S'mitten

Purring softly s a Kitten

Once upon a time I met a Cowboy with eyes of blue. 

strumming an old Guitar... 

He had a voice that stole my Soul.  

It was an emotional storm that raged within 

the seasons of my life where snow storms abide.  

We danced beneath the Moon's caress where 

falling Stars landed on the breast of desire.  

We rode along the sands of time on a Steed 

whose stride was long and a Cowboy took a wife.  

Now as the snow falls silently across the plains... 

We bid you Bonne Noel  

Reviews

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Certainly sounds smitten to me, Pat.

I wonder what it was truly that drew you in? The eyes, the voice or just the ruggedness of a Cowboy? Perhaps all three combined to whisk you away on your magic carpet ride of love.

You have described these emotions very eloquently and its something that every one of us hopes to have a taste of at some point of our lives.

Another lovely write, Pat, and best wishes for the coming festive season.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Doodley... it was actually the country music he sang, “Because of you God made Oklahoma”... it is a true story... even the blue eyes and the song “Seven Spanish Angels” that ‘fate’ came along. Thank you for your presence of gently falling snow. truly wishing you a Yule tide log with embers of gold and silver ... the scent of frankincense and myrrh. with love and goodwill, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful...once in a while we find that one soul that steals everything inside of us that we cannot even feel ourselves anymore...if we have it we need to hold onto it ...wonderful 🌹

[barleygirl]

Today I meant to tell you I watched the DVD "Days of Heaven" & it was worth the $24, with a 40-pg booklet describing everything about filming, director's work, actors, etc. Richard Gere & Sam Shepherd are so young, almost unrecognizable! This movie reminds me -- "Of Mice & Men" with Gary Sinese -- done in a similarly artistic way, to celebrate the land & its creatures, as much as to tell the story. This is what I tried to do in my upcoming book, to celebrate my own beloved hills within the framework of a story. Anyhow, the film is done in such an artistic way, some might not find it to be a compelling way to tell a story. But for someone like me, I love watching an artist tell a story in a unique & unexpected way. All this brings me to your poem here . . . I cannot believe this is the poem I find from you in my reading list (trying to catch up, it's two months long) . . . this poem is so parallel to the film I was planning to tell you about! The farmer falls in love . . . that's all I'll say. Your chosen details here are the exact ones which play to my heart like a mountain man strumming his guitar atop mustard rock (from my book). I'm all mixed up now, soaring between this film, your poem, & my book. It's all becoming a miasma of pleasure & I'm not coming out! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie... So beautiful you saw the Movie, "Days of Heaven". You are fulfilling your Legacy... and we are the Richer for it. Being "Smitten" is one of the Joys of Life. We can be 'smitten in many ways... even a little babes smile. Your Book will definitely be on my "most wanted" List. (with a kiss) x Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Oh what eyes of blue and a voice of velvet, singing country can do to a girl's heart. You know Pat I can remember Glen Campbell when I was about 18 and how he made me weak at the knees. I didn't get a cowboy either but I have no complaints with my engineer. He is a Mr Fixit:) This is a charming poem and sprinkled with nature's gems makes it even better.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... I discovered your lovely review a few days after Valentines ... but just in time to thank you for stopping by before "the Cowboy Rides Away" which may be in the words of one of George Strait's Songs. Yes, Glen Campbell was an endearing "heart catcher", and his music would make your knees weak.
God really gave us the ultimate gift of Romance and the "reactions" we experience are phenomenal.
I actually did marry my Cowboy eventually. and we wear Cowboy and Cowgirl Boots most every day... weather permitting. Of course, in the Summertime you want to go barefoot or airy shoes. A Mr.Fixit
would be the ultimate Partner. My Cowboy is a
"healer" of broken heats. Thank you for a charming comment about "sprinkling with nature's gems".
Affectionately, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Pat I think it is wonderful that you have his and her cowboy and cowgirl boots. Now that is what I call romance. Belated Valentine greetings.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a bittersweet tale of romance.....the cowboy took a wife and although that wife was not you, you wish him a Merry Christmas. I can picture the cowboy....blue eyes do it every time! So lovely! Lydi****

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi... it could be a bittersweet tale of romance if it were published as a song and sang by George Strait in the photo. However it is true in my case when Roger took me as his wife, and there is happiness. Thank you for seeing the sadness... that's what makes a Western song a Hit. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful tale written dear Pat. Those wild rides of youth, give us reasons to write in old age. I love the words "smitten". Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

My goodness, John... how could I miss your lovely review. Yes, I also love being 'Smitten... as a word is encompasses so much emotion. Last Valentines of 2019, I found a Cup with only the Word 'Smitten on it; It makes my Tea sweeter. with love and best wishes.
truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Pat.

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwww so romantic Pat! he melted her ice and winter .. the blaze went on and on .. and now the season has rolled back to winter once more ... heavy sigh cowgirl! ;) and Bonne année to you and yours! :)
E.
ps. Is that your cowboy in the picture .. or one of your favorite singers? ..or both?? :)))))))

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... you are a balm in Winter. George Strait is in the photo... love it when he sings "Cross My Heart"...
a favorite singer of Country music. Yes, my Cowboy looks similar... and they both have aged. We are still engaged in strumming along the sagebrush trail. Love your review. So many songs, and so little time.
As ever, Pat

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I've known a few real working "cowboys" in my life and a few rodeo bull-riders and bronc busters. I don't think any of them would fancy being called a "dude". That insult might cost a fellow a few teeth. lol But I enjoyed the romantic feel of this piece and the happy ending. Very sweet stuff.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fabian... I changed Dude to Cowboy. Glad you enjoyed the romantic feel of my poem and the happy ending. Thank you. Pat

[Samuel Dickens]

Gene Autry, Roy Rogers and more--those crooning cowboys can surely melt a girl's heart. May you and your cowboy ride the open range and never encounter gopher holes.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Samuel... thank you for your review...
yes, it is a classic cowboy story. May your Christmas 🎄 be Merry and blessed. Fondly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So much love, passion and desire in this write that makes the prairies with cowboys and horses come alive. Add music and voila. Happy Bonne Noel Mademoiselle.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... a charming review as always... we met at a Country Western 💃 Dance where country music set the scene for Boots and Saddles and things that matter. Thank you for singing along.
truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! You are welcome. Fun, fun, fun...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A purrfectly romantic little poem.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale... purring is perfectly romantic ... may your Christmas be restless like a kitten up a tree... and all your notions leave you S’itten. truly, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Our cats take care of that for us, LOL
Merry Christmas Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

We have two Cats... Snowflake a Siamese and Elisa Clover Doolittle who will never have Kittens. Have a blessed Christmas. Pat