Borrowed Time

My heart is beating like drums 

on the edge of borrowed time... 

Where butterflies sip on Allium globes 

as Tanagers fly close by... 

Clematis climbs on the trellis 

of my heart where love abides... 

The Sun sets breathlessly... 

Summer Tanagers nest within 

my garden grove where love remains... 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Soon your garden will be transformed. The coldness of winter will slide into spring and summer. Your garden will become a delight of colour and fragrances and will welcome the return of feathered friends and creatures who do not appreciate winter's reign. We are on the cusp of spring and I am excited for what lies ahead. My heart beats out its drum for what is to come. A lovely visual write Pat for lovers of nature. So poetically conveyed.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Christine... love the way you phrase your thoughts-- "the return of feathered friends and creatures who do not appreciate winter's reign".
I do hear a drumbeat when the sunset of my life is
tethered by so many winters. I sense a rebirth of longevity when spring blossoms with colors of love.
truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing dear Pat.
"The Sun sets breathlessly...
Summer Tanagers nest within
my garden grove where love remains.."
I love the above lines. I love the warm days. I need one and here in Michigan, Winter is here. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... you have discovered a hint of Spring in my poem. Now, here in Virginia, we had a Hint of Snowflakes one morning. The nights are Chilly but the days Cool and Sunny. Looking forward to Summer Tanagers
and perhaps No Virus. Or at least on the way to fading into oblivion. It is our Prayer. tenderly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear Pat. But the people in Michigan are struggling. The children are tempting death. I pray the sickness can be stopped. Stay safe dear friend.

[kitty]

Sad when we have to live on 'Borrowed time'. When we get to that X road: coming to terms with this is a hard pill to swallow so if we try to live life a day at a time and enjoy it to the max. Thanks for sharing.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kitty... the most beautiful flowers exist on borrowed time... but the seeds live on and on.
Some of us linger longer as the sunsets become
sweeter. Thank you for your presence. truly, Pat

[poetgurl]

Ever so lovely, i see this as natures finest garden, nicely presented

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Kimmie... lovely to have you visit... where
flowers appear in the Spring with renewed vigor...
giving us a time to ponder and wonder at the gift of time. truly, Pat

[¿]

This time at my place we have to hibernate for so long, winter is like fitted into the air!
May your garden gets hale and hearty for the sake of all the tired heat which want to rejoice in spring.
Love and hugs💟

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Tahsin... thank you for a lovely review. My Mother cooked a lot of fresh picked Kale. It is hardy and delicious and gives your body strength. Hope your Spring will give you warmth and Joy. hugs, Pat

[¿]

You're so welcome and thank you😇

[barleygirl]

I find myself pondering your title phrase. Why borrowed time? -- I ask myself. Then I looked it up & see how it perfectly describes this feeling of suspension as winter holds on while spring promises. You show that feeling of being suspended with strong imagery . . . we are very much in the middle of this suspension here in California, since we're having 70* afternoons & spring is so ready to burst already, but we wait & the relative coolness puts developments into slow motion (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie... it is almost Noon on Sunday the 26th of January, 2020. The celestial light is so bright through the windows. This day is celebrating Borrowed Time.
Our Nation is celebrating Borrowed Time.
It is a lovely phrase to keep our priorities in line with reality. This Spring I will Harbor every moment a Bud opens and a Bird sings. A duet of the West Coast and the East Coast... we will make a Toast to
Borrowed Time... my friend. Thanks for
sharing the Sun and the Moon... with stars that dance to Claire de Lune. dearly, Pat

[barleygirl]

I love the suspension you speak of with regards to a prez election coming up (not to mention the bit "I"). Hadn't even thought of that & it's a punchy perspective, indeed!

[Dara]

There is something so inspiring about a garden, especially filled with flowers. It is an attraction for many things in nature, birds, insects, sun, rain, just to mention a few. A garden needs tender love and care and so is a reflection of your love. Simply beautiful, Pat!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dara... I subscribe to Birds and Blooms Magazine. I know you would enjoy seeing all the birds of many color and also photos of many flowers and plants with names and descriptions. I wish I had more flowers, but I try to add new ones from time to time. Thanks for stopping by. truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

"To everything ..turn turn.
turn..there is a reason..
to every season.".and yes
we await the springtime
with great anticipation.
your words beautifully
describe in lovely detail
the coming of a new season to behold..

nice work dear Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran Marie... laughter and sorrow is part of life... the drama unfolds... I love the Pete Seeger song and the music 🎶 of your heart. truly, Pat

[Lea Sheryn]

We should always make the most of the time we have, especially with those we love.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Lea... thanks for your reading... life is precious in every season... poetry is a lovely way to enjoy the golden years, fondly, Pat

[Lea Sheryn]

I agree. Expressing ourselves with words is a wonderful way to share our innermost thoughts.

[Patricia Wedel]

Hi Lea... it is wonderful to share our innermost thoughts... it seems to be a balm that calms.
read moreHi Lea... it is wonderful to share our innermost thoughts... it seems to be a balm that calms.
truly, Pat

[Lea Sheryn]

Yes, it does. I find I feel better after I write my feelings down.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we all live on borrowed time...humans and nature alike...but when spring comes...and its rebirth...
we want to be young again, and fly free as the birds...
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... we have many Springs to enjoy...
and all the more wonderful each year. We can be young at heart and fly like birds. A good attitude keeps us healthy. Thanks for the encouragement.
truly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

such deep appreciation ... every moment precious .. tanagers and clematis two of my favorite things .. the garden comes and goes but your love rests secure ..the theme brings me peace and comfort Pat .. thanks for sharing!
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Gene... we are the keepers of the stars... when love blossoms and the sun sleeps. Do nit weep when snow sweeps across the meadow where poppies soon will grow in rows of memories. May the peace and comfort be your pillow underneath the spring Willow. truly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwwww and to you too :)