Your writing here resembles the tumbling turning ever-changing feel of the sea with waves rolling in & light changing constantly. Strong analogy for the way life can be topsy-turvy in a good way . . . it can be liberating to stop analyzing where something is going & just follow where life leads & feel it & enjoy it. That's what your rolling stream of imagery says to me. Loosen those white knuckles & plunge into the roller coaster ride of life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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dearest Margie... during this Hot Spell on the East Coast... it is refreshing to think of the Ocean .. read moredearest Margie... during this Hot Spell on the East Coast... it is refreshing to think of the Ocean and Inlets on Islands where a romantic breeze takes you to places of secluded hideaways. We need to boost our morale and imagine healing as a solution.
Thank you as always for sharing your delicious views from your home on the hill
tucked in the trees with furry friends. Be brave and stay safe. With Berry much love and admiration. tenderly, Pat
That , dear petal, is what life and love means.. and beautiful. If I were about to sleep, those words would bring such wonderful dreams. Thank you as ever always. Hugs. Keep safe.. and, love to you both.
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dear Em... I love reading your words in the light of a Candle in a Chapel where prayers are sent to .. read moredear Em... I love reading your words in the light of a Candle in a Chapel where prayers are sent to Mary who was and is always there. I say this in a poetic way... and yet there is so much truth in poetry that touches our heart where troubles bloom like flowers in the rain. The thunder and the lightening came and rescued the land that is parched by pouring down the blessings that will save us one and all. Love to our Angel where prayers abide. Tenderly, Pat
4 Years Ago
Such a lovely response, thank you, dear, dear petal. Wishing you both a sweet and safe Thursday x,
You took the reader to wonderful places and thoughts. The words sweet and wonderful. Thank you dear pat for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
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Thank you John for reading my
Poem... it would be refreshing to be on a tropical Island where.. read moreThank you John for reading my
Poem... it would be refreshing to be on a tropical Island where the air is free to breathe carefree without worry. truly, Pat
Sounds like a happy heart to me Pat, and they've got mangoes too, where do I sign up?
If we get embedded in a smile, then we must have done something right, right?
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dearest Lorry.. yes, tropical food and drinks of Coconut Milk would be Great after a Nap and a swim .. read moredearest Lorry.. yes, tropical food and drinks of Coconut Milk would be Great after a Nap and a swim in the Waves... No ticket is needed ... just follow the Stars ... thank you for encouraging me. gently, Pat
Your lines dear Pat tell me how incredibly fortunate you are with your other half. I would also imagine him to feel the same. Your poetic expression is always superb. Reading you is always like being gifted the cherry on top of the icing. I am more than grateful for that.
Fondly
Chris
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dearest Chris... I am twitterpated by your review. Until I discovered a poem site where we could ex.. read moredearest Chris... I am twitterpated by your review. Until I discovered a poem site where we could express our feelings... life was much more of a struggle. Poetry is a Journal written in the Sky where Angels fly.
on their way through the Milky Way. Be blessed and stay well and safe. tenderly, Pat
4 Years Ago
I love your thoughts Pat. Have a beautiful day, the pair of you :)
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Hi Chris...!have you heard the song, “Bring in the Clowns” ? It is so inspiring and the way Lo.. read moreHi Chris...!have you heard the song, “Bring in the Clowns” ? It is so inspiring and the way Love should be. Thank you Chris for your encouragement as life unfolds. We just had a. Old fashioned lightening and thunderstorm and finally had a lot of Rain... our grass was brown like Summer Wheat and very very Hot in the 90’s. Hope you have had enough Rain across the Pond. tenderly, Pat
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We have had rain. Our grass is still green. Beautiful day today. Pleased you have got some too. Soun.. read moreWe have had rain. Our grass is still green. Beautiful day today. Pleased you have got some too. Sounds as though it is much needed Pat. Yes I know Bring in the Clowns. Judy Collins , I think :) Lovely song.
Chris... the sweetest Song is yet to be sung... with your inspiration ... your Pen May magically bri.. read moreChris... the sweetest Song is yet to be sung... with your inspiration ... your Pen May magically bring us those words that bring peace and love 💕 Amen... Pat
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I have come back to read your uplifting and soft words again Pat. No new poems from you recently, so.. read moreI have come back to read your uplifting and soft words again Pat. No new poems from you recently, so just wanted to say I am thinking of you and yours. Have a lovely day. We are in the middle of a really wet spell, but our gardens are loving it.
dear Mr. Dave... being under-rated is so much better than being Over-rated. I read a few of your p.. read moredear Mr. Dave... being under-rated is so much better than being Over-rated. I read a few of your poems and I am not certain how to respond.. other than to say... you are searching for “Meaning” and that is the essence of Life. truly, Pat
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I'm not searching for anything. I just wanted to pay you a compliment. You don't have to read any .. read moreI'm not searching for anything. I just wanted to pay you a compliment. You don't have to read any of the trash I post.... that you assume that.... well... It was nice talking to you.
dear Dave... my son has feelings such as yours and I do understand. I was so sheltered when I was g.. read moredear Dave... my son has feelings such as yours and I do understand. I was so sheltered when I was growing up that I did not experience the 50’s when most young people were flower children and became entwined with learning to Cope with feelings. I consider your writings to be sacred because you and others see a world in turmoil and it is your way to share and cope. My way to cope is more mystical in a romantic way. So now that we have a “meeting of the minds”... I will comment in my style... hope you smile. tenderly, Pat
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If it makes you feel better, we are all of us sheltered. Even the "unsheltered" are sheltered in th.. read moreIf it makes you feel better, we are all of us sheltered. Even the "unsheltered" are sheltered in the label of being unsheltered. Your interpretation of life is no less valuable than anyone else's. It's almost all unique, if only very slightly.
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Being a Philosopher is a worthy vocation....
you can ponder the Stars and the Universe... read moreBeing a Philosopher is a worthy vocation....
you can ponder the Stars and the Universe...
Writing poetry gives you a chance to share your feelings... no man is an 🌴 Island. Blessings galore. truly, Pat
Your writing here resembles the tumbling turning ever-changing feel of the sea with waves rolling in & light changing constantly. Strong analogy for the way life can be topsy-turvy in a good way . . . it can be liberating to stop analyzing where something is going & just follow where life leads & feel it & enjoy it. That's what your rolling stream of imagery says to me. Loosen those white knuckles & plunge into the roller coaster ride of life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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4 Years Ago
dearest Margie... during this Hot Spell on the East Coast... it is refreshing to think of the Ocean .. read moredearest Margie... during this Hot Spell on the East Coast... it is refreshing to think of the Ocean and Inlets on Islands where a romantic breeze takes you to places of secluded hideaways. We need to boost our morale and imagine healing as a solution.
Thank you as always for sharing your delicious views from your home on the hill
tucked in the trees with furry friends. Be brave and stay safe. With Berry much love and admiration. tenderly, Pat
A swaying romantic write, Pat. Filled with tropical imagery. So lovely. Lydi**
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Lydi dear... we need to dwell where the waves render peaceful moments... your review is sprinkled wi.. read moreLydi dear... we need to dwell where the waves render peaceful moments... your review is sprinkled with the spray of Ocean dreams where carefree breezes sway in a flamingo dance of Castanets. gently, Pat
What a beautiful tangle of words. You passed on to me both a scene and a feeling.
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A tangle of words with the singing of Birds will linger in the Inlets in Islands where warm winds br.. read moreA tangle of words with the singing of Birds will linger in the Inlets in Islands where warm winds bring dreams that paint the sky with lullabies. Thank you for leaving sea shells along the shore. truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..