Lovely as Bareroot Roses
in Springtime folly...
She gazes across the sea
where adventures lay and
dolphins play...
The moon is golden encircled
in a haze of radiant light
to celebrate the birth of
a lady of great worth...
She dreams of apricot liquor
with the man of her dreams...
Born on the fourteenth of April
she tweets like a warbler
old songs from the Beatles...
She walks on the beach
with the sanderlings...
Her name is Lydia as she
jangles her lines of poetry
in lustful words that defy time
I can't imagine waking up and wanting to write a love poem even before I lay listening for the mouse to scratch from inside my bathroom wall. Or to promulgate, by the eternal laws of love, the requisite doctrines of beauty and rightfulness. But our dear Lydia stands alone in this conviction/. As a quasi revolutionary, I question it...But as another human soul, I honor it.....Great poem Patricia.....dana
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7 Years Ago
You are a revolutionary, Dana....know this....all romantic poem is not based in reality. It is flow.. read moreYou are a revolutionary, Dana....know this....all romantic poem is not based in reality. It is flowers and stars and light. I know all too well this is not the world so many live in. I hope someday my poetry will reflect the real world. I so appreciate your words here. Lydi**
Wow. A tribute from a great soul to another. A happy birthday wish to a friend and a talented artist. She will appreciate this wonderful one...:)..............
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7 Years Ago
dear Sami, a pleasure to read your review. Poets reveal feelings into words. Have a blessed day. .. read moredear Sami, a pleasure to read your review. Poets reveal feelings into words. Have a blessed day. truly, Pat
A well written and apt tribute to a tour de force in the Cafe!
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7 Years Ago
dear John... your review is a silver lining to the talent of an exceptional artist of words. .. read moredear John... your review is a silver lining to the talent of an exceptional artist of words.
truly, Pat
A lovely write Pat for a lovely writer indeed. Happy birthday Lydia:):)
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7 Years Ago
dear Andrew... thank you for embracing this poem for our friend
Lydia. May your days be ble.. read moredear Andrew... thank you for embracing this poem for our friend
Lydia. May your days be blessed with all that nature can bestow.
truly, Pat
Very rightly described ma'am!
She is the queen if romantic poetry. I feel blessed to be reading the work of all great writers here.Lydi the writer, Lydi the person and this poem of yours on her her birthday are all just awesome. I want to join you in wishing her.
Thank you for this beautiful write.
HAPPY BIRTH Day Lydi!
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7 Years Ago
dear Bala... thank you for your lovely comments to celebrate Lydia's Birthday. truly, Pat
I can't imagine waking up and wanting to write a love poem even before I lay listening for the mouse to scratch from inside my bathroom wall. Or to promulgate, by the eternal laws of love, the requisite doctrines of beauty and rightfulness. But our dear Lydia stands alone in this conviction/. As a quasi revolutionary, I question it...But as another human soul, I honor it.....Great poem Patricia.....dana
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
You are a revolutionary, Dana....know this....all romantic poem is not based in reality. It is flow.. read moreYou are a revolutionary, Dana....know this....all romantic poem is not based in reality. It is flowers and stars and light. I know all too well this is not the world so many live in. I hope someday my poetry will reflect the real world. I so appreciate your words here. Lydi**
Hemingway wrote, "my only regret in life is that I did not drink more wine." Here's to wishing you the happiest birthday ever, Lydi, and many more!
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7 Years Ago
dear Kelly, your charming response to Lydi's birthday poem is a wisp of extraordinary flair as bloss.. read moredear Kelly, your charming response to Lydi's birthday poem is a wisp of extraordinary flair as blossoms dance on her behalf.... truly, Pat
I send my Birthday greeting to Lydia with your poem. A wonderful poem my friend.
Coyote
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7 Years Ago
dear John... so pleased you could join our celebration for Lydia's birthday. She is the diamond sta.. read moredear John... so pleased you could join our celebration for Lydia's birthday. She is the diamond star of poetry. truly, Pat
our dear sweet Lydi is this and so much more... she enriches our lives with her poetry and her presence, I don't think there are enough colors or adjectives or metaphors, nor nouns and verbs that allows one to honor her... but I think your poem along with the comments of Emmajoy and Ana come close... nicely done Patricia and HAPPY BIRTHDAY LYDI!!!!
redzone
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7 Years Ago
dear Curt.., I love your tribute to Lydia... She is one in a billion...
truly, Pat
7 Years Ago
Curt, thank you for these words...this tribute....I am humbled...kinda! :) I appreciate you.
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..