Cardinals of persuasion

A prayer with hope and restoration...

Waiting on the edge of eternal waves of destiny... 

a Cardinal flew upon my shoulder with a Heart worthy 

of devotion bringing a message from my dear Mother... 

who left me one night just after Christmas celebration... 

I had felt her Spirit as it left her body and moved the curtain 

between heaven and earth, leaving a light that shines in 

the darkest of nights when we are sequestered in fear... 

And lo, an Angel drew near with wings of gossamer and silver  

leaving ripples in the ocean where beauty lies in the 

reflection of eventide where love abides.  

Amen 

   

 

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

What a moving, inspired and perfectly lovely poem dear Pat! Cardinals are little harbingers, messengers from beyond. Thank you for sharing this ultimate and profound experience with us- your mother reaching out in love, through the silver membrane of life and death, to communicate to her beloved daughter via a Cardinal...the imagery unforgettable...” the reflection of eventide where love abides.” Yes. I loved this and thank you so much for it. Xo

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Annette... thank you ever so much for your warm and charming review. It is comforting to know that the lovely Cardinal bring us messages from our loved ones. My Mother always told me that I was her Rose unfolding. She China painted Roses and Violets on China plates to give as gifts.
I try to be as giving of love as she gave me and others also. Tenderly, Pat

[barleygirl]

WOW! I love this! I love the way you begin with some scene of delight from nature & use it as a vehicle to move toward some message of the human heart. But the way you express your way of thinking & feeling about your mom -- it made me forget all about the opening flutter of feathers. This might be the most powerfully emotional writing I've ever read from you. I was feeling your depth of emotion all thru it! I wish I could find my feelings about my own mom that run along these streams (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwww! so moving .. how we (should) love our mothers (and Dads) :) delicately woven with red bird, heart and silver moonlit oceans .. just wonderful to read and experience, Pat ... thank you for sharing and bringing me own Ma back to light

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... I feel as though I were kissed by a Butterfly 🦋 to receive your review just a few moments ago. Yes, our Mothers and Fathers are always part of our being and I believe they are now our guardian angels. The Sky is so blue today and so am I ; however, we must count our blessings and pray for each other and our Country and the World. Tenderly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

well ... i most certainly join you in all those prayers, Pat ... by Faith we trust in that much higher power and understanding eh!?

[Neville]

what a delightful poetic prayer you have crafted and left as a gift for all those who have and who might find these words

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville... I appreciate your thoughts on my poem prayer. Have a lovely day. Be safe... Be Brave. gently, Pat

[Neville]

you too Pat..... :)

[AJNJ]

A beautiful prayer of a poem. I’m awestruck by the sheer beauty of your words. Never imagined ending could be so spiritual and beautiful. Your absolute love for your mother shines in all of it.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pestonjee... my sincere apologies for being so long to thank you for your most lovely review. Your words have touched me deeply. Be safe and well.. tenderly, Pat

[AJNJ]

It was such a pleasure, dear Ms. Pat! You’re welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

"a Heart worthy

of devotion bringing a message from my dear Mother...

who left me one night just after Christmas celebration.."

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... there are so many mysteries to be discovered... in the midst of wonderment. There are signs that our loved ones leave for us. tenderly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

I totally agree. Keep us posted on their signs and wonders.

[Serene Star]

Extremely moving piece
A lovely piece
I do believe that our loved ones never leave us
They send us messages - and love from up above

Beautiful

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Serene... thank you for stopping by...
The time just seems right to honor my Mother for all the ways she cared and protected me. Now I must protect my children and grandchildren. The Circle of love 💕 is never ending. Tenderly, Pat

[Dave Brown]

This is an absolutely wonderful reflection
Your enjoyable offering leaves me wishing we had Cardinals in our area to carry such messages
Thanks for your heartwarming view of all things

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dave... we are blessed with spirits that guide our days... and keep us safe. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Tenderly, Pat

[emmajoy]

' .. I had felt her Spirit as it left her body and moved the curtain - between heaven and earth, leaving a light that shines in - the darkest of nights ..'

Such beautiful words throughout your writing, dear petal. But for me the quote directly above, is Heaven-filled. Prayers. distant hugs and wishes for your safety. You have your mother's smile and warmth. truly. x

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Em... I love the song, “what a privilege to carry everything to God in prayer”. The Light is our life-line, and Cardinals are our messengers. Our Spirit is filled with blessings as we linger on this earth waterfalls cascade down mountains into Valleys below. Your review has when needed as the morning has not broken and my heart is beholden to your Prayer. gently, Pat

[emmajoy]

Rightly or wrongly and for however long my determination endures.. am trying to think of earthbound panoramas, sky sung music flitting through blushing clouds. Want to stretch my hope like an imagination bright and beautiful as a cardinal.. seeking for a welcome haven. Why not, dear petal.. let's add some smiles with our amens.. perhaps. Virtual hugs and hands across the ocean!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Em... the Sky is so comforting with the blushing clouds and has many moods every hour of every day. Even at night. the sky is a panorama of dramas... perhaps during a storm with lightening in a dark sky... then morning breaks with the light of an ancient Sun.
There is music in the movements of the sky as birds fly across "Ponds" to embrace the camaraderie where a friend of much wisdom walks a path with beasties along a country side where Chapel Nells ring and Angels sing. Blessings and prayers for your safety. We are one in Spirit. truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

If we are one in Spirit, petal, then I for one am more than blessed and smiling!" Must away to my oven.. forgive.. take care, dear you. xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

Great photo of a beautiful woman... Your words touch deep inside my heart.... I do believe in messages and thoughts from those who have passed....

Wonderful....

J.J.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jasmine... yes ... of course our Spirit lives on and our loved ones watch over us and send us signs. Thank you for your charming review. May your life be like the evening star where love lives behind a Star
tenderly, Pat

[J. J. Nightingale]

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