Prayer of Promise

Prayer of Promise

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Brigadoon a village in Scotland that wakes up every100 years

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A Brigadoon Nap in colors of Scotland 
where dreams are meant to come true... 
gathering Heather on the Hill 
with falling snow against a turquoise sky... 
Sleeping for a hundred years 
discovering love's tears...  

A promise written in a Book of Prayers  
"If ye love enough to stay"... 

© 2018 Patricia Wedel


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A beautiful story in the poem. Made me wish to read and know more. I like the places of mystery. Myth and tale. True or not. Allow us to transform to different era. A wonderful poem shared dear Patricia. I loved this one.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

Mystery, myth and tale... a poem without end....
John, you might make a trip to Scotland to s.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear John,,, thanks for leaving a comment. Hope you can see the production someday. You become a p.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I would enjoy this opportunity Patricia. I would love to explode Scotland.



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This one is close to my heart, being of Scot descent. I have no tartan to wear that I know of but I do wear my Donegal, Ireland scarf and carry my walking stick (I make my own) quite often. I love all things Gaelic and particularly the poetry. I bought my dyed in the wool scarf in a thrift shop for a few dollars. After researching it online I found it quite a bargain, selling for about 45 Euro in its country of origin.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Fabian... wonderful that you are of Scot descent. Your scarf was quite a find.
I have.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

6 Years Ago

I'll try to check that out. Thanks.
i can feel the magic and mystery in this,.
i've always wanted to explore the highlands and am such a big fan of stories and movies set in scotland
it just seems like there is something very special about it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Ana... thank you for reading “Prayer of Promise”. I agree there must be magic and mystery .. read more
Papaya

6 Years Ago

You're welcome Pat :)
I know the story well Pat & truly beautiful, that is why I keep searching....................Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Hey Pat cheers, I love ya like a fat kid loves cake.....N
Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

You are like Thin Mint Oreos...
Neville

6 Years Ago

Then I shall shall gobble myself up and die happy and fat........AGT's ...N
A mixture of magic and poetry, wonderful, almost could smell the heather, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Thomas... I am honored that you found magic in Prayer of Promise. We can enjoy magic if we rec.. read more
If you look hard enough, you will find it 
This often comes to mind when I disappear into the hills to refresh and reboot the mind. Knowing that with the weather and ever changing scenery, you never have to wait too long to find something beautiful and breath-taking. Even places you have seen many times look different each time you visit. Maybe one day Brigadoon will be what is round the next bend.
Beautifully expressed.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Lorry... your review is so soft and gentle... reflecting nature’s beauty. It is true that Br.. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Lorry... I just discovered that you may live in Scotland... lucky you. truly, Pat
as sweet as a lullaby pat, a soothing poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Andrew ... the best place to be is high in a tree house with a view of heaven and the sound of .. read more
One of the best parts of being on this website is learning about things I never knew. Your poem is one of these delightful discoveries! Your whimsical & hopeful message not only introduces this mythical spot with strong imagery, but it harkens to other "places" or "things" we can go to or see only occasionally. Here on the central California coast, century plants grow here & there, sending up one blossom in a lifetime (20 or 30 foot tall frond), supposedly once in a 100 years. Fun to know about your century spot . . . maybe I should write about my century plant one day! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Margie... century plants that grow so tall and blossom once in a lifetime... it seems you live .. read more
'.. falling snow against a turquoise sky... ' Have seen that, and, so very beautiful it is.. snow still glinting like glass even in August in the Highlands..

Your poem is a warm gathering of sources here, Pat., each making the whole special. Brigadoon, the place that arises every hundred years.. magical, mysterious and full of.. hope.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

6 Years Ago

Waving. That phrase just came to me.. love rainbows and when Winter gardens come alive with colour .. read more
Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

A Rainbow of Flowers adorns the earth ... when Easter Day appears ... “coined” by Emmajoy... fon.. read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

Laughing.. oh well, best i can do.. dear you!
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A lovely poem and a lovely film!

I grew up as a kid spending my Friday and Saturday nights watching the "Golden Years of Hollywood" and Mr.Gene Kelly was one of my first matinee idols. Such a dynamic, inventive dancer who I regard as superior to Fred Astaire, even if he never thought that himself. And Brigadoon was just a beautiful film steeped in a mythological tale told wonderfully. So, i do appreciate this poem, Pat. Your elegant words taking me back to my youth.

A pleasure to read this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Doodley... a story of two businessmen who wanted to go hunting in Scotland. They became lost a.. read more

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