Wishing on a Star

Of all the Stars to wish upon  

the one by far would be where you are...  

I would climb the highest Mountain and  

wait for the thunder and lightening  

to be under the spell of your smile... 

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love how your celestial salsa spices up the place with your amazing imagination! What rare poet thinks like this? Thinking to connect with a missing loved one, by being beamed down on a thunderbolt? I might be tempted to pilfer your idea & write about a thunder tango since I awoke with a blank palette. I'm guessing your paints are splattering all the time in that colorful noggin' of yours! (((HUGS)))

[Patricia Wedel]

Margie dear... you have encouraged me to search the Heavens and the Earth below... to dance with dandelions and sing with birds. A thunder tango would be intoxicating when awakening to loves lightening. gently, Pat

[Patricia]

Oh I like that feeling! Adoring! Well done!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Patricia… my Muse must be an Angel… ❤️ love your Avatar of Roses… with a blush of Romance … if only the World could stop the Madness and enjoy the fragrance of Love. gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, sweet and wonderful words shared dear Pat. I agree. I would love to know the spell of true love again. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John… so charming that you enjoyed this love 💗 poem… you can be smitten when a Butterfly lands on your shoulder… wishing you a Merry Christmas 🎄 with blue lights and an Angel singing Christmas 🎶 Carols…. Be blessed.. gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

January is almost over. Spring will come ASAP. Hello dear Pat. Keep warm and have some fun.

[JE Falcon]

Once again, simple, straight forward, and so very pleasing to read.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Falcon… your Avatar is perfect for your Name.. we had a Falcon on our Bird Feeder with an injured Leg.. I called Animal Control and She came out and we saw the Falcon fly up to the Top of our Gazebo Steeple. The Officer said that in the Wild.. the Birds tend to heal themselves with strong determination. However; that I should call them if he Falcon became disabled and they would see that it was in a safe environment to heal. ❤️ lovely to know we have Caring Hearts in Control. Thank you for reading my simple Poem. truly, Pat

[JE Falcon]

Thank you, and what a coincidence, I was married in a large Gazebo, on a lake. --- You did the right thing when calling them. The Falcon may be looking for an easy meal by hanging around the feeder, or he is supplementing his diet with something the feeder has in it. Some Falcons like bugs, most like birds, and many like fish. --- Happy birding!

[Sami Khalil]

Whoeeeee!Whoeeee! So beautiful and romantic. You must be so talented in many ways.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami… my Muse is like a precious Jewel that unearths the Treasures of our Heart. You are a Prospector of Prophecy … Amen

[Sami Khalil]

I do hope so. Much welcome. Enjoy those jewels.

[shadrach hah]

Hi Patricia, such wonderful words you use to paint a beautiful piece of poetry. I love the content of this write. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Shadrach... I find that I miss my Mother and others... more each year... for me my feelings do not fade... instead they become more intense every day...
My Mom passed at age 58 from Cancer. I feel that I am aging for both of Us... and it is a pleasure, since so much of her rests with me. truly, Pat

[shadrach hah]

I shall ever miss my mother, terribly. She was the rock in my life, she was ever there for me, the love that kept me going forward. I only started writing poetry after she died, I was lost and had to do something. Our dead are ever with us, especially our Mothers, they never falter in their watch. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always....Mike.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Mike… I feel so much of my Mother abides in me.. it is a Gift to pass on… as a Pearl necklace of Wisdom bestowed. tenderly, Pat

[shadrach hah]

Yes Pat, our mothers are always with us, as you shall ever be looking on your dear family. Love never dies. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs always....Mike.

[K writes]

This is such a wonderful, lovely write

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kaykey... thank you for reading... my apologies for being so late. Time is fleeting, but truly worth reading poet's heart-felt creativity. Sending best wishes for a lovely Thanksgiving. tenderly, Pat

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

How can u not melt while reading this ! , Such heartfelt words with a touch of romance , Small words yet a splashing effect .
Love Kathy

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kathy... yes, splashing through Oceans would be another way to search for lost love... perhaps to Scotland where the Music would charm the romantic smile of a Sweet Heart playing Bag Pipes ... looking for a Lass. tenderly, Pat

[lightsong]

awa dear Pat! this warmly and tenderly touches the hearts, reminds me with the Little Prince so an extra touching there.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear song of Light... I must become familiar with "the little prince"... still time to become "well read". I appreciate your tender touch. I love to connect with our loved ones through poetry. gentle, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the sun and the moon both approve.

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jacob... the Sun and the Moon are always there... the light may be shadowed by storms... however, we know they are there and protect our environment; they give us strength and courage to be Brave as the Waves move with the Tide upon the Shore. Your touch of Wisdom lies on the sands of time. tenderly, Pat