Ocean Waves of Lost Love

Ocean Waves of Lost Love

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Should Order 88 be the decree, 

Recalling thee, my fear by love is met. 

Such is the pow'r that thou hast over me, 

Thy kindness doth my troubled mind offset.  

Love shines throughout the stars with mighty ray, 

Love lands, with eagle's claws, upon the heart, 

Love, like a blaster shot, doth fire convey, 

Love is a sculpted, finely crafted art. 

To fond Jakku we'll go, with desert sheen, 

No more shall we by enemies be press'd.  

We are join'd fast no one can come between, 

Our bond would fly in any pilot's test.  

No vast StarKillerBase shall I e'er fear, 

E'er unto thee my spirit shall adhere.  

           

© 2019 Patricia Wedel


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i like the old time feel of this poem...reads like one of the classics...has that tone, the perfect rhyme scheme including in-line rhyming..
and the old English...."e'er i shan't fail the pilot's test if i ever found a co-pilot who would write something like this to me.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Jacob✈️... you are a scholar and a gentleman... touché. It seemed to suit my fancy. Than.. read more



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Tastefully and otherwise terrific dear Pat.. makes me wanna fly and feel the spray of said waves as I skim oe'er the surface of the ocean in search of a soul mate....... Neville :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dearest Neville ... your soul mate is waiting for you as you fly above the ocean spray... she is an .. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago

................... N is :)ing
I felt that Shakespeare was alive and well then I thought about them not having flight technology. You are like legendary Amelia Earhart of poetry but I hope you don't disappear from our radar. This site needs you. What a wonderful sonnet.
Richard is the expert on those so I hope he can chime in. Wonderful...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Sami... flying in poetry is a breathtaking adventure... I was smiling when I read your review. .. read more
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Wow! You are welcome always.

"Love, like a blaster shot, doth fire convey,

Love is a sculpted, finely crafted art."

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

I have a Shakespearean poem on this site. Check
Sonnet One by Sami Khalil.
Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

Thanks Sami... I will browse through your Gallery for paintings of Sonnets.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

:::::::)))))))))))
i like the old time feel of this poem...reads like one of the classics...has that tone, the perfect rhyme scheme including in-line rhyming..
and the old English...."e'er i shan't fail the pilot's test if i ever found a co-pilot who would write something like this to me.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Jacob✈️... you are a scholar and a gentleman... touché. It seemed to suit my fancy. Than.. read more
two souls enter into each other,love is spawned,memories evermore

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

4 Years Ago

dear Ron... you are a Moon lover and a friend who is generous with sharing, love is spawned very mu.. read more
 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
dear Poets... You also can "Visit" ShakespeareStarWars.com
to Create your own Sonnet. truly, Pat


Posted 4 Years Ago



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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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