Dear Pat, how did I manage to miss this romantic bouquet? And it is a Valentine poem and I am late for the party:) Beautiful expression. Full of sound, sight, fragrance and touch. My senses truly stimulated. You have also slipped in a little bit of French. Even my schoolgirl French understood the words of love. Delightful writing. Uplifting and romantically floating in air.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
dearest Chris... the older the Violin... the sweeter the sound... is my Motto ... Lovely to hear yo.. read moredearest Chris... the older the Violin... the sweeter the sound... is my Motto ... Lovely to hear your words... the breeze is swaying the Fir trees... and I thank Thee dear 💜 heart. gently, Pat
It's always a treat to find something from you in my read request or reading library! This poem conveys all the confetti-fun of springtime, how the world feels like it's on an adrenaline rush of color & gaiety. You always come up with a collection of imagery that paints the scene for all the senses, so relatable, & at the same time unique & fresh & popping off the planet! We are having a sluggish spring here, with temps below normal, but still the critters cry out & crash around like there's something to celebrate. I have to remember to do my clocks tonight! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Dear Pat, how did I manage to miss this romantic bouquet? And it is a Valentine poem and I am late for the party:) Beautiful expression. Full of sound, sight, fragrance and touch. My senses truly stimulated. You have also slipped in a little bit of French. Even my schoolgirl French understood the words of love. Delightful writing. Uplifting and romantically floating in air.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
dearest Chris... the older the Violin... the sweeter the sound... is my Motto ... Lovely to hear yo.. read moredearest Chris... the older the Violin... the sweeter the sound... is my Motto ... Lovely to hear your words... the breeze is swaying the Fir trees... and I thank Thee dear 💜 heart. gently, Pat
Beautifully serenaded Pat, with just the right amount of a smile on your lips to show that the only special thing about valentine's day, is that it is a celebration of how special each and every other day has been made special by the one you love and who loves you in return.
It is that we cherish, not the gifts, meals, chocolates that profiteers enslave us by.
Ps, apologies, the cynic genie got out the bottle just at the end there 😊
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Dearest Lorry... a Genie on Valentines Day popping out of a Champagne bottle would be a Surprise, es.. read moreDearest Lorry... a Genie on Valentines Day popping out of a Champagne bottle would be a Surprise, especially if He or She granted our Special desire. But Alas... it is up to us to light the Candles by the fire. We are off to an early Start to set the Scene coming up. tenderly, Pat
You paint some lovely imagery in your garden of Eden Pat. Lovely poem.
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3 Years Ago
dearest Andrew... Valentines are for believing in Magic Moments when two hearts dance with tulips a.. read moredearest Andrew... Valentines are for believing in Magic Moments when two hearts dance with tulips and Windmills turning like a yearning for Spring and Miracles. Gently, Pat
Our loveliest Pat✨ gifted us the most beautiful song for Valentine. ohhh this is so so so sweetly romantic, You filled our hearts with nice warmth and delight, beautiful ❤️
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3 Years Ago
dearest Song of Light... lovely to read your feelings of Amour ... we truly need a Dance to breathe.. read moredearest Song of Light... lovely to read your feelings of Amour ... we truly need a Dance to breathe a Kiss of tenderness. The Moon is always there to ensure us that the Earth will survive and once again we will Smile.
tenderly, Pat
"over the moon dancing with you." how lovely this line is. Romantic to the nth degree, Pat. Just perfect for Valentine's Day. You are fortunate to me married to your Valentine! Lydi**
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
The Moon is a place of soft Jazz where lovers can be Cool and dance until dawn...
masked in .. read moreThe Moon is a place of soft Jazz where lovers can be Cool and dance until dawn...
masked in breathless moments of timeless love.. gently, Pat
romance never sounded so sweet, a song, a dance, and forever.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
dearest Cherrie... you reply with a "line entwined"
around the tendrils of my heart. A Moon.. read moredearest Cherrie... you reply with a "line entwined"
around the tendrils of my heart. A Moon dance simply by chance has turned my World inside out.
I consider your comment to be wrapped in serendipity on Valentines day and always, Pat
What a lovely, dreamy Valentine poem; every word is poignant and meaningful. My favorite: "I am over the moon dancing with you".... but every line is rich. Great romantic!!!
Truly Yours, and stay safe, Betty
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
dearest Betty... Spring Tulips will be seen when love
is made on Valentines day... a bit ris.. read moredearest Betty... Spring Tulips will be seen when love
is made on Valentines day... a bit risqué with the
Blinds pulled down. Rated immature, but who cares.
gently, Pat
3 Years Ago
I think it's fine!!! Your words are so descriptive; take care
Wonderful and beautiful words shared for love dear Pat.
"My heart has a Murmur of moments spent
in Raptured rendezvous with you...
I am over the Moon ... dancing with you."
I loved the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote
dear John... you are more than welcome...
Perhaps you will "charm" us with a Valentine song... read moredear John... you are more than welcome...
Perhaps you will "charm" us with a Valentine song.
tenderly, Pat
3 Years Ago
I do tried. My song is old. I need a young man song. Hello dear Pat and good morning from Michigan.
3 Years Ago
dear John... I am young at Heart... which is comfortable to me. Some Songs never go out of Style. .. read moredear John... I am young at Heart... which is comfortable to me. Some Songs never go out of Style. Life is precious “to the last drop”. Gently, Pat
dear Dale... I heard the Fire Engines going "full speed
ahead" when your heart was in Jeopar.. read moredear Dale... I heard the Fire Engines going "full speed
ahead" when your heart was in Jeopardy... Please relax by a Pool and Cool off. truly, Pat.
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..