My Blue Flamingo feelings

On cold Winter nights... when stars align just right  

I dream of Blue Flamingoes and visions of you...  

Your feathers kept me warm as we sailed on the 

blue Nile River near the Great Pyramids... 

I will be forever true to the moments spent 

with you... and the beauty of the sky and sighs... 

Remembering the clouds in shapes of Sphinx 

with the body of a Lion and the head of a King... 

Your strength and wisdom became your charm.  

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Your Mr. charm should treat you royally with a journey along the Blue Nile then to see the ancient glory of Egypt and its wonder. Looking at the stars and galaxies at night is a sight to behold. Wonderful romantic poem with class and song quality from you Patricia Wedel.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami... your review has left me with dreams to fulfill of Star-gazing Rendezvous with my charming pilot of blue sighs and skies. I appreciate your tender touch. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome charmingly.

[John the Baptist]

Interesting imagery combining Egypt with flamingoes. A collection of beautiful memories, indeed. I'll have to ask my wife if I make her think of the Sphinx. She'll probably just tell me to take out the garbage.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... when you take out the trash... remember inside of the bag are the remnants of perhaps a bit of this and that... a bone that had delicious meat... and no doggie to give a treat.
Chores may encase a bit of poetry. I know there are blue flamingoes and the photographs are gorgeous.
Perhaps I am like a Bird that migrated to an ancient Country just to enjoy the Golden Sphinx that Egyptians are known to have. Or perhaps I am just a bit crazy. Thanks for reading with a bit of humor. truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

you paint a lovely vision with
your perfectly chosen words
romantic write filled with
enchantment..

nice w ork dear Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... perhaps it is the lovely blue that inspired
me... but it seems to suit my fancy. Thanks for stopping by and leaving heart-shaped terms of endearment. truly, Pat

[redzone]

a love story, romantic with wonderment and blue flamingos... that was some trip you enjoyed and found its way into a very nicely written poem and I keep coming back to blue flamingos and warm feathers making this a "magical" poem as well....

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Curt... your review is worth a halo of lovely
white sweetheart roses with a scent of ancient jasmine perfume. I feel the Egyptians had a romantic sense of beauty and wonderment. Blue flamingoes have been seen in South America... baby flamingos are called flaminglet. Thanks for your kind review.
dearly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

What a charming romantic write this is, Pat! A dreamy setting you create with your imagery. Heavy sigh....your visions have me swooning. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Lydia... lovely to read your review... as though you were part of the charm of the blue flamingo dance... wishing you blue skies and sighs. dearly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the charm...the blue wings, azure sky and a king's ransom for the clouds.
i like the idea of the feathers keeping the speaker warm...
sailing with the blues...there is love.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Jacob... such a romantic review... love the "king's ransom for the clouds". Doesn't Neil Diamond sing Song Sung Blue. Thank you ever so much. dearly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it was Neil who sang it.

[Patricia Wedel]

I love that song... must listen and sing it again when family is not sleeping. Thanks, Jacob