Discovering Autumn

In the early morning dawn, when earth awakens...

Dew drops on persimmon leaves with specks of gold  

she pauses to sip the beauty bestowed... 

flowers entwined in her strawberry blond hair  

she caresses the day with a touch of a butterfly wing... 

Blue skies and pink clouds dance in the soft rain 

as she sings a lullaby in sweet refrain... 

dreams come to life as feathered friends chirp 

Brahms lullaby in tune with nature's quest... 

Reviews

[APOORVA]

Blue skies and pink clouds dance in the soft rain
as she sings a lullaby in sweet refrain...
dreams come to life as feathered friends chirp
Brahms lullaby in tune with nature's quest...


these lines are portraying a very beautiful heart of yours. very interesting and extremely intriguing

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Apoorva, I appreciate your review.
As the seasons come and go, we become
a part of the emotions of the sky and the sea....
bringing a portrait of love and beauty. truly, Pat

[Evie-nerd -befreind]

I love it and its very good keep up the good work

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A very lovely poem.

One can picture this birth of a new day very clearly in the mind. Your words are very delicate and described the vision very well. It made me somehow think of Snow White walking amongst all the beauty.

A very visual and sensual poem. And a beautiful picture accompanying the poem as well.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

In the early morning dawn, when earth awakens, dew drop falls on grass, birds fly high and writers likes us discovers that Autumn with style. Your poem is extremely beautiful and adorable.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sky... when you think of all the precious beautiful birds... it gives courage for us to soar. I appreciate your review. truly, Pat

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Thanks friend :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful, "she pauses to sip the beauty bestowed," as does the reader of this poem in his/her mind. This poem is so delicately beautiful, such beauty and imagery in such simple words. :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cyprian... your review is in tune with the gentleness of nature. I appreciate that you find the poem delicately beautiful.
Thank you. truly, Pat

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome :)

[Anjali]

Wow, I love the very first line of your poem
"Dew drops on persimmon leaves with specks of gold "
Now that's capturing the best autumn view in nature and putting together in words.
Your poem made my imagination run creating the nature.
I liked it and very well written Patricia.
Regards,
Anjali

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Anjali... Where we live there are so many trees with gorgeous orange/red persimmon-colored leaves and also yellow-gold leaves... It stirs my soul. I appreciate your review. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous tools of picture-taking you employ in words and emotions. A celebratory mood that rings the bells of timelessness and swings to the eternal majesty of the present. An excellent penning. ....:::))))

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... emotions of nature are timeless...
along with eternal kindness. You are the sunlight
that warms our heart with amber ambience.
truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Much appreciated. You are welcome. ...::::))))

[Ken Simm.]

I find this somehow refreshing. It is extremly visual and of course poetic. Excellent and dreamy.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ken... After so
Many years, there is still
so much to discover. The
autumn of our years are
sprinkled with gold and
reading your review is an
adage untold. Thank you.
truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

'Dew drops on persimmon leaves' - you captured me with that very first phrase..

I've wondered before and now must ask: Do you paint? You clothe your phrases with something extra, a hint, a clue, a deep or light tone...a difference that makes me, for certain, pause, sometimes close my eyes and see and feel what you've seen. This is lovely, Patricia, truly lovely.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emmajoy... You color my days with lovely
words. I have painted and hope to do so in the
future... to capture the light from heaven...
Wishing you the Joy of love ... truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Thought so... you're a true artist.

[Patricia Wedel]

Now if we can paint our world peaceful
with our new President Elect Donald Trump.
Thank you Emmajoy and bless you.
truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Rather think we should paint the entire planet, Patricia. If we don't we could blow ourselves to kingdom come. Must go search out my brushes and paints.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel a slight chill with this one...and embrace it...because it is refreshing...and when this kind of a day arrives here where i live...it's a golden lullaby with perfect azure notes.

on the other hand, some of us are discovering our autumn of life...and even though it means we are getting older...there is something fragrant about the wisdom and serenity that comes with having survived all the winters and summers we have to this date...

j.