Discovering Autumn

In the early morning dawn, when earth awakens...

Dew drops on persimmon leaves with specks of gold  

she pauses to sip the beauty bestowed... 

flowers entwined in her strawberry blond hair  

she caresses the day with a touch of a butterfly wing... 

Blue skies and pink clouds dance in the soft rain 

as she sings a lullaby in sweet refrain... 

dreams come to life as feathered friends chirp 

Brahms lullaby in tune with nature's quest... 

Reviews

[APOORVA]

Blue skies and pink clouds dance in the soft rain
as she sings a lullaby in sweet refrain...
dreams come to life as feathered friends chirp
Brahms lullaby in tune with nature's quest...


these lines are portraying a very beautiful heart of yours. very interesting and extremely intriguing

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Apoorva, I appreciate your review.
As the seasons come and go, we become
a part of the emotions of the sky and the sea....
bringing a portrait of love and beauty. truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

You infuse nature into most of your work, and I think that's what makes it so wonderful and warm!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... The colors of Autumn are fragrant with
romantic rendezvous of mysterious encounters ...
I appreciate your complements that melt my heart
like pumpkin pie and apple cider. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful dear Patricia. Your words create beautiful places and create perfect visions for the reader. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... I really appreciate your review of
Discovering Autumn... I love sipping the beauty of
Autumn colors. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and you are welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

Birds singing on branches of multicolored leaves.....such a lovely scene you bring us to, Pat. I could picture her strawberry blonde hair and see the flowers braided through the tresses. The imagery is stunning in every line. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydia... your impressions are always as refreshing as a
gentle rain after sunlit rendezvous.