Sky Writng

Kaleidoscope eyes... wings of blue...

If birds could write poetry with 

wings dipped in azure blue... 

our world would radiate feelings of 

adventure into seasons of the moon... 

When flowers bloom in glory borne 

with music played by troubadours... 

gardens become a lovely 

kaleidoscope dance floor where 

lovers breathe Je t' adore... 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

lovers and strangers flying together in an azure sky...there is glory in a garden of differences...we all have wings to fly if we do it with kindness...the sky will never be too crowded.
i like your one line, made me see all those birds and then Lucy with Diamonds looking up and admiring them all, wishing she could fly.
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... diamonds cannot compare to being able to fly with precision. Even the genius ones who design airplanes study the birds and how they fly. For the most part birds live in peace. They are our mentors and muse. Thanks for stopping to chat and ponder. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob, my husband Roger explained to me about Lucy and the diamonds... very clever of you... I appreciate the reference. Roger gave me the Title to this poem. as ever, Pat

[Papaya]

Patricia, this is such a beautiful poem.
The wonders of nature...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ana... so charming of you to review “Sky Writing”. We had a number of Bluejays swoop down on our front lawn, and then fly up into the sky. So many birds of color bring beauty to our life throughout the seasons. They find shelter and linger in our hearts as we give them seed to nourish and strengthen their flight. truly, Pat

[steppenwolf]

First of all, Patricia, I love the photo included.
This is simple and loving of the natural world.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Steppenwolf

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Steppenwolf... thank you for reading “Sky Writing”. Birds of many colors grace our world and sing music of exquisite melodies. They do write love songs with their music. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh how beautiful that would be- but their beauty already paints a wonderful picture of beauty love and grace without taking place in any other form shape - the colours beauty of nature is a masterpiece in itself- wonderful words of love and appreciation🌹

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... the birds are an inspiration... you are correct. I appreciate your review of Sky Writung, and I agree they need no personification. It is just for recognizing that we have a lot in common. Although they are not as political. For them sometimes they are free to fly on their own. truly, Pat

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A beautiful poem, Pat...

If the birds could write poetry, such wondrous tales they could tell. Of lands unknown, places seen, by only those born of wing and blessed with complete freedom. And the sky itself would radiate with all the feathered colours of their variety.

Again, you have written a piece dipped in the ink of the wondrous beauty that surrounds us. A wonderful poem. Soothing, wistful and delicate.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Doodley... I appreciate your wistful wonder of the ones born of wing... we are blessed with all the feathered colors of their variety... truly, Pat

[B. Boileau]

You've penned a perfect daydream. A picture a winged poets doodling romance in the clouds while singing love tunes above the gardens...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear B. Boileau... I appreciate your review of Sky Writing... nature is always drawing dreams in the sky.... truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Your thoughts in this poem Pat are so lovely. Totally drawn in by the first couple of lines. A beautiful read.

Thank you

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... thank you for reading “Sky Writing”. There are so many my signs written in the sky. Bless you always. truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Pat. Enjoy the rest of your day.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... I meant to say... there are so many signs written in the sky.

[Sami Khalil]

"When flowers bloom in glory borne

with music played by troubadours...

gardens become a lovely

kaleidoscope dance floor "

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... thanks for reading Sky Writing. Birds have the most beautiful feather pens to write in rainbow colours
to stir our soul. Sorry to be so long to reply. truly, Pat

[Lorry]

This is lovely Patricia. Seeing beauty in everything with kaleidoscope eyes. Sometimes beauty can come from the most unexpected of places, and thoughts. I can picture the writer watching birds glide and swoop as the wind blows garden scents all around. A beautiful picture.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lorry... forgive my lateness... I appreciate your reading Sky Wruting.
Your review is imaginative. I wish I could be inspired again. Inspiration is as fragile as a breeze in the trees. truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

That is such a romantically visual poem! You've told of the birds' wing-shapes in the azure sky... '.. music played by troubadours... ' and then, oh then.. mentioned perfume permeating space! You've used the senses in such a colourful manner and made Nature buzz with love.. sweet love. Brava, Patricia. x

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emma... the scent of lavender blue permeates the air as we breathe
Je t’ adore... I love your review....
softly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Perhaps, perhaps, maybe.. there's something in the air come almost mid.Summer?!

[Patricia Wedel]

Your words would make a sweet
Poem... truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Needing a quiet thought, will see what i can do.. if you don't hear from me again... am on my way to the moon! x

[Dara]

I was immediately captivated by your title and then your words just pulled me in. Very lovely, light and romantic. If only birds could write poetry, if only...... A truly beautiful piece of writing, Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dara... I am captivated by your review... Birds are amazing as they fly about like gypsies with colors and songs of encouragement and love... nesting in secret coves... truly, Pat