Ocean Waves of Lost Love

Should Order 88 be the decree, 

Recalling thee, my fear by love is met. 

Such is the pow'r that thou hast over me, 

Thy kindness doth my troubled mind offset.  

Love shines throughout the stars with mighty ray, 

Love lands, with eagle's claws, upon the heart, 

Love, like a blaster shot, doth fire convey, 

Love is a sculpted, finely crafted art. 

To fond Jakku we'll go, with desert sheen, 

No more shall we by enemies be press'd.  

We are join'd fast no one can come between, 

Our bond would fly in any pilot's test.  

No vast StarKillerBase shall I e'er fear, 

E'er unto thee my spirit shall adhere.  

           

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the old time feel of this poem...reads like one of the classics...has that tone, the perfect rhyme scheme including in-line rhyming..
and the old English...."e'er i shan't fail the pilot's test if i ever found a co-pilot who would write something like this to me.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob✈️... you are a scholar and a gentleman... touché. It seemed to suit my fancy. Thank you for taking a seat at the Blue Yonder 🎭 Theatre. truly, Pat

[Neville]

Tastefully and otherwise terrific dear Pat.. makes me wanna fly and feel the spray of said waves as I skim oe'er the surface of the ocean in search of a soul mate....... Neville :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville ... your soul mate is waiting for you as you fly above the ocean spray... she is an angel of the sky. truly, Pat

[Neville]

................... N is :)ing

[Sami Khalil]

I felt that Shakespeare was alive and well then I thought about them not having flight technology. You are like legendary Amelia Earhart of poetry but I hope you don't disappear from our radar. This site needs you. What a wonderful sonnet.
Richard is the expert on those so I hope he can chime in. Wonderful...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... flying in poetry is a breathtaking adventure... I was smiling when I read your review. I will be on the alert for Richard’s poetry. My son and his wife are studying to do preventive discovery of ✈️ airplanes that could have problems before they cause an accident.
May your days be the brightest blue yonder atmospheric possibilities. Truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! You are welcome always.

[Sami Khalil]

"Love, like a blaster shot, doth fire convey,

Love is a sculpted, finely crafted art."

[Patricia Wedel]

Sami... those lines are so artistic and poetic. They were part of the “Form” on
‘ShakespeareStarWars.com ‘ that I mentioned in my “review” of my own poem. It introduces you to how Shakespeare would write a Sonnet.
My father loved to read Shakespeare.
truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

I have a Shakespearean poem on this site. Check
Sonnet One by Sami Khalil.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thanks Sami... I will browse through your Gallery for paintings of Sonnets.

[Sami Khalil]

:::::::)))))))))))

[wordman]

two souls enter into each other,love is spawned,memories evermore

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ron... you are a Moon lover and a friend who is generous with sharing, love is spawned very much like a new baby whose smile will capture the love of everyone who believes. truly, Pat

[wordman]

thank you;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Poets... You also can "Visit" ShakespeareStarWars.com
to Create your own Sonnet. truly, Pat