His Treasure

A golden pocket watch ...

I flutter with the break of day with alarm

A golden chain entwines his heart to mine... 

The seconds and moments of eventide 

where stars abide with Venus the Evening Star 

The Moon when sleep wonders in Valleys deep... 

and kisses the atmosphere where 

pleasures lie in clouds of wistful woes... 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' .. moments of eventide .. where stars abide with Venus the Evening Star '

Yes, dear Pat, dear petal.. that's the space between then was and now is. I think of it is a little extra peace, whatever life has been or will be. Such beautiful words and, unless wrong, words i feel every morning when i draw back the curtains and see.. space in all its treasures

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Em... ‘drawing back the curtains every morning to see the treasures of space’
is a way of greeting the day ... a gift from the rising 🌞 sun. We are blessed. gently, Pat

[emmajoy]

Yes, we are.. we truly are. xx

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This reminds me of certain watches I have seen with moon and stars on the faces and the phases of the moon marked for the months. An enchanting write.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fabian... so pleased to know you found my poem to be enchanting.... the magic will linger...
as we go about our every day chores. May your days be spent in the beauty bestowed when nature opens the Sky to visions of lovely sunrise and sunset overtures of Mozart's rhapsodies of the heart. truly, Pat

[andrew mitchell]

Time to everyone is just that, precious. A lovely write Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Andrew.., time is eternal and we are given a lifetime to spend in a journey that prepares us to be Timekeepers ... Thank you for stopping by. tenderly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

The romance in this is splendid. We must all treasure the hours....and be grateful for the chain that binds us to another. Truly your words are magical and hint at the fact that even when all is not peaches and cream, there is still a reason to smile. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Lydi... I love your review of syncopated notes
of reverie when romantic moments are held as a treasure to keep close to the heart. gently, Pat

[Robert Trakofler]

That is one lovely pocket watch! Patricia... relish the hours indeed and may that chain never break:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Robert... thanks for stopping by to share a line or two. I appreciate your endearing review. Bet you have a few antique clocks in your collection.. tick tock ... gently, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

A golden watch keeps us grounded in real moments and treasures to behold. Everything He created has purpose and value. It is amazing the knowledge God provided man within and without to unlock His secrets and reveal His mystery.
I love how you say so much in few Pat, our great poetess...

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami... there was a time when our men carried a golden pocket watch... a treasure that was treasured and held many precious, even passionate, moments. The antiquity of our heart and soul. Your review speaks of God’s secrets and mysteries kept within the moments and hours spent ... and the knowledge given to us by God. You inspire us with your gift of prose. humbly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa! You are welcome Patricia Wedel...

[Sami Khalil]

"A golden chain entwines his heart to mine...

The seconds and moments of eventide

where stars abide"

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... yes, a golden chain does entwine our hearts 💕 when we see Venus the evening Star ... always there to ensure our place in the Eventide... truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

::::::::))))))))))

[Poetic Beauty]

Being connected by a golden chain is a great line

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Beauty... yes... when time is precious, it is comforting to know that there is a golden chain to keep abreast of things to do and remember. Life is an hour glass with sands of time. I appreciate your review.
truly, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

You are truly welcome

[Katrina Mckeown]

A simple yet beautifully enchanting write. Pat I love it!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Katrina... so pleased you found my poem enchanting... it could be a dance in three quarters time. Hope Spring is blooming for you. We have blossoms on trees. gently, Pat

[Katrina Mckeown]

Pat in Scotland..our wildlife and plants must be confused with our
weather.. was quite nice yesterday and today ..
well torrential rain all day long! hopefully the
weather is getting whatever out of it’s
system and tomorrow will be a better day .. I have
my injections at hospital tomorrow so will have to venture out . Glad your trees have blossoms:) 🌈 kind regards Katrina

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Katrina... you will be in our thoughts and prayers tomorrow and always. with love, Pat

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you Pat..I did get drowned traveling to and from the Western General for my appointment.. there are no worries tho dear Pat, it was only my routine injections that I have in my neck for my condition..Spasmodic Torticollis also known as Cervical Dystonia.. this condition has spontaneous spasms and tremors of the head neck and shoulders.. I’ve had this condition for decades. Thank you for your thoughts and prayers.. kind regards Katrina. x

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Katrina... so glad you are safely home. You are Brave to endure the discomfort, it is wonderful there are shots to alleviate the pain. I will study up on your condition. We learn so much about our body as the years go by. Poetry is a great way to relax and share our feelings. Truly, Pat

[Katrina Mckeown]

Dearest Pat thank-you.. indeed poetry is a blessing and much needed
distraction at times when
needed.. kind regards Katrina x 🌈

[jacob erin-cilberto]

time runs out on some love....but for others it is eternal...
we keep time with the contented beats of our hearts...

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jacob... the contented beats of our hearts
are like rain drops on roof tops... lulling us into dreams of waterfalls where love is free to be. thank you for your timeless review. gently, Pat

[barleygirl]

I love line 2 . . . so creative & starting your flowing metaphor with a snazzy TICK-TOCK !!! I love how your lines seem to drape like a golden chain, being drawn closer & closer to the heart of the matter . . . that is, a romantic seduction done thru fluttering hands & seesawing inner wheels. Time is the biggest seduction of all . . . the one willing to spend the time is the one who's love is deeply felt (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Margie... you have added lines of poetry to my poem... love the “seesawing inner wheels’. Thank you for your ‘time’.
gently, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

“Time is the biggest seduction of all”. Is quite a poetic line you have rendered ...
it gives me moments to ponder on the secrets of the Universe... dearly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Thank you for your kind responses *smile*