Butterflies and bees

Butterflies and bees

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Among the anise hyssop long-blooming blue flower spikes

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Close to my heart on a garden path 

I revel in the sunlight on coneflowers bright... 

Butterflies and bees pollinate the blossoms 

where songbirds sing among the tall verbena... 

Hollyhocks greet me with passionate smiles 

Cardinal flowers and Cosmos beckon... 

as bees yearn for loves nectar 

A sanctuary lives where love remains... 

© 2017 Patricia Wedel


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I very much enjoy your gracefully-stated descriptions of many different flowering encounters in the garden! Good use of alliteration in line 3 especially. Since I'm a color-aholic, I kinda miss seeing any color in your excellent descriptions. But I definitely love the vivid imagery you weave.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Margie... I love colors also like a lemon meringue sunrise, but is lemon a color... Flowers and.. read more
barleygirl

7 Years Ago

I definitely prefer the creativity of "lemon meringue sunrise" rather than using the primary colors!.. read more
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

You made me laugh... I included that in a poem... If I can find the poem, I will repost it soon. Hu.. read more



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Lovely garden scene!!! As if we walked there too!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Once again you have delivered a Naturalist's delight with your softly flowing descriptions of the garden in all it's glorious bloom.

So many different flowers mentioned here....and many an amateur greenthumb like myself has never heard of! I shall consult my friend Google for closer inspection!

Another fine write, Pat. The Butterflies and Bees are living in a paradise on earth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Doodley... As the Crepe Myrtle trees in Virginia are losing their blossoms for the season, we r.. read more
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7 Years Ago

Thank you very much. But make that Spring for me! Haha.
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

Ok mate... you must live in Australia... it takes me awhile to remember.... Pat
I very much enjoy your gracefully-stated descriptions of many different flowering encounters in the garden! Good use of alliteration in line 3 especially. Since I'm a color-aholic, I kinda miss seeing any color in your excellent descriptions. But I definitely love the vivid imagery you weave.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Margie... I love colors also like a lemon meringue sunrise, but is lemon a color... Flowers and.. read more
barleygirl

7 Years Ago

I definitely prefer the creativity of "lemon meringue sunrise" rather than using the primary colors!.. read more
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

You made me laugh... I included that in a poem... If I can find the poem, I will repost it soon. Hu.. read more
Growing hardy Echinacea and Rudbeckia is a great way to attract butterflies and bees to the garden. Love the imagery here … creates a poetic cascade of nature’s vibrant beauty. Bless ………

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Phill... I appreciate your review and
advice on attracting butterflies and bees. If on.. read more
yes a garden of neglect is a reflection of oneself as is one of beauty. a lovely write pat.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Andrew... a cherry tree abides among the flowers providing nourishment for birds and people too.. read more
The fantastic inspirational flora and fauna that is available to all of us, you have captivated and expressed beautifully, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Thomas, thanks for joining us on our walk in the garden where nature offers a pardon from the i.. read more
delightful haven ...full bouquet ... scents and colors galore ... lovely walk in the garden
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear E. thanks for stopping by... a garden needs flowers for the soul where beauty blooms in spite .. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) ........................ aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!
A captivating little poem that delightfully expresses the beauty of nature.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Dale... flowers love a passerby who smiles and whistles a friendly tune. My flowers are happy .. read more
My dear Pat, you bring romance and nature together in a beautiful tapestry. You are a true nature lover! May sunlight always follow you and brighten your path. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Lydi... your mystical appreciation is
a gift that pollinates my soul with nature's best.. read more
An enchanting poem of very smooth imagery of a poet and an observant. You bring alive to all the senses and spread joy around to all the ages...:)...............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Sami... your review is like waves upon
a shore of gentle persuasion when souls delight .. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Whoa...you are welcome. ...::::))))

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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