Honey Bee my Valentine

Your sting is sweet and inviting...

February has Honey Bees with lists of orders  

from Lovers who know that the sweetness of 

lasting love can only come from a honeycomb... 

There's a buzz of bees busy as can be heard 

wrapped in cartons with flowers inside and 

endearing words of amour for girls in the 

latest style with hair held up with butterflies 

with colored ribbons and red hearts... 

Bee Mine Sweetheart.  

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Reading this, I felt like I was being swarmed by a buzzing plethora of sensations & I love the contrasts in your topsy-turvy message of stinging attraction. This is the height of uninhibited rambling, using whatever unexpected imagery tumbles out, not being overly fussy about the order & arrangement of words which can take the spunk out of a msg. You've captured the lovely messy stinging pleasure & pain that love almost always is! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

Margie dear... and then there is “Sting” the British Actor and Performer. He would bee 🐝 the ultimate Lover. Your reviews always has me sitting on the edge of my
Honeycomb Chair. Thank you for being so descriptive about pleasure and pain. truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Oh yeah! Sting . . . the reason my profile name is Barleygirl . . . Fields of Gold, Fields of Barley . . . named my dog (1992-2004) after that song! Great little reverie you just tripped!!!!!

[Patricia Wedel]

Your reviews always have me sitting on the edge of my Honeycomb Chair. Better grammar.. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

Margie... have you seen the Movie Days of Heaven ?? It is about Sting’s Song, Fields of Barley.. fields of Gold. So Cool that Barley girl is your Pen name after “Fields of Barley from the Song by “Sting” the Musician. His voice is to die upon. I just listened to the entire Song by him. He would love to read my poem... I am certain as the Sun will Rise. Truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

I did not know there was such a movie! What a splendid revelation! I love you for that & I'm going to Amazon right now to find it (((HUGS)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

isn't that a movie with Richard Gere, one of his first ones...trying to remember who the actress was in that one...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie (and Jacob) I have not seen the movie, but just happened to come across the fact when I googled further info on Sting's song. I imagine I will see it eventually, Yes, Richard Gere is in the Movie.
So much to see and do... and so little time... but we will make time. truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

DVD is arriving tomorrow . . . 2007 flick, not an early one for Gere, I would say . . . I'll letcha know if it was worth the exorbitant price (twice what I would usually pay, but the price went down $3 overnight in my shopping cart, so I took that as a sign! *wink! wink!*)

[Patricia Wedel]

Margie... how exciting ... please let me know your thoughts after seeing the movie... hope the music is soothing. with love, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Actually, the Days of Heaven movie I am referring to was from 1978 and starred Richard Gere and Brooke Adams...
the 2007 movie must be something different.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just looked on line...in 2007 that movie was selected for Historic Preservation....but it is from 1978....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that might be why it is so expensive to get now...

[barleygirl]

Aha! You are a regular sleuth! Thanks for the info & since you've got so much time on your hands, it's a leap year, so why don't you marry me? *wink! wink!*

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ah do i wish i had so much time on my hands...ha ha..

Leap Leap Leap.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Pat. My grandmother told me often. Everyday must be Valentine day, when you love someone.
"There's a buzz of bees busy as can be heard
wrapped in cartons with flowers inside and
endearing words of amour for girls in the
latest style with hair held up with butterflies
with colored ribbons and red hearts."
I love the above lines. Thank you for sharing the beautiful poem for love.
Coyote

[JamesTleBourn]

I like this concept, Patricia! Good job, I think it is super creative and interesting. Good write! I hope are holding up well during all of the virus stuff.

James

[Moonie]

Bee poems make me feel fuzzy and warm always (love Plath's poems about bees!)
Your light hearted and whimsically pure poetry is really appreciated especially in times as these.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear fairest... so delighted to have you visit...
Honey is essential as are the Bees as they keep pollinating so many venues. The Queen Bee may have a short life... but we worship her memory in the Memorial gardens where flowers bloom and sweet peas and vegetables abound. We put honey in our Tea and on our Oatmeal with raspberries... gently awaiting the demise of the virus. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

And may it be one that. Last the love of time...every day you should be a valentine ...wonderful web of innocence🌹

[Patricia Wedel]

Dear “thoughts”... the glow of Hearts lasts through the Winter snow and into the Spring Fever romance of flowers. May your days be lovely as May in bloom. Thanks for a lovely review. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) sure appreciate the innocence and sweet nectar in your Honey Bee poem... if he says no ... he's a crazy galoot :)))) delightful read .. inspires the feel good in me ...magical imaging ..especially like the hair held up by butterflies
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Gene... you are Connoisseur of
stylish girls with butterflies ... who deliver
Love in dancing Can Can smiles. Happy Valentines for you and yours. truly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................... dance all night says i!

[Relic]

Love the poem and the ending, Patricia.
You're very pleasurable to read. :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Relic... a charming review is a Valentine
in its self... on the shelf... where memories were
laid on lovely brocade. May your Valentine shelf hold dreams that come true. tenderly, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A clever title for a cleverly sweet poem. A very enjoyable read.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Dale... Bees 🐝 need credit for keeping us “in Clover” as they say. Their Sting is worse than their buzz... but they sure do know how to make Honey ... Pooh Bear would agree and Piglet would try some Honey on his Cereal. Me also ...
Happy Valentines... truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Bouquets, butterflies and bees. What beautiful imagery you have given your readers Pat. I can breathe in the intoxicating scent of flowers and love. Happy Valentine's day. The sweetest of poems surely.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... Valentines are healing notes that
touch the loneliest of lovers who dream of a sweetheart that recites a poem with words that capture the essence of romance and happiness always. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

Chris... may you and yours have a lovely day as you dance and romance to love and the music of Mozart and Chopin... truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Pat for these lovely thoughts. I hope your Valentine's day is all you wish for.
read moreThank you Pat for these lovely thoughts. I hope your Valentine's day is all you wish for.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

Excellent play on words and concept. Dripping with honey and flying on wings of fancy. You bring fresh air and romance to this site. Your imaginations and observations are the stuff of an artist in words.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami... I am swept away by your flight of fancy. An artist who paints the colors of love is
always like a hummingbird... sipping the nectar of
love to share with poets who know how to Begin the Bequine with feathers flying as they perform the Rhumba. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

May your day be blessed with the music of Artie Shaw
with emotions of waves upon the Ocean. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Same to you . So true. You are welcome muchly.

[Fran Marie]

such a sweet Valentine
write here complete with
Honey bees and the buzzing of amour filling
February's air..every breeze
whispering. the sweetest
bouquet of budding romance and love..as
always ..beautifully penned
dear Pat..

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran... you have a tender heart as you sing your review with melodies tried and true. May Cupid
entwine roses and violets around your shoulders where love falls like a rainbow in an aftermath of
lovely raindrops. truly, Pat