Scottish castles Blythe

Edinburgh Castle  

haunts my dreams with golden light 

played on your Bag Pipe  

  

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem "Scottish Castles Blythe" is a beautiful and evocative piece that captures the magic and mystery of this iconic landmark. The imagery of the golden light playing on the castle and the haunting sound of the bagpipes creates a vivid and captivating scene that transports the reader to this historic and enchanting place. I was particularly struck by the way you used the castle as a metaphor for the dreams and aspirations that we all carry within us. The way you wove together the themes of beauty, longing, and hope created a powerful and moving poem that left a lasting impression on me.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Bhuyanshi… I love the sound of the Bagpipes and the Beauty of the Mountains. . Thank you for reading .. gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear Pat. I need a long vacation in Scotland and I love the sound of the bagpipes. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John… it must be a bit quaint with Bagpipes and mountains with Castles and romantic rendezvous by the Sea. I love the poetry of the Scots. Thanks for stopping by. May your days be blessed with the songs of a Meadow Lark. gently, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Pat and you are welcome my dear friend.

[Chris Shaw]

The bag pipes certainly add to the enchantment. A most beautiful castle dear Pat and I have visited it myself, but not for many a year. Went there with my Mum and Dad when they moved to Scotland for a couple of years. Thank you for bringing the memory back.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris… you are indeed very fortunate to have lived in Scotland for a couple of years. I hope to visit the British Isles before my demise. I may have a number of years to plan ahead. Perhaps we will have a Cuppa with you… Dreams do come true. Smiles across the Pond. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

What a lovely idea, that cuppa sounds. I only holidayed in Scotland, although my parents lived there. I was in my early twenties, so was able to visit them a couple of times while they lived in West Lothian. Wonderful scenery up there. The lochs are incredibly beautiful. .

[Patricia Wedel]

Hi Chris… your story reminds me of when I went to College one year 50 miles North of San Francisco when I was 19. My parents raised me in the East Coast… and I scurried back home after flying to the West Coast fir a Year. My friend from school was with me.
I love to visit new places. I learned to Snow Ski in Squaw Valley almost in the State of Washington on the West Coast. We had all the steamed Artichokes in the Cafeteria that Year 1959. Now I love Avocados. Cheers !!! Pat

[Fran Marie]

How lovely this senryu
you paint a castle with
all its charm; one of enchantment
in this brief piece of art...nicely done

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran… you are a Candle that illuminates the Charm of the British Isles…
The Bagpipes seem to accentuate the Beauty of Castles and Romantic Interludes.
tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

you are too kind
your poetry is superb

[emmajoy]

Dear and clever lady.. your haiku and the emotions included are wonderful. There's little as moving as the sound of bag pipes played skillfully. Hugs and best wishes, dear friend. Take care, keep safe and gentle hugs to your both. xx

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Em… so lovely to read your words at the cooler days of Summer. Our Prayers will ascend for our World where families are at Risk at the hands of the Taliban. We are living in perilous times. I will be reading your poetry soon. Thank you for stopping by dear friend. tenderly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Take care of yourself.. enjoy the day, keep safe. xx

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a beautiful senryu.
And I especially like the slant rhyme of the last two lines.

so visual with so few words.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Professor… love your impression.. would love to see Scotland Castles Blythe.. truly, Pat

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I so enjoyed this haiku Patricia. The images painted by these few words take the reader on such a cultural magnificent journey. Thank you for sharing your work.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Carlos… the music of Bag Pipes is truly a Cultural expression of the Beauty of Mountains and green Valleys where dreams become reality. Gently, Pat

[Lorry]

Well, I am scottishese after all, so should comment 😀
Please remember if going there, to jump out your skin at the one o'clock gun, a cannon they let off so the whole city knows it's one o'clock. I suggest setting your alarm for one minute before, turning round and counting how many tourists you see three feet in the air when it goes off.
The sound still haunts my dream too Pat, and I was six when I heard it 😀

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Lorry… I am prepared to Jump at the one o’clock Gun. tenderly, Pat