Summer's Wind

Lost in the mist of loving you 

Lost in the kiss of holding you... 

The warmth of the sun through summer's wind 

the sound of your voice like a violin... 

The howl of a wolf entertains as dreams 

become a canopy of secret pleasures... 

Playful moments lie in meadows sweet 

your eyes and mine in a peaceful sleep... 

Flowers sway to lilting laughter and 

happy ever after... 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem contains so many sensory delights that define summer for me, starting with the ever-present wind (being near the coast). I love the way you pick words with similar sounds like (mist . . . kiss) and (sweet . . . sleep). I love the way you include something for all the senses. Loving, playing, sleeping, and laughing . . . your poem is filled with the sensations of summer love (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie... my muse must be an angel.... I woke in the middle of the night and thought of these lines.
You could have given me a candle from heaven, as I had lost my inspiration... so I really appreciate your review. You are so generous. fondly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Really happy to hear this & I hope your angel muse visits on other hot August nights to come! *smile*

[Sami Khalil]

"The warmth of the sun through summer's wind
the sound of your voice like a violin...

The howl of a wolf entertains as dreams
become a canopy of secret pleasures..."

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... our mind can capture the most interesting rhymes and our muse can be a bit naughty... it is uncanny. I appreciate your review and always your poetry... knowing that you have been gifted with extraordinary talent. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

So true. You are always welcome.

[Neville]

Oh' how this old geezer loves a happy ending, particularly when it follows on the tail breeze of such compelling verse...... thank you Pat.... Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville... an old geezer can fly like the wild geese across the oceans breast in quest of destinations of beautiful unrest.
I appreciate your charming review. truly, Pat

[Neville]

my sincere pleasure... Neville

[Gee]

And that is love in a poetic nutshell.....beautiful
Good morning Patricia

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Gee... a poetic nutshell is an omen of sweet things to come when sunsets colors become a blanket of passionate persuasions. I appreciate your review. truly, Pat

[MOON]

Expressive and full of heart. Lovely.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Moon... our world has untold sensual settings to enjoy as the seasons come and go... lovely to share the fullness of our heart. Be blessed. truly, Pat

[wordman]

sweet poem of love and being in love

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Wordman... a charming review... love is felt in the Summers Wind. truly, Pat

[wordman]

summer nights are the time for love and romance

you`re welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I had to read again. Thank you Pat for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... how charming to read your review of Summer’s Wind... a poem I hold under my chin... like violin sounds of a lover’s song. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem Pat.

[emmajoy]

Your poem is a cure-all, dear Pat. I've just read it three times and each time found a more peaceful, gentle mood take over- tis true bliss, luv. You've created a calm expanse of water, gently skimmed a stone across it then, sent me calm thoughts and a strong hint of a very beautiful relationship. Thank you so much for sharing your skill and vision. xx

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emma ... your review reminds me that still waters run deep... you encompass the breath of human kindness... to feel that my poem could bring you a peaceful vision to perhaps dream upon... is a gift of joy beyond compare. truly, Pat x

[emmajoy]

((Patricia))

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful lines Pat which are so uplifting. Such a warm and loving read. Hope all is ok with you. All good wishes

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... your review is as sweet as honeysuckle... after the rain. Thanks for stopping by. truly, Pat

[Laurierose]

This was simply lovely. This reminds me of one of those sweet memories we dream of. It tugs at our lips at night and a full smile awaits us in the morning. The speaker in this peace equated this person as their personal oasis. I love the playful ending. There was a sense of unity. I imagine two people surrounded by a world of quiet though, in the arms of each other, there was laughter in sync with the rhythm of the wind. Beautiful piece. Great read.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Laurierose... yes, Roger is my Oasis ...
it is lovely to be playful in the meadow of our dreams. Your visit is like the chimes in the wind. truly, Pat

[Beccy]

Patricia. In these lovely lines you have captured all that we dream is possible in life.

Without love, there is no humanity.

Beccy.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Beccy... thanks for stopping by... If you do not have a dream, you cannot have a dream come true.... Amen, Pat