Your poem is a beautiful and evocative reflection on the power of love and the importance of cherishing the memories that we hold dear. The way that you use vivid imagery and poetic language to evoke the spirit of the holiday season is both powerful and moving, and I think your poem captures the essence of what it means to be a thoughtful and compassionate person in a way that is both insightful and inspiring. Your use of metaphor and symbolism is particularly effective, and I think it speaks to the resilience and beauty that can be found even in the most challenging of circumstances. Overall, I think your poem is a beautiful tribute to the power of love and the importance of holding onto hope even in the darkest of times.
So many children suffering at this time of year Pat and it is most fitting that they should be remembered particularly at Christmas. Your blue roses, blue moon and bluebird touch this reader with sadness. I enjoyed the nativity you gave me, reminding me of the true meaning of Christmas. I send you all good wishes.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
dear Chris... we are touched by the true meaning of Christmas with the Spirit of giving. Prayers ca.. read moredear Chris... we are touched by the true meaning of Christmas with the Spirit of giving. Prayers can be very powerful when our heart is full of love and caring. The blue lights of Christmas have always touched my heart in a melancholy way.
Blue roses were unearthed with our Savior’s birth. May your hearth be blessed with frankincense and myhrr. truly, Pat
6 Years Ago
Many thank yous Pat. Greetings of the season to you and your loved ones.
Hopeful and wonderful poetry shared dear Pat. Beautiful and positive words for the days of Christmas. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
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6 Years Ago
dear John... glad you enjoyed the poetry about blue roses of Christmas... Wishing you the Merriest t.. read moredear John... glad you enjoyed the poetry about blue roses of Christmas... Wishing you the Merriest time under the mistletoe... and blessings of Spirit filled moments. truly, Pat
Blue moon..blue lights..you paint such loveliness in poetic verse..I love the mention of th e manger and new born king..the true meaning therein ..beautifully penned dear pat..nice work..
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6 Years Ago
dear Fran... I have always loved the blue lights of Christmas , and always reminds me of our loved .. read moredear Fran... I have always loved the blue lights of Christmas , and always reminds me of our loved ones who are now in Spirit,
However, it is a time to write poems that soothe and express our feelings. Wishing you and yours a beautiful season of love and devotion. truly, Pat
Yes, it may be a blue Christmas for many of those less fortunate and we remember especially the children who are in dire need of even the basics of life. A very moving write that reminds us that the true meaning of Christmas centers around the birth of a baby whose spirit of unconditional love and forgiveness remains with us even today. Love the spirituality behind each and every word, Pat.
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6 Years Ago
dear Dara.... lovely to read your comments... this year we have a reason
to pray for all the.. read moredear Dara.... lovely to read your comments... this year we have a reason
to pray for all the innocent children and families who have travelled from afar to seek asylum ... the blue roses seem to represent the feelings we have for our own country and the immigrants who need our prayers. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Fondly, Pat
A nice religous poem. I don't really know the story of Jesus actually.
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6 Years Ago
dear JungLee.... thank you for reading about Blue Roses for Christmas... sometimes we feel “blue�.. read moredear JungLee.... thank you for reading about Blue Roses for Christmas... sometimes we feel “blue” because we miss a loved one. The story of Jesus is very sweet as a baby in a Manger ... and then growing up as a young boy who entered the Temple at age 12... more later... truly, Pat
6 Years Ago
dear JungLee... when Jesus lived on earth, he had disciples who loved Jesus teachings... to be meek .. read moredear JungLee... when Jesus lived on earth, he had disciples who loved Jesus teachings... to be meek in Spirit and help others who were facing misfortune. Now perhaps you know a little more about Jesus who is the son of God... “The Father and the Son and the Holy Ghost” whose Spirit lives in each of our 💕 hearts Amen.
truly, Pat
dear Emma... “children who need love and caring at this time of blue roses unearthed” is my favorite line. I wanted to write about blue lights and blue roses... the beauty of Christmas, but also the “feeling” of being blue because of the children and others that suffer in the immigration process. Life is bittersweet.
Thank you Emma for taking time to understand
and give a gracious review. Wishing you and yours a blessed Christmas filled with your favorite things and memories ... knowing you are loved by so many. truly, Pat
Such a beautiful poem.. or perhaps - prose poem Youve created a series of lovely miniatures about the Blue, The natural colour of vast sky, ifall emotional sea. The emotions of light and dark of mood, etc. You alway s have that little extra to wrap around meanings, dear Pat The Embrace of the Spirit adds that extra more than Something.. ..
dear Emma... your review is so tender and gracious... you leave me breathless... May your Christmas .. read moredear Emma... your review is so tender and gracious... you leave me breathless... May your Christmas be wrapped in love and devotion. Fondly, Pat
5 Years Ago
Wishing you and your darlings a wonderful 2019, Pat, wrapped in smiles, giggles and not a knot in si.. read moreWishing you and your darlings a wonderful 2019, Pat, wrapped in smiles, giggles and not a knot in sight!
5 Years Ago
dear Emma ... “not a knot in sight” how precious... the New Year will be here while we slumber.... read moredear Emma ... “not a knot in sight” how precious... the New Year will be here while we slumber... dreaming of fireworks at Midnight. Making a legendary toast across the Pond to you and yours... May resolutions be made as a we make our Beds in the morning light... to fight for the good in human kind in a love for country and our 🌍... the Ocean waves bid you Adieu as you chirp and coo like a birdling in the morning dew. With love and admiration... yours truly, Pat
I love blue moons & blue roses! I love using blue at Christmas instead of traditional red & green. I chafe watching Food Network's judges ding bakers for using blue which is "NOT FESTIVE" (they say!) You've woven blue into the meaning of Christmas in such a way, it felt like I was being seduced with a loving lilting invitation to joy. I especially relate to your final sentiments about the children . . . so many suffering around the world it breaks my heart (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
dear Margie... you are like blue lights lining roof tops with the blessed blue of the sky where Ange.. read moredear Margie... you are like blue lights lining roof tops with the blessed blue of the sky where Angels fly... your review is enchanting as always... some countries may have blue bells at Christmas. Fondly, Pat
the blue rose is the perfect flower for Christmas isn't it!? wondrous pic to go with your poem Pat ... the moon always grabs my attention so your first line hooked me .. and any time the moon is blue or super or blood or any other of its more infrequent appearings ... i must read on ;) very interesting flow to this one...first three lines rhythm and rhyme and then off to more of a prose read ... read it over several times to get past the jolt :) and a very special closing for the children ... all your blue images enchant me ..
E.
dear Gene... yes, a blue rose is perfect for Christmas... be still my heart. Thank you for being so.. read moredear Gene... yes, a blue rose is perfect for Christmas... be still my heart. Thank you for being so gentile when there was a break in the rhymn and rhyme. This Christmas is truly blue thinking of the children being abused in the process of crossing the border. It is a somber time...
where prayers are needed more than ever.
truly, Pat
6 Years Ago
dear Gene... thank you for being so Genteel... fondly, Pat
6 Years Ago
:) ..............you are very welcome..and thank you Pat
dear Andrew... so thrilled you appreciate the sentiment of blue roses.. I love to hear Elvis 🕺 si.. read moredear Andrew... so thrilled you appreciate the sentiment of blue roses.. I love to hear Elvis 🕺 sing Blue Christmas... Wishing you an Eagle’s 🦅 view of the softness of a blue rose on Christmas and always. truly, Pat
6 Years Ago
Dear Pat, thank you, I’m just a fledging poet trying to leave a mark for everyone who stops by.
6 Years Ago
dear Andrew... isn’t it wonderful to spend our golden years as Artists of poetry... painting pictu.. read moredear Andrew... isn’t it wonderful to spend our golden years as Artists of poetry... painting pictures with colors of words.
We are blessed. truly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..