Baby Swan and Lamb together

Gentleness brought us together...

As the world moves in mysterious ways... 

the seasons create a peaceful climate 

of affection and understanding... 

We choose to care for one another, 

although we appear different in some ways... 

Snowflakes are similar, but fall just past the 

time of no retreat, when we cannot speak... 

Overwhelmed by leaders we have elected 

who may or may not do what they said,  

when travelling the campaign trail...  

As minds come together, let us pray... 

without ceasing for eachother as trees in 

the forest depend on the other for shelter 

as well as birds to sing their songs of 

hope and peace when the storm clouds gather... 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a beautiful story in verse. I am in awe of the way you can write about so many different aspects of nature. And here, you link it back to the harshness of everyday life, which has grown even more crazy since you wrote & posted this. Such a gentle & relaxing way of perceiving our natural surroundings is a huge breath of fresh air, in our currently chaotic world. That's why I live in the boondocks, enjoying many of the things you celebrate in verse, & letting the free spirit of the outdoors inspire my writing. I can really feel your point of view (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie... we saw a Robin in our Holly tree... eating a red berry the end of January. Amazing really. I googled the phenomenon and read that as a last resort, Robins will eat Holly berries. We have moved into a community called Willow Pond. I suppose there may be more surprises. Your lifestyle in the Boondocks sounds like a quiet retreat. Thanks for your generous review. truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

As always, I love your observations about nature! Thanks for sharing that holly berry tidbit of fun! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Tom]

Nature is indeed the great leveller and perhaps these so called 'leaders' should take a leaf out of its mighty, majestic book ?

Beautiful imagery, expression and optimism in the words of this adaptly penned nature poem !

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Tom, I Love that leaders should take a leaf
out of the mighty majestic book of nature and ponder
their Constitution... I assume this is what you meant..
Thank you for your charming candid review. We are
nearing the finish line. The choice of Supreme Court Judges and
securing our borders are just two of the items that affect my choice.
If only we could concentrate on what we can do for our country
and our people. truly, Pat

[TL Boehm]

A lovely gentle reminder to keep our hearts soft toward one another- beautiful stuff

[Patricia Wedel]

dear TL... I appreciate your charming review.
If only we could create a Cathedral of
understanding to preserve our heritage of
Hope and security... Amen Pat

[Paul Bell]

Why do we put people in charge of our destiny, then moan when they don't deliver.
Only people working together can change things.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Paul... With kindness is the best way to treat others...
I appreciate your review of Baby Swan and Lamb together....
truly, Pat

[Terpsichore]

It's mankind that is primarily at odds with nature. The animal world is a better place now I feel.

Beautifully written.

T

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Terpsichore... It is our nature to secure
our nests and livelihood for our family and our
country. We build shelters for protection from
the storms of life. I appreciate your review.
truly, Pat

[Jade]

i really loved this especially the last stanza

[Lydia Shutter]

you are so right, Pat. While we might not agree with all things the politicians have to say, someone is going to win the Presidential election and we are going to have to put our trust in that person. We must try to understand one another and accept each other even with all our differences. Your compassionate personality shines through every line of this one, Pat. Wonderful. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydia, your review is given with
understanding and hope for the future...
It is in the awesome beauty of the natural
wonders of our earth that may instill a will
in the people to build and not destroy. truly, Pat

[Ruth]

How beautiful. This truly is a graceful flow of such tangible emotions and visuals. Decadently so :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Popoy... your review is like the colors of
Autumn in tune with nature... time is of essence
for our country to think of future generations and
what may lie ahead for them to negotiate. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Poppy Ruth, your name is so unique... and sweet also...
Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

The word decadent is a very versatile word, Poppy
and an education in definition...

[Ruth]

Ah, thank you dear Pat...many blessings :)

[1VJ]

This piece is utterly soothing and discerning, such a beautiful sentiment so eloquently spoken. I wasn't sure what to expect from the title, it's a match made in heaven.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Paloma, "a match made in heaven"... how sweet... If only
life could be like that... and sometimes is.
Our world has so much beauty and love.
Surely good should conquer the bad.
The cream rises to the top. Thank you for
your tender review. truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

'.. as birds to sing their songs of - hope and peace when the storm clouds gather... '

There's true insight in your poem: a mix of gentleness along with an awareness that there's been an inflicted abandonment of calm respect and true affection of and in the world about. If only the innocence we once knew wore the mantle it should, how life has altered in the interim. One can only hope, pray.. and wait.

A very fine poem, full of thought carefully placed.. rather a two.way conversation from both sides of a spectrum of mixed meanings.,

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emmajoy,,, As we wait while thunder clouds gather,
we share a closeness that peace will prevail. Thank you for
placing a mantle of love and devotion for our
country and our world. truly, Pat

[emmajoy]

Believe me, I, like thousands, worry for the future and pray for caution in all things everywhere - especially where are friends are concerned. x..

[emmajoy]

' where OUR friends.. ' .. sorry, must learn to spell.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Emmajoy... Life is a puzzle... an incomplete
tapestry... We can only hope and pray...
and encourage each other... truly, Pat