Wishing on a Star

Of all the Stars to wish upon  

the one by far would be where you are...  

I would climb the highest Mountain and  

wait for the thunder and lightening  

to be under the spell of your smile... 

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love how your celestial salsa spices up the place with your amazing imagination! What rare poet thinks like this? Thinking to connect with a missing loved one, by being beamed down on a thunderbolt? I might be tempted to pilfer your idea & write about a thunder tango since I awoke with a blank palette. I'm guessing your paints are splattering all the time in that colorful noggin' of yours! (((HUGS)))

[Patricia Wedel]

Margie dear... you have encouraged me to search the Heavens and the Earth below... to dance with dandelions and sing with birds. A thunder tango would be intoxicating when awakening to loves lightening. gently, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Love travels far distances, that’s for sure, and one would go anywhere to be under a star in ecstatic romance….lovely images and to the point.
Best,
B.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty... the Spirit that lives in our Heart and Soul lives on in ways that appear in the Artwork of the Skies. We can see the moods of Joy and Sorrow...
until tomorrow when the Light shines through. I always appreciate your reviews. gently, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you Pat, I always appreciate yours too.
Truly, B.

[Fran Marie]

a sweet declaration of love
ever so romantic ..stars are
glowing for you and your love
in this star shine write..nice

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran... your words are tenderly received. There is a Mysterious Aura about the Sky... with so many Moods and Seasons. I always appreciate your reviews. gently, Pat

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A short sweet lovely poem that says so much despite its size. Wonderful poem Pat. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Carlos... lovely to read your review....
there are times when a few words can encompass so much feeling and love. I appreciate your reading ...
Be blessed and stay well. truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Stars always remind me of our dearly departed. This is a heavenly write Pat and oozes romance. Be well my friend.


Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... the intimacy of the Stars guide our days with the quiet music of the Milky Way and beyond. We are Travelers that will venture to reunite with the Spirits of our loved ones. The Stars shine Brightly in the Midst of Uncertainty. We are blessed with the Promise of Eternal Life. Romance is the love and devotion given freely when we fly away. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Your responses Pat are always so poetic. You are treasure.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Aaahhh, so lovely dear Pat. So would I….

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Annette... how lovely to share your feelings... our loved ones are only a Prayer away... read moredearest Annette... how lovely to share your feelings... our loved ones are only a Prayer away...
wishing for a storm to bring a breeze that soothes our heart and soul. The Sky holds mysteries that will unfold. gently, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wowza. The romantic gesture in this poem took m y breath away.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Dale... there is a Veil in the Sky above... where Stars are wished upon... our loved ones who have passed to the great beyond are touched by our Wish and with Heaven's Kiss we find the path to Peace and Love. Thank you for sharing your feelings. tenderly, Pat

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How sweetly romantic and tenderly expressed; I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fabian... you have blessed me with your kindness... the ones we love are among the Stars and the Firmament where mysteries lie... the romance of the Sky. May your days be filled with contentment. I appreciate your review. gently, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

If we could only wish upon a Star... we would want to hear the voice
of a loved one who has flown up in the Sky where Angels rest in a
Special place where Peace and Love prevail... Amen .... the Author