This is such a delightful take on pre Christmas. the Manger and all. Tis delightful, Pat, and could be used as a discovering half hour with small children.. each to choose his or her own creature to have a snowy Christmas. Interaction always get littlies going. As long as the time is treasured, full lf calm yet a perfect interaction of animals and men, following the star: it's all relevant. Thank you so much for sharing.
dear Em... you are very wise to realize that children love to share the story of
the Star th.. read moredear Em... you are very wise to realize that children love to share the story of
the Star that was followed to the new born baby in a Manger. As long as there is giving and love and feathered friends and Lambs and Cows for milk and Billy goats 🐐 too...
there will be sleighbells and Camels in Bethlehem for those who
Believe in people helping people and animals too. May your Christmas 🎄 be
full of Live and warmth from above.
Thank you for riding in the Sleigh 🛷.
truly, Pat
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Pat. thank you so very much, I love children, always hoped to have a few..but then, perhaps I'm a.. read morePat. thank you so very much, I love children, always hoped to have a few..but then, perhaps I'm a little girl 'growed' up inside xx.
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Yes, Em... you are like the Velveteen Rabbit... so much love that you have given... to others and ch.. read moreYes, Em... you are like the Velveteen Rabbit... so much love that you have given... to others and children too...
you may have a little velvet that is worn
Like a flower that keeps giving. xx
A wonderful poem shared dear Pat. The days of Christmas seem to slow down and we can enjoy the change of the season. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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dearest John... thank goodness... the birds show up with feathers of Red and black as well as mourni.. read moredearest John... thank goodness... the birds show up with feathers of Red and black as well as mourning doves to enjoy a Feast to celebrate the Baby in a Manger. the Cattle are Lowing but no crying from baby as we pray for everyone to come together for a
new beginning and a New Year. truly, Pat
Your poems remind me of a couple of other semi-related subjects.
First, the woodpecker
That (image) looks like a sap-sucker and in this area they are responsible for a great deal of tree damage and killing
Not a pleasant little fellow
Second is the chickadees
After having the squirrels dominate birdfeed spread on the ground, we hung a feeder and have ever since been inundated with chickadees that have been a constant source of enjoyment
Sounds like our climates are somewhat similar
Enjoy the holidays
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dearest Dave... a wonderful review, but sorry that the woodpecker did so much damage. I adore Chic.. read moredearest Dave... a wonderful review, but sorry that the woodpecker did so much damage. I adore Chickadees. They seem to fly in a group and hang out. May your Holiday be blessed for you and yours. truly, Pat
A gorgeous prelude to the most joyous of times. The last scented rose, (mine, only just recently gone into hibernation,) and the birds and squirrels and all the other little creatures readying themselves for winter's run, conjuring up quite lovely images; and how right you are when you observe how children especially, love to share the story of our Lord. I remember so well the joy on little faces at the school Nativity plays, many of which I attended when Charlies was in primary school; and your poem is a truly joyous celebration of this lovely, lovely time of the year.
Beccy.
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dear Beccy... thank you for sharing your memories of your son and his feelings about Christmas. Hav.. read moredear Beccy... thank you for sharing your memories of your son and his feelings about Christmas. Having children and grandchildren gives us a chance to look at the world through their eyes in present time. Nature can be decorations all year long for every season. The birds especially add music and colors to our life. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Tenderly, Pat
I don't know why but this reminds me of the little drummer boy (not surprising that was my favorite christmas story as a child) Maybe that's what I am I have nothing but I can tap a tune or voice a melody in words and I do always have an urge to share them with love. Maybe that's all we really ever have:)
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dearest Robert... yes... a drummer is the essence of life. My son Robert's favorite Toy as a toddle.. read moredearest Robert... yes... a drummer is the essence of life. My son Robert's favorite Toy as a toddler was a wooden spoon and my pots and pans. He created tunes that linger in my mind. I paint a picture in poetry. He is an Artist to this day. Thank you for
stopping by when snowflakes gather in the rose garden. truly, Pat
