Wanting you wanting me

A lady lives within the music of her heart

When bluebells cover the forest glade  

and sunlight permeates my thoughts of love 

I pause to say a prayer of mystery and light 

when nature knows that time is eternal... 

When raindrops fall against my window pane 

and dreams invade my moonlight night 

I long for your touch of tender sweet refrain 

when the veil is lifted and love remains... 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me of how I feel when my best friend (RIP 4 years) visits me during a quiet moment of observing nature. To me, "the veil" is the thing that separates the living from the dead, which is what sent me down this path as I read your bright words of affection. These are the feelings I feel when my angel/ghost stops by to share what's new! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Margie ... there are more things to heaven and earth than we can ever imagine... It was a delight to read your review and share your insight of the veil that lifts our spirits to feel the glow of mystery. truly, Pat

[barleygirl]

Sometimes we arrogant humans can't admit how much we don't really grasp about the universe, huh? *wink! wink!*

[Lola_Bee]

this is so delightful, you write this so smoothly and poetically. this is a beautiful piece that awakes such romantic connotations

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lola_Bee, Sensibility is a reward that keeps giving....
I appreciate your gentle spirit. truly, Pat

[samparks,sam]

what sweet your feelings I like

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sam, thank you for your review.
May life be good to you. truly, Pat

[samparks,sam]

why you not add me friend, you still so busy I want read your poem and also review my poem from you. Please be accept me friend

[Patricia Wedel]

I am not accepting any more friends at this time.
I have health issues and my time is limited.

[samparks,sam]

oh! you can keep me in waiting friend list. Not good for me. I hope you take one chance more accept me friend just Please. : ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) otherwise you see Me as : (((((((((((((((.
choice and liking your. I can obey your decission.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poetry dear Patricia.
"When raindrops fall against my window pane
and dreams invade my moonlight night
I long for your touch of tender sweet refrain
when the veil is lifted and love remains... "
The above lines. Wonderful.
Coyote

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... I adore your heart-felt
review. Nature provides inspiration
for love and romance. May your days and
nights be filled with colors of love. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work dear Pat.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you John... I enjoy reading your poems.
I can tell you have experienced a lot of emotion
in your life, and I admire the way you see positive
things about romance in your life. truly, Pat

[danish]

Lovely nd romantic well i can feel all those emotion & longing of love!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Danish, lovely to read your review.
May your days bring peace and contentment.
truly, Pat

[Paul Bell]

Nice to see love in the air.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Paul, your review is appreciated .
May romance linger in your dreams.
truly, Pat

[Valentine]

This is beautiful. Valentine

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Valentine, I am honored that you like my poem
of prayers and light with bluebells on the forest glade.
Thank you. Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I give this 10 out of ten sighs. Lovely work.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Dale, ten out of ten, Wow!
Bluebells will touch your heart...
Nature offers a place to feel free
as a bird on wing... truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic to the bones. Bonding love and beauty in eternal bliss. Majestic...))))

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami, you have taken my breath away with
your romantic comment. Like fine wine,
read moredear Sami, you have taken my breath away with
your romantic comment. Like fine wine,
we sip nature's cup of the divine... truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

Like fine wine, we sip nature's cup of the divine.
truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................

[Papaya]

When the veil is lifted, so romantic. When all we wear is love and honesty that truth will be the ember that burns eternal. Your poetry is so wonderful and romantic. I love it. It feels good.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Papaya, "that truth will be the ember
that burns eternal" is a lovely comment.
I appreciate your review. truly, Pat

[Papaya]

You're very welcome. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Slendiferously romantic words, sweet friend of mine! I can picture a woman in a silky negligee looking out the bedroom window as the raindrops slide down the panes and the moon lights the night sky. Heavy sigh.....filled with longing for the one she dreams of...the one she loves. Wonderful. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, your review is magnificently rendered.
I love your adaptation of the lingerie... Truly enticing!
Pat