Well, if I want a poem for my birthday, you're the one I'm going to ask! I usually don't think of rhyming poems the way you've done here, but I like it. It challenges the reader to keep going and enjoy the rhymes when they come rather than expecting them at the end of lines.
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dearest Roland... thank you for your gracious review... my apologies for being so late. I would be .. read moredearest Roland... thank you for your gracious review... my apologies for being so late. I would be delighted to pen a birthday wish for you. truly, Pat
Good morning Bunny... I hope Ana feels the love this month of June. When is your Birthday? Just th.. read moreGood morning Bunny... I hope Ana feels the love this month of June. When is your Birthday? Just the month will do. truly, Pat
4 Years Ago
HI pat mine was this month too June second to be precise:) Im adopted and now know my birth mother o.. read moreHI pat mine was this month too June second to be precise:) Im adopted and now know my birth mother of whom swears I was born on the 3rd but how would she know LOL (you have to love the government (or maybe it was a tired nun)
4 Years Ago
Wow! what a story... no place at the Inn...
but here you are! A June baby and a Lady who .. read moreWow! what a story... no place at the Inn...
but here you are! A June baby and a Lady who remembers. As we grow older... our birth days are sweeter ... wishing you the best year ever... as Bew York weather keeps birds of a feather safe in a Nest of Antique blue eggs ... Happy Birthday Robert... gently, Pat
your poems always sing to me so gently Pat ... what a fine B-Day wish for Ana .. really enjoy flying over the orchard .. as an owl .. never would have put them together ... i love owls .. but i always think of them in the deep forest .. or old barns ;) flying over peaches is simply the cream on top .. love it!
E.
dear E... after living in our home for just two years...
I happened to see during the early .. read moredear E... after living in our home for just two years...
I happened to see during the early morning hours ....
a large gorgeous Owl sitting on the wide wooden railing of our Deck outside the large Kitchen Window. He looked directly towards me and seemed to feel very comfortable as a Scholar in a 'smoking jacket'
thinking great thoughts. I grabbed my Camera and took a photo of him. I Have not seen him again. However, he is always in my Mind's Eye. Thank you for your delicious review. I wonder if he was a she.
"Whoooo knows! ". gently, Pat
4 Years Ago
:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) hooooooooooo indeed! love on ya Pat!
Well stipulated my friend... I'm sure Ana was delighted with her little birthday gift....
Neville
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dearest Nev... peaches 🍑 are an amorous fruit that are worth a Hoot... from 🦉 🦉 Owls that a.. read moredearest Nev... peaches 🍑 are an amorous fruit that are worth a Hoot... from 🦉 🦉 Owls that are wise as you... truly, Pat
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Bless ya Pat... One of my old houses, now three houses back is still called Owls Hoot 🦉 :.. read more
Bless ya Pat... One of my old houses, now three houses back is still called Owls Hoot 🦉 :)
dear Kay-T... thank you for reading my 🦉
Owl Poem with a wise perspective... my apologies.. read moredear Kay-T... thank you for reading my 🦉
Owl Poem with a wise perspective... my apologies for being so late... I trust you are well and safe. Gently, Pat
Well, if I want a poem for my birthday, you're the one I'm going to ask! I usually don't think of rhyming poems the way you've done here, but I like it. It challenges the reader to keep going and enjoy the rhymes when they come rather than expecting them at the end of lines.
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4 Years Ago
dearest Roland... thank you for your gracious review... my apologies for being so late. I would be .. read moredearest Roland... thank you for your gracious review... my apologies for being so late. I would be delighted to pen a birthday wish for you. truly, Pat
What a delightful thing to do for a fellow poet, good on you Patricia.
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4 Years Ago
dear Gee... I appreciate your review... the personal touch brings poetry into the lambent light wher.. read moredear Gee... I appreciate your review... the personal touch brings poetry into the lambent light where we are dazzled and stunned by a mega star .. such as Ana. truly, Pat
What a lovely poem for Ana. Ana, I wish you the happiest of birthdays. I am so pleased you are back at the cafe! Lydi**
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Thank you Lydi for joining in on Birthday blessings for Ana ... Peaches are a flavor that lingers wh.. read moreThank you Lydi for joining in on Birthday blessings for Ana ... Peaches are a flavor that lingers when Summer beckons ... tenderly, Pat
awww....Happy Birthday Ana...
yes, a most talented poet she is...
this is so delicious.
j.
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4 Years Ago
dear Jacob... your gentle review is very touching... at a time when we need to enjoy the sweetness o.. read moredear Jacob... your gentle review is very touching... at a time when we need to enjoy the sweetness of Nature’s fruits and berries to nurture our body and soul... where poets gather to support each other and share their feelings... sorrows and joys.
truly, Pat
I will join you too Pat in wishing Ana a very happy June birthday. A very talented poet she is, and Pat this is a delightful treat for us to read and a lovely gift for Ana. Peaches, creme and honeysuckle sweet. Delicious.
Chris
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4 Years Ago
dearest Chris... so happy this gave you a lift... we need to keep our spirits up with so much going .. read moredearest Chris... so happy this gave you a lift... we need to keep our spirits up with so much going on... I was raised without dancing as our Church frowned on such things. As I became an Adult I went to a Methodist church where a beautiful middle-aged woman in a Long green dress with swirls danced quietly and beautifully up the Church Aisle while a young man played a Classical Guitar. I would certainly dance in Heaven. Thank you for your charming review. gently, Pat
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Thank you for sharing that lovely memory, the woman in the green dress, dancing to classical guitar... read moreThank you for sharing that lovely memory, the woman in the green dress, dancing to classical guitar. That is right up my street Pat. Always happy to visit you dear Pat.
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..