mmmmmmmmmmm lovely presentation of the birth of Christ ... the transition from birds and winter to the guiding star of Bethlehem goes smooth a silk for me ... one wouldn't think so on the surface of things but it simply works ... the roses, birds, squirrels, summer sleeps ..all that for me is building an emotional place and i see the turn as "Snow falls lightly as Winter lullabies cry for warmth of love" ... my human need comes to the fore ... then comes the answer says i! the birth of the Savior .. Amen! well done Pat ... you have a wonderful knack with the birds of the Earth an Mother Nature ... i always feel satisfied in reading ... well timed also ... to hold in mind the important thing about Christmas .. instead of the glitz is a blessing
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dear Gene... ‘‘tis the Season to be poetic and dream of a reason to be kind and sing like the be.. read moredear Gene... ‘‘tis the Season to be poetic and dream of a reason to be kind and sing like the beautiful birds that adorn our trees where lullabies are tucked in a Manger with a Child that brings hope and love to every Nation where a Star is a symbol of Peace on Earth... Goodwill to Men. Thank you 🙏 E for being here with your tender rendering. truly, Pat
Your sensory-packed poem takes us on more than one journey. We have the journey of seasons from summer to winter . . . then we have the journey of significance going from everyday surroundings to the everyday trappings for the most meaningful manger-stay ever. A cornucopia of sensory delights immerse the reader, transporting us thru vast expanses of time & distance, while making it appear to be just a quick hop between the meaning of the season and the everyday splendor that surrounds. Here's hoping you're enjoying the start to your holiday season! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
dear Margie... non-seculars are in vogue... or have you not heard. Thank you for embracing the sea.. read moredear Margie... non-seculars are in vogue... or have you not heard. Thank you for embracing the season where we struggle with traditions and cultures that celebrate each in their own way. My way would be decorating a tree with different Birds from Countries all over the World.... with a Star of Light and Widdom at the Top of the tree. Wishing you a Sleigh full of Chicolate covered Cherries and Frankincense, Myrrh and Gold. with love, Pat
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I love it when your words do a sassy little jig as a little birdie might, upon finding my spill of o.. read moreI love it when your words do a sassy little jig as a little birdie might, upon finding my spill of oatmeal on the patio *smile*
what a beautiful vision you've
given us to read..love the snow.
with the wise men traveling afar
and winter lullabies crying for
warmth.wonderful chosen words to
describe this lovely pieces so
nicely expressed
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dear Fran Marie... I left you without a thank you for too long.. your review rests gently as a song .. read moredear Fran Marie... I left you without a thank you for too long.. your review rests gently as a song in my heart. May your Hearth glow with embers of love and peace. lovingly, Pat. Merriest of days and blessed. x
Pat
Pat, in your poem I find a much needed warmth this cold November evening, and a reminder that Christmas is not about "Black Friday" sales and credit card swipes. Your words remind us Christmas is for all, and can lift us during the gray season.
Your images bring a welcome warmth, heart and spirit, for us to enjoy. I'm also reminded of the Christmas plays, small children playing the roles, and the beautifully botched lines and over-sized costumes that brought as much joy as the scripted acts. Thank you for sharing this one with us.
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dearest Robert... we need to see the Light of the Star 💫 when days are dark. Hark the heavenly a.. read moredearest Robert... we need to see the Light of the Star 💫 when days are dark. Hark the heavenly angels 🎶 sing... Joy to the new born child... smile and the World smiles with you. Thank you for expressing your Heart and the possibility of Light. Amen... Pat
Ah, yes, tis the season and you have captured it all....the decorations Mother Nature gives us and the religiosity. The scent of acorns and the fluffy tails of rabbits....I could see it all through your imagery. Such a lovely write. Lydi**
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dearest Lydia... thank you for a silent night of holy hymns that seem so far away from reality. Whe.. read moredearest Lydia... thank you for a silent night of holy hymns that seem so far away from reality. When we had our Thanksgiving Reunion, my granddaughter Maddie said that she saw on TV a Movie entitled “The Christmas Rabbit”. My husband Roger and I had just watched it on TV also and enjoyed it immensely. As long as there are gifts of Pets there will be a Stable of love and giving. Thank you for your generosity.
truly, Pat
sweet peace and joy....the real Christmas spirit.
and those poor chickadees..
it's like they all gathered in a spot and asked each other....where did all our other bird friends go?
is this the end of the world?
or just winter coming and no one told us....
i like how this deals with the gentle part of winter...the soft snowfall...the warmth in the stable because of the love...
j.
j.
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dear Jacob... feathers and fur at the Manger scene... even sleigh bells .
Thank you for sto.. read moredear Jacob... feathers and fur at the Manger scene... even sleigh bells .
Thank you for stopping by for a lullaby
of babies borne ... truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..