halloween in stories and songs. I love the visual elements, and the atmosphere. I'm not a fan of Halloween, but your poem is both spooky and innocent. Nicely done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Zoe... the Joy of children dressing up as characters is my favorite Theatre. I love the perfor.. read more

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