This is a truly beautiful world and I sit here reading it again and again, taking in a mother's universal quest among bubbling brooks and sycamore trees. The pink and blue clad cherubs giving a helping hand to nature. Your words renew the reader's faith on the earth and it's myriad of creatures...
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4 Years Ago
dearest AJ... you read my poem as a Renaissance man who has heard a choir of cherubs singing of new .. read moredearest AJ... you read my poem as a Renaissance man who has heard a choir of cherubs singing of new birth and rich earth to grow and sustain our way of life. Your reviews are so deep and touching. gently, Pat
A lovely way to show the strength of motherhood; Birds are so delicate it is an excellent choice. You show the care and closeness of motherhood, making sure her young ones are fed and are cuddled in the same way we, as humans, take care of our newborns...and as they grow and can be on their own. You always pick the very best vivid words to show your readers.
Great! Best, Betty
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3 Years Ago
Thank you Betty... your review warms my heart. My Mother raised Parakeets and my young years embrace.. read moreThank you Betty... your review warms my heart. My Mother raised Parakeets and my young years embraced the closeness of feathered friends as they would sit in my shoulder and would repeat phrases I would say to them, such as, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year; I love you and Whatcha
doin... They birthed their babies in Wooden Boxes and raised them in our home. We found homes for them. So I was mesmerized years ago. gently, Pat
3 Years Ago
We had a parakeet too when I was young, but the dining room window was left open and he flew out, br.. read moreWe had a parakeet too when I was young, but the dining room window was left open and he flew out, broke my heart...
motherhood warmth and power flow through Your gentle expressions, the closing was like a dream under the warming sun... You leave our hearts with so much joy, Thank You for the treat dear lovely Pat.
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3 Years Ago
dearest Light Song.. I adore your review and wish you feathered holidays and birdsong.
tend.. read moredearest Light Song.. I adore your review and wish you feathered holidays and birdsong.
tenderly, Pat
So wonderful, a mother is always a mother with open arms and a caring heart to embrace and nourish her children. Be it mother nature or mother bird. Your poem's beauty lies in the fact that a mother is relentlessly doing her job with so much affection... A brook, mosses or mushrooms or a sycamore tree all are the blessings of that mother earth....
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4 Years Ago
dearest Dreamer... I love your charming review.
It seems that our feathered friends are ver.. read moredearest Dreamer... I love your charming review.
It seems that our feathered friends are very diligent
in caring for their fledglings. The Mother instinct is
a blessing for all Creatures. We can take a clue from nature to gather seeds for longevity. gently, Pat
A wonderful poem shared dear Pat. I love the wonders of nature. I pay attention to the birds. When the birds are quiet and hiding. Bad weather is coming. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
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4 Years Ago
dearest John... I love the colorful birds and often wonder where they take shelter with feathers tou.. read moredearest John... I love the colorful birds and often wonder where they take shelter with feathers touching for warmth... like
Kittens cuddled together. Each Bird so intricately made like a precision clock that
Has a little heart. Wishing you warm days and sunshine rays 🌞 gently, Pat
4 Years Ago
Birds are more wise than we believe and you are welcome dear Pat.
Breakfast made from scratch and delivered, all without the aid of an app, and they even spend the day teaching, informing and entertaining even their human audience in poetic song. I’m just glad I’m not the worm in this scenario Pat 😀
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Lorry dear... if you were in my poem, you would be a Whippoorwill singing a lovely song... and the b.. read moreLorry dear... if you were in my poem, you would be a Whippoorwill singing a lovely song... and the birdies would fall asleep after their tasty meal. We always enjoy your background music when you dance in time with the rhyme. tenderly, Pat
I love how nature and its flow opens upvto us . Then we travel along with the busy little bird only to find children busy playing, play with purpose.
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4 Years Ago
Good morning Cherrie... 💕 love your expression... when we travel along with the busy bird.... hop.. read moreGood morning Cherrie... 💕 love your expression... when we travel along with the busy bird.... hope you are safe and well. Winter is frosting it’s way to us... must catch up on your writing. gently. Pat
4 Years Ago
Yes last week everyday was 75 or better, but the last two nights have been in the 30's
there is so much hunger in the world, so many mothers doing everything possible to feed their young.
We use a worm to catch fish, we dangle this little morsel in front of them, then trap them.
I think our politicians fish for votes, among the poorer people, promising worms, and then just hooking them....under false pretenses.
Mothers protect...politicians neglect.
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4 Years Ago
dear Professor ... your last line got me with your sassy feathered Lure.. Is there a “Cure” for.. read moredear Professor ... your last line got me with your sassy feathered Lure.. Is there a “Cure” for the lines stuck in the “main stream” ? Mother Earth still has it’s Seasons and we dress accordingly. It was endearing to watch the Celebration for the Veterans yesterday at the Tomb of the unknown Soldier and the laying of the Wreath to thank our fallen for their Service. Love 💕 your Visit and Wisdom. Amen, Pat
Human parents do a whole bunch for their offspring, but nothing beats the way birds parent! I love watching the various nature documentaries showing how damn selfless bird parenting is. I have a DVD of snowy owls, with mom fending off polar bears from her ground-level nest & dad flying miles to find fresh rodents by the hundreds every day! If this is what it takes to parent, then I'm not cut out for it! No wonder I never wanted to become a parent. Your title sums it up perfectly (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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4 Years Ago
dearest Margie... I have often observed that not everyone needs to be a Parent... more birth control.. read moredearest Margie... I have often observed that not everyone needs to be a Parent... more birth control needs to be passed out for free all over the World.... especially in the Age of Aquarious we now are experiencing. In the Sky. The beauty and minds of some should be like a Book that we Cherish. You are one of these Treasures. Always 💕 love your visits. gently, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..