Oratorical Butterflies

Oratorical Butterflies

A Poem by Patricia Wedel


"Never worry about having Butterflies...  
Just be certain they fly in formation". 
Turning the next Page and reading the score 
composed by talented gifted musicians... 
I rest my Case.... Failure is Success turned  
inside out ... as we dance toward the Light...  
 

© 2021 Patricia Wedel


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I know that You dance with them, speak with them, form with them the language only hearts can hear...

"I rest my Case.... Failure is Success turned
inside out ... as we dance toward the Light... "

this is a lesson of life, failure can be the best thing that happens to us. Thank You my dear Pat for sharing your wisdom and beauty among the beauty of your butterflies friends ❤️


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Song 🎶 of Light... you must flutter with the Rays of Sunlight among the Prairie flowers.... read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

I must collect all your reviews and comments into a book, a book of "gentle graces"~ your pen flows .. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Your kindness will help me ever so much...
Butterflies must be Angels in disguise... tenderl.. read more



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There's a certain amount of verve & spunk that can be gleaned from the sensation of "having butterflies" . . . if you're not a little "on edge" with whatever is in front of one, maybe it's time to push a little beyond one's comfort zone!?!?! As for flying in formation . . . I beg to disagree. I've been regimented far too long & I look enviously on at those whose butterflies & ducks & magpies are in a tittering dither (((HUGS))) I love your first 2 lines, even tho I disagree about flying in formation! Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Margie... it is Friday already... I appreciate your review. My first 2 lines were first spo.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Hi Margie.. I was cut off.. above. Dana's statement about Butterflies is really a symbolism. I am .. read more
I agree dear Pat.
" Failure is Success turned
inside out ... as we dance toward the Light..."
I did like the above lines. Failure allow us to know. We are moving in the right or wrong direction. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear John... lovely to read your words of wisdom. This is a long Winter. Hope you are safe and war.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I am fine. I believe Winter is braking. Hello from Michigan my dear friend.
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Hi John... we just had Snow and Ice... enough that you could slip and fall. Roger my hubby fell dow.. read more
Lovely ... failure can be thought of as a new beginning just like out beloved butterflies:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Pryde... I seem to be learning so much in my "silver years"... there are times when I learn .. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

I find it helps me to remember we are connected to something eternal that cannot be destroyed and th.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Pryde... that is a beautiful thought... Also,
Life is mysterious... so many things we d.. read more
my butterflies are bouncing bounding booming blissfully blowing beckoning and bashful blustery and bowing brightly they brandish but i never seem to catch them with my net:/

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Robert... A lot of “B” words to describe your Butterflies. I believe we will be more he.. read more
Good quotation from Dana Perino and the ending lines are so wise. You can take lemon and make lemonade out of it Pat. You have a sharp mind and you grace our pages as a butterfly.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Sami... you are the “Hope” in Pandora’s Box... I love that you referred to me as a But.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow! You are doing just fine. Stay on the mission till the day of transition. You are a blessing to .. read more
We learn by our failures. Now there are butterflies and butterflies. There are those fragile flutter bys who couldn't possibly fly in formation, but give us so much joy and have something so spiritual about them as they hover in our gardens. And then there are the tummy butterflies which tell us we are apprehensive and nervous. I know them both. This little poem has so much to offer. I heard the musical score and it was delightful Pat. Love across the waves.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Christine... you are the Peace that surpasses understanding... a musical Score that soothes.. read more
Lovely flowing words to show us that failure is not a negative thing ,we all fail in our lives, but I love the way you expressed it:" Failure is success turned inside out"....as we dance toward the light" A sort but clever poem making a good point. Thanks for sharing Pat,
Truly Yours, Betty
Stays safe, peace

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Betty... I believe I read the above in a "fortune cookie"... however, it makes sense to me. pi.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

That makes me happy pat, peace and harmony, yours, B
and as emily wrote..."Success is counted sweetest/ by those who ne'er succeed, to comprehend the nectar/ requires sorest need"
and after all "Butterflies are free"---

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Jacob... you have said the Magic words...
that make good things possible.. like the.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Butterflies are free... and Prayers are free... to wish the best of Life to everyone... It is diffic.. read more
Beautiful creatures, fragile but conspicuous, bringing happiness wherever they are.. an example of how to behave, lead without push or shove, warmly welcomed. We need more.. and more. Many thanks, your words example the power of their being. Hugs and best Friday wishes. Keep safe. xx

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

3 Years Ago

You already have a beautiful mind, Petal, without a shortcoming in view.. so, please stay who and wh.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Em... we are all God’s children... our hearts weep and snow falls as little wings flutter .. read more
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

Sending butterfly kisses and smiley hugs.
".....be certain they fly in formation" now there is a challenge if i ever read one! ;) one should have butterflies when going on stage .. without them we probably won't deliver with much feeling or emphasis .. just a drab recitation of a score too simple for the show ... of course i am drawn as the moth to your closing line ... i like the brevity in this one .. and whats not to like about butterflies ... good luck getting them to march to any tune tho :)))))))))))))))))))0
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear E.. On “Fox Nation” subscription” I heard Dana Perino (when she was Press Secretary to Ge.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i'm a fan of Dana .. strong woman! clear voice.
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Yes Gene... we really enjoyed seeing her biography growing up in Wyoming on a Cattle Farm. She is o.. read more

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Added on February 19, 2021
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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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