Embrace the dance

Embrace the dance

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Iris adorn our garden with dreams...

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Iris love a rain dance 
in early May... 
with silver touches 
of memory... 

Visions of Mothers 
tending flowers... 
as Willows sway in 
wind-swept embraces...  

Colors of raspberry kisses 
and shadows of forever... 
hold our heart in 
Sycamore dreams... 

© 2017 Patricia Wedel


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May is one of my favorite months - being that Mother's Day always falls upon it, and it is also the wedding anniversary of my parents. I feel it's magical, always reminding us of the awakening of spring and all things possible.

Such a beautiful reading, and flower, Pat!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dearest Kelly... Yes, the month of May is magical... your parent's anniversary and Iris bloom... The.. read more



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very nice to read your poem which is written in memory your husband may he rest in peace sad to know but happy to read your poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear poet... thank you for your lovely review. My poem refers to Mothers as we celebrate every May .. read more
Sweetly takes me back to the days of my mom planting flowers in spring. Lovely poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Dale... lovely to know my poem reminds you of your Mom...
Even though I am a Mother I s.. read more
mmmmmmmmmmmm sparks imagination and memories .. i love irises .. i like the word play with vision ... this poem touches all the senses for me .. really taste the raspberry kisses ..feel the breezes and the sway .. nice one .. well manicured ;)
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

its just a beautiful poem ... your use of nature and personalizations and flavors and breezes and th.. read more
Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear poet... my mother was all that and more. So many footsteps in the garden of my heart. Iris ar.. read more
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) ...............
A beautiful celebration of mothers and nature. You adorn this site with marvels of poetry...:).........................

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Sami... you have laid a laurel wreath beside my poem for Mothers love of Iris ... May you hear .. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome. ...:::)))))
Your words take the reader to beautiful places and yes...sycamore dreams. Dreamy writing my dear friend :) Julie

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear Julie... the Sycamore tree dreams will give you a clear vision according to ancient times... yo.. read more
Beautiful. Your use of words create visions of wonder and amazing places. Thank you Patricia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

7 Years Ago

dear John... your review is like a misty rain that
nurtures the flowers in May. Leaves are .. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I agree dear friend. I love the warm days of Spring.
May fourteen is Mothers Day in the USA... 2017 with silver touches of memory, we hold our Mothers
love of Iris in May...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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