Peaches and Creme

Peaches and Creme

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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dedicated to Ana Papaya... for her June Birthday

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There are some Poets who fly like a Kite 

over Orchards of Peaches where Owls keep 

vigils at night when Stars sing birthday songs 

of lullabies where poets rhyme in time 

well spent gathering fruit that is sweet as 

honeysuckle wine as years entwine on the vine... 

Wishing our illustrious poet Ana the most delicious 

Birthday ever...  from the Writers Cafe in the Sky.  

  

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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Well, if I want a poem for my birthday, you're the one I'm going to ask! I usually don't think of rhyming poems the way you've done here, but I like it. It challenges the reader to keep going and enjoy the rhymes when they come rather than expecting them at the end of lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Roland... thank you for your gracious review... my apologies for being so late. I would be .. read more



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hmm Papaya and peaches I think you just created a new dish.... what delicious birthday wishes:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Good morning Bunny... I hope Ana feels the love this month of June. When is your Birthday? Just th.. read more
Robert Trakofler

4 Years Ago

HI pat mine was this month too June second to be precise:) Im adopted and now know my birth mother o.. read more
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Wow! what a story... no place at the Inn...
but here you are! A June baby and a Lady who .. read more
your poems always sing to me so gently Pat ... what a fine B-Day wish for Ana .. really enjoy flying over the orchard .. as an owl .. never would have put them together ... i love owls .. but i always think of them in the deep forest .. or old barns ;) flying over peaches is simply the cream on top .. love it!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear E... after living in our home for just two years...
I happened to see during the early .. read more
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) hooooooooooo indeed! love on ya Pat!
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

💕 🦉 🎻 ☕️ tea ☕️...

Well stipulated my friend... I'm sure Ana was delighted with her little birthday gift....

Neville

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Nev... peaches 🍑 are an amorous fruit that are worth a Hoot... from 🦉 🦉 Owls that a.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


Bless ya Pat... One of my old houses, now three houses back is still called Owls Hoot 🦉 :.. read more
This is so wonderful, creative and well written

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Kay-T... thank you for reading my 🦉
Owl Poem with a wise perspective... my apologies.. read more
Well, if I want a poem for my birthday, you're the one I'm going to ask! I usually don't think of rhyming poems the way you've done here, but I like it. It challenges the reader to keep going and enjoy the rhymes when they come rather than expecting them at the end of lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Roland... thank you for your gracious review... my apologies for being so late. I would be .. read more
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Gee
What a delightful thing to do for a fellow poet, good on you Patricia.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Gee... I appreciate your review... the personal touch brings poetry into the lambent light wher.. read more
What a lovely poem for Ana. Ana, I wish you the happiest of birthdays. I am so pleased you are back at the cafe! Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi for joining in on Birthday blessings for Ana ... Peaches are a flavor that lingers wh.. read more
Ana is pretty cool
Happy birthday Ana :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Serene... thanks for joining the Celebration... Ana has a heart of gold.
gently, Pat
awww....Happy Birthday Ana...
yes, a most talented poet she is...

this is so delicious.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Jacob... your gentle review is very touching... at a time when we need to enjoy the sweetness o.. read more
I will join you too Pat in wishing Ana a very happy June birthday. A very talented poet she is, and Pat this is a delightful treat for us to read and a lovely gift for Ana. Peaches, creme and honeysuckle sweet. Delicious.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Chris... so happy this gave you a lift... we need to keep our spirits up with so much going .. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing that lovely memory, the woman in the green dress, dancing to classical guitar... read more

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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