As an Equine Scientist and thoroughbred lover, this poem is right on cue for me, Pat.
I am well versed in the exploits of Thunder Snow. He is a fine galloper. Any horse that can win the Dubai World Cup by nearly six panels is a very good athlete. His Kentucky Derby effort was out of character. From my experience it seemed possible that when the horse jumped, the saddle slipped slightly backwards towards the rump. Such an occurrence usually always results in the horse buckjumping. That aside, the only other thing i noticed was that there were shadows of the grandstand towers across the track and quite often flighty types can get spooked by these. Either way, his performances since that day have marked him down as a quality animal. There will be no more Kentucky Derby for him though. The race is restricted to three year olds, and as such, a horse only gets one chance at the glory. Perhaps he will return to defend his World Cup crown in March.
I enjoyed this poem immensely. It touches on one of my prominent areas of expertise and your addition of the Xmas theme to it is very imaginative.
A wonderfully inventive poem. Very different and much appreciated by this Equine aficionado.
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dear Doodley... “defend the World Cup in March” would be exquisite. We appreciate so much your .. read moredear Doodley... “defend the World Cup in March” would be exquisite. We appreciate so much your knowledge as an equine
scientist and thoroughbred lover. Thanks
for your affectionate review. May your Christmas be bright and sleigh bells ring softly. truly, Pat
How I love the glimpses of past joys mingled with the sweet light of today. This sleighing song has always been one of my favorites, as were the images of Currier and Ives... and this wonderland world of words seems like an awakening dream.
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dear 🦉... I can imagine the sound of sleigh 🛷 bells when I read your review...
singing.. read moredear 🦉... I can imagine the sound of sleigh 🛷 bells when I read your review...
singing Jingle Bells in a one horse open Sleigh... or perhaps going to Grandma’s house for a slice of apple pie with ice cream. Thanks for stopping by and Happy New Year 2019. truly, Pat
Probably due to the incidental mentions of what, where and so forth: your horse - Thunder Snow, unknown to me (tho will research) reads to be such a special creature.. perhaps exhaling magic from flaring nostrils, nervously waiting for the of. Did he really run in a snow storm, only to melt the hearts of everyone who saw him? So well laid as a Christmas card, Patricia. Yet more 2019 happies riding across distance to you and your darlings xx
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dear Emma... it is really an honor and charming for you to read my poem about Thunder Snow. It is a.. read moredear Emma... it is really an honor and charming for you to read my poem about Thunder Snow. It is a fact that Thunder Storm is a Race Horse owned by an Elite family in Dubai. If you read Doidley’s review above you will know that Thunder Snow won the Dubai World Cup by nearly six panels... as Doodley is very well versed in the Subject. My poem is entirely from my Muse and did not actually pull my Sleigh... however it is a beautiful Fantasy. Em, you are a sweet heart to be so generous with your time. We love you so much. truly, Pat
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We should learn a little something new every day and - reading your poem about Thunder Snow was yet .. read moreWe should learn a little something new every day and - reading your poem about Thunder Snow was yet another lesson learned. Now, all i have to do is research a little more and then.. try to remember it all!!! Many thanks for your sweet words. Stay happy, warm and well, please. (Patricia)
Such pretty imagery. I have long wanted to go on a sleigh ride and this just reaffirms that I need to. A very enjoyable read. ~Jim
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dear Jim... if you do not have a dream, you cannot have a “dream come true”. Thanks for stoppin.. read moredear Jim... if you do not have a dream, you cannot have a “dream come true”. Thanks for stopping by to fantasize what a ride would be like in a 🛷 with Thunder Snow ❄️ leading the way. A romantic adventure for the faint of heart... truly, Pat
I don't know how I missed this one Pat, but better late than never. Horses are superb creatures, I love to watch them race. You paint with your words a most beautiful scene and Thunder Snow had quite a history. Too late for Christmas greetings, but not for New Year. Hope yours is happy and peaceful. All good wishes
Chris
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dear Chris... so lovely to read your review about Thunder Snow. I actually saw and heard thunder sn.. read moredear Chris... so lovely to read your review about Thunder Snow. I actually saw and heard thunder snow for the first time about six years ago here in Fredericksburg where we live. We were driving by the Rappahannock River... the snow was falling softly and I heard thunder. It was awesome. Recently I looked up Thunder Snow in Google and discovered there is a Race Horse named Thunder Snow. I love
Blending the two facts in a poem for the Seasin. May your New Year be blessed with sweet discoveries. truly, Pat
Visons of a once proud champion sashaying across a snowy landscape, the slieghbells chiming with the rythem of his trot. It is indeed a Christmas moment of memories made !
Happy New Year Pat !
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dear Bill... you have given me a gentle review that has touched my heart. I adore horses and it is .. read moredear Bill... you have given me a gentle review that has touched my heart. I adore horses and it is my pleasure to shine the light on all the Joy and devotion they have given us through the years. It is a two-way street. We need to show our love and respect also. May you enjoy the New Year.
truly, Pat
What a lovely, nostalgic write for the season. It brings to mind of a Christmas card or even painting. Wonderful choice of words and tribute to a beautiful thoroughbred. Hope your Christmas and New Year were "Currier and Ives" to perfection.
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dear Dara... you Avatar is so beautiful...
I appreciate your review... A horse and carriage .. read moredear Dara... you Avatar is so beautiful...
I appreciate your review... A horse and carriage is very nostalgic, especially at Christmas. Wishing you and yours a healthy happy Bew Year 2019. truly, Pat
Merry Xmas Patricia. Hope you have a great day.
Enjoyed reading you whilst waiting on my family to rise from their beds :))
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dear Gee... I am up early Christmas Day and waiting for my family to ruse also. It is a great gift .. read moredear Gee... I am up early Christmas Day and waiting for my family to ruse also. It is a great gift to know you enjoyed the poem about the 🛷 sleigh ride with Thunder Snow ❄️ pulling the sleigh... if only in my wistful imagination. Have a blessed Christmas ... truly, Pat
Reminds me of a scene from a Christmas card! Nice flow of words and great imagery. I liked it. Lydi**
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dear Lydia... the nostalgic memories of a horse and sleigh always come to mind when snow flakes fall.. read moredear Lydia... the nostalgic memories of a horse and sleigh always come to mind when snow flakes fall and silver bells chime. Thanks for stopping by... fondly, Pat
This was a great poem. It flowed very well and it was descriptive. I liked it very much!
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dear JungLee... lovely to share my vintage poem of a Sleigh 🛷Ride with you. May your days be Mer.. read moredear JungLee... lovely to share my vintage poem of a Sleigh 🛷Ride with you. May your days be Merry and full of wishes come true.... when you are “blue”. Pat
I'm not a horse lover but this is a beautiful poem none the less.
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dear Andrew... I appreciate your stopping by during this season of nostalgic memories. A horse and .. read moredear Andrew... I appreciate your stopping by during this season of nostalgic memories. A horse and sleigh and snow flakes falling always makes me sigh. Fondly, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..