Reborn in a Summer Storm

That feathery feeling when 

your eyes draw me in like 

the wind on a Summer day... 

Caressing the scent of spices 

in a meadow sweet... 

When flowers bloom in the 

embrace of a thunder storm 

I am reborn... 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is a feathery feeling isn't it?
when another's eyes can draw us in...i have always been an "eye" person...most important feature.
and i like how you mix the images of the violent thunderstorm with rebirth and the flowers loving it and growing from it.
just like humans who grow from the storms in their lives.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... I love the feelings you have about my poem. It is true that a thunderstorm can stir up a lot of passion when Spring bursts Firth like a budding Rimance and leaves us bathing in the aftermath of peaceful petals floating away like precious memories. I appreciate your review and wish you sweet dreams of summer storms. Truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

When Spring bursts forth like a budding romance.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man Pat ..i sure channeled this poem this morning ... i took my dog Beauregard out around 2 AM (i am an early riser) and when i do that so many times the scent in the air absolutely takes me to so many good places in memory ... when that ozone of a summer storm is on the wing it is wonderful ...and what a gift it is, to be drawn into such blessed peace and comforting love by another's eyes ... loved the experience reading your poem gave me ... i read it out loud first off .. very natural flow says i!
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... the scents in the midsummer night would be seductive and delightful...
So romantic that Beauregard would lead you through my poem as though a guardian angel knew the way by scents that stir the imagination in the aftermath of summer storm. truly appreciate your sensitive nature and wish you a summer of lovely scents and starry skies. As ever, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

back at ya Pat ... your one of the reasons the Cafe' is the place for me ;)

[Patricia Wedel]

You are like a Rocker and a Swing on a front porch ... so full of good feelings. truly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

well....a Rocker and a Swinger eh!? ... i guess i'll take that :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Sami Khalil]

Natural events touch us deeply as a rebirth of our souls from wintery slumber. The the awakening of the beauty all around overwhelm our senses. You pen with utmost sensation Patricia.

[Patricia Wedel]

You have emboldened me to be part of nature's beauty as it appears in meadows sweet and to encourage others to do so. as ever, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

All wonderful. You are welcome.

[Neville]

You are not the only one my dear Pat... and thank you for this delightful gift you have made available to us all here today..... my feathery, flowery and fine literary friend..... Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

Neville, you have added a ribbon of flowers to a gift that only my muse could have inspired and I am feathered with the flight of winged angels that watch over you. as ever, Pat

[Neville]

You really do bring a smile to this old geezers face Pat... and you are again, more than welcome... Neville

[Cherrie Palmer]

What delicious invitation to remember or repeat, Sping has inked the poets pen for sure.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cherrie... it is a pleasure to share the beauty of nature wherever and whenever we pen our thoughts to our legacy. as ever, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

In meadows sweet with flowery spices... enticed by
a thunder storm... embraced by the wind...
I am reborn... Amen