Trying your Wings

Trying your Wings

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Clouds of Angel Arms

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On a beautiful September day you flew away 

from the water in a boat up to the sky... 

The Glory Hallelujah was heard for miles 

as Angels held you on arms of celestial smiles... 

Every flower that grows will be blessed with tears 

You will always be our lovely string of pearls... 

When snowflakes fall and bluebirds call 

we will remember spring summer winter and fall 

through all the years of loving a son who was 

destined to be a Keeper of Hearts... 



Dedicated to our dear friend Violet who lost her son... 

© 2018 Patricia Wedel


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Well firstly I am sorry for all of your loss, but with such beautiful words in his memory, he must have had a very special place in your lives and in your hearts.
Nothing quite encompasses the ache of such a loss, but im sure your words have and will bring comfort to those who knew and loved him.
Beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Lorry... your review is lovely on clouds of sadness. But to celebrate his flight is so
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Considering the scope of such a loss is immeasurable to me. Bless you for writing this out of love for a friend! Much love,Pat!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly Scheppers

6 Years Ago

...so true...so wonderful to believe!
Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Kelly... I love the word Believe. Even the ending of the movie, “Solar Express” had the wo.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

6 Years Ago

...and your's as well, Pat! Thank you!
A sad poem. Lost of son. A heavy burden to have. Somethings are difficult to understand. Thank you Pat for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear John... thanks for reading “Trying your Wings”. When we leave this earth before our time.... read more
such a solemn sad refrain Pat :( i love the uplift of sky and flight .. the hope of angels and the Keeping of Hearts ... this:
"Every flower that grows will be blessed with tears" as the turn is brilliant says i ..how much more can one say about wise living and attitude in just one line .. stunning says i! stunning
i am so sorry for Violet's loss ... is she still here at the Cafe' ?
E.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear E... your awesome review has touched my 💜. We met Violet when Roger my husband started taki.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

there is a Violet here at the Cafe' as well ... she lives in CA. and has gone through some rough tim.. read more
Well firstly I am sorry for all of your loss, but with such beautiful words in his memory, he must have had a very special place in your lives and in your hearts.
Nothing quite encompasses the ache of such a loss, but im sure your words have and will bring comfort to those who knew and loved him.
Beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Lorry... your review is lovely on clouds of sadness. But to celebrate his flight is so
.. read more
You are such a kind and caring friend, Pat. I am sure Violet will be deeply touched by your heartfelt words. Beautifully written. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Lydia... your gentle review is a halo
of beauty to be wrapped around a mother’s loss... read more
A tribute to my friend Violet who lost her Son.
He loved to fish on the Lake, but had a heart condition
and passed away while on a boat with friends.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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