Valentines and Blue Skies

Love flies high as a Steeple Chime  

where Bells ring in triple time... 

hearts are entwined with Spring tulips 

when Love Birds meet on a Limb of  

 

cherry blossom buds waiting for 

Je t'adore tweets and secret songs... 

My heart has a Murmur of moments spent 

in Raptured rendezvous with you...  

I am over the Moon ... dancing with you.  

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, how did I manage to miss this romantic bouquet? And it is a Valentine poem and I am late for the party:) Beautiful expression. Full of sound, sight, fragrance and touch. My senses truly stimulated. You have also slipped in a little bit of French. Even my schoolgirl French understood the words of love. Delightful writing. Uplifting and romantically floating in air.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... the older the Violin... the sweeter the sound... is my Motto ... Lovely to hear your words... the breeze is swaying the Fir trees... and I thank Thee dear 💜 heart. gently, Pat

[barleygirl]

It's always a treat to find something from you in my read request or reading library! This poem conveys all the confetti-fun of springtime, how the world feels like it's on an adrenaline rush of color & gaiety. You always come up with a collection of imagery that paints the scene for all the senses, so relatable, & at the same time unique & fresh & popping off the planet! We are having a sluggish spring here, with temps below normal, but still the critters cry out & crash around like there's something to celebrate. I have to remember to do my clocks tonight! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lorry]

Beautifully serenaded Pat, with just the right amount of a smile on your lips to show that the only special thing about valentine's day, is that it is a celebration of how special each and every other day has been made special by the one you love and who loves you in return.
It is that we cherish, not the gifts, meals, chocolates that profiteers enslave us by.
Ps, apologies, the cynic genie got out the bottle just at the end there 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

Dearest Lorry... a Genie on Valentines Day popping out of a Champagne bottle would be a Surprise, especially if He or She granted our Special desire. But Alas... it is up to us to light the Candles by the fire. We are off to an early Start to set the Scene coming up. tenderly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

You paint some lovely imagery in your garden of Eden Pat. Lovely poem.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Andrew... Valentines are for believing in Magic Moments when two hearts dance with tulips and Windmills turning like a yearning for Spring and Miracles. Gently, Pat

[lightsong]

Our loveliest Pat✨ gifted us the most beautiful song for Valentine. ohhh this is so so so sweetly romantic, You filled our hearts with nice warmth and delight, beautiful ❤️

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Song of Light... lovely to read your feelings of Amour ... we truly need a Dance to breathe a Kiss of tenderness. The Moon is always there to ensure us that the Earth will survive and once again we will Smile.
tenderly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

"over the moon dancing with you." how lovely this line is. Romantic to the nth degree, Pat. Just perfect for Valentine's Day. You are fortunate to me married to your Valentine! Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

The Moon is a place of soft Jazz where lovers can be Cool and dance until dawn...
masked in breathless moments of timeless love.. gently, Pat

[Cherrie]

romance never sounded so sweet, a song, a dance, and forever.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie... you reply with a "line entwined"
around the tendrils of my heart. A Moon dance simply by chance has turned my World inside out.
I consider your comment to be wrapped in serendipity on Valentines day and always, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

What a lovely, dreamy Valentine poem; every word is poignant and meaningful. My favorite: "I am over the moon dancing with you".... but every line is rich. Great romantic!!!
Truly Yours, and stay safe, Betty

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Betty... Spring Tulips will be seen when love
is made on Valentines day... a bit risqué with the
Blinds pulled down. Rated immature, but who cares.
gently, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

I think it's fine!!! Your words are so descriptive; take care

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and beautiful words shared for love dear Pat.
"My heart has a Murmur of moments spent
in Raptured rendezvous with you...
I am over the Moon ... dancing with you."
I loved the above lines. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... you are more than welcome...
Perhaps you will "charm" us with a Valentine song.
tenderly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I do tried. My song is old. I need a young man song. Hello dear Pat and good morning from Michigan.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... I am young at Heart... which is comfortable to me. Some Songs never go out of Style. Life is precious “to the last drop”. Gently, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh my. That romantic poem set my heart on fire

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale... I heard the Fire Engines going "full speed
ahead" when your heart was in Jeopardy... Please relax by a Pool and Cool off. truly, Pat